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mga masters eto po medyo in update ko ng konti....
sana gumanda na kahit konti...hehe kung may kulang pa rin sabihin nyo lang po....
first and second image(update).... salamat sa inyong lahat!!!!

unique architectural design! im not sure lang with the fence, baka hakbangan lang yan ng mga tao...yun lamang po...

good job!

the massing is there... the maps do not fit the design... at all... this is not what i'd expect from you sir... the bugatti looks nice though...

sorry to say but coming from you this is a bit sub-par...

ok naman yung design ng volumes mo. kaya lang yung mga materials parang dapat i tweak mo pa. my guts tells me to drop the black marble and change it into white yung plain lang para may contrast. (IMHO lang ha.)

i go with the masters bro,though very very good effort really,puro interiors lang me sa ngyon,someday magexterior na rin,keep it up bro!!!

uwak wrote:unique architectural design! im not sure lang with the fence, baka hakbangan lang yan ng mga tao...yun lamang po...

good job!

thanks sir sa pagdaan
noted yung fence

nomeradona wrote:ok naman yung design ng volumes mo. kaya lang yung mga materials parang dapat i tweak mo pa. my guts tells me to drop the black marble and change it into white yung plain lang para may contrast. (IMHO lang ha.)

master nomer agree po ako sa inyo kulang pa talaga sa tweak ...
naghuhung kasi ung pc ko kaya hinayaan ko na hehe...
pero alam ko maling attitude yon... next time more effort pa promise!!

thank you

qui gon wrote:i go with the masters bro,though very very good effort really,puro interiors lang me sa ngyon,someday magexterior na rin,keep it up bro!!!

thanks master jedi
......agree ako sa kanila...
cge aabangan ko yan!!!
salamat po sa pagdaan

dre wats up? honestly speaking bro ayos ung rendering. some mapping issues. ung marble is scary man.maybe you can consider replacing it with a more simplier marble. travertine would be nice or portoro. kakaiba itong post mo bro.

nice render sir... for me lng ung walls nia, 1st ung marble din ang pansin ko too heavy.. and ung other wall mat mo prng hollowblocks na wla pang finishes dnt know kung sadya mu tlga tpos ung sa roof ung mat nia prng old wood... lastly that car i wont use that for reealistic purposes... sna nkatulong ako sir..

cloud20 wrote:the massing is there... the maps do not fit the design... at all... this is not what i'd expect from you sir... the bugatti looks nice though...

sorry to say but coming from you this is a bit sub-par...

master cloud actually ung color schemes na balak ko ay green brown white at black kaso ang hirap po maghanap... kaya kung ano lang ang meron ako un lang ang nagamit ko... next time pamatakan kune talaga!!!

thanks... i truly appreciate your every critic

pakunat wrote:dre wats up? honestly speaking bro ayos ung rendering. some mapping issues. ung marble is scary man.maybe you can consider replacing it with a more simplier marble. travertine would be nice or portoro. kakaiba itong post mo bro.

thank you master!!! at nagustuhan nyo ung rendering!!!
mapping lang talaga.... thanks for making me realize... now i know wat i need to improve....

reggie0711 wrote:nice render sir... for me lng ung walls nia, 1st ung marble din ang pansin ko too heavy.. and ung other wall mat mo prng hollowblocks na wla pang finishes dnt know kung sadya mu tlga tpos ung sa roof ung mat nia prng old wood... lastly that car i wont use that for reealistic purposes... sna nkatulong ako sir..

sir reggie thanks din...
oo nga minsan kasi di ako masyado aware sa mga pinagla2gay ko..hehe
ill be more aware next time...
thanks.....

Putek bossing galing mo tlga yan na ipapass mo kei super mario? hahaha taena bro adik ka tlga.. patulong aah! weee!!

sir ! nasabi na nila lahat sir ang mga c&c pero as for me great rendering job sir!

france.. .. prang si ryuk nakatira dito ah ehe
medyo akward ng konti mga mattes
yung kolor blak n marble parang apo vynil na malaki.
render is almost there



sir jah pahiram nito "kindly check your horizon line sir" hehe o yan par

sir.. maybe the marble po sir... pwede maging plane cement nalng.. coz meron ka na namng brick work eh.. imho though... and ung horizantal lines, maybe needs to improvise... un lng po... on rendering.. ok na ok po sir...magaling.. i like the grass... its different...

humm... darcXXX hayup...
the black marble... humm..parang yung mga sa pang puntod men... imho lang... parng modern house ng mga vampires to ah... the bricks togethr wid the marble... hehehe
pero grass galing.. sana ay maturuan mo ako nyan...

Problema yung mga mtls mo bro, yung marble parang iba-iba ang hue, yung bricks, low res yta masyado... Scaling din ng maps bro kelangan ayusin...
A good try though! About sa colors ng mtls, you can tweak the color of any mtl maps you have sa photoshop, and change it's colors, para magamit mo sa scene mo... try mo bro!
Antay ko update mo neto

glass shaders seem too reflective.. IMHO love the realism, may wires pa hehe.. astig ung veryron

alvie02 wrote:Putek bossing galing mo tlga yan na ipapass mo kei super mario? hahaha taena bro adik ka tlga.. patulong aah! weee!!

salamat boss.... kinapos nga effort ko eh....hehe.. pero ok lang...

alwin wrote:sir ! nasabi na nila lahat sir ang mga c&c pero as for me great rendering job sir!

thanks sir 'win at nagustuhan nyo!!!! tagal ko kinakapa style na to...hehe

Jay2x wrote:france.. .. prang si ryuk nakatira dito ah ehe
medyo akward ng konti mga mattes
yung kolor blak n marble parang apo vynil na malaki.
render is almost there
sir jah pahiram nito "kindly check your horizon line sir" hehe o yan par

hahaha....
natawa ako dun... apo vinyl pang scale model!!!! oo nga....
thanks kapatid!!!

vamp_lestat wrote:sir.. maybe the marble po sir... pwede maging plane cement nalng.. coz meron ka na namng brick work eh.. imho though... and ung horizantal lines, maybe needs to improvise... un lng po... on rendering.. ok na ok po sir...magaling.. i like the grass... its different...

hmm... pagiisipan ko po yan... salamat sir vamp
sa uulitin......... ayus!!

ice wrote:humm... darcXXX hayup...
the black marble... humm..parang yung mga sa pang puntod men... imho lang... parng modern house ng mga vampires to ah... the bricks togethr wid the marble... hehehe
pero grass galing.. sana ay maturuan mo ako nyan...

salamat sk8rboi
yung grass madali lang...
pag nakita kita tuturo ko boy!!!
turuan mo ko sa glass... magkasakit ku eh!!! hehe

silvercrown wrote:Problema yung mga mtls mo bro, yung marble parang iba-iba ang hue, yung bricks, low res yta masyado... Scaling din ng maps bro kelangan ayusin...
A good try though! About sa colors ng mtls, you can tweak the color of any mtl maps you have sa photoshop, and change it's colors, para magamit mo sa scene mo... try mo bro!
Antay ko update mo neto

thanks thanks sir!!! try ko yan sa ps...
about sa update.... susbukan ko po..

Loozter wrote:glass shaders seem too reflective.. IMHO love the realism, may wires pa hehe.. astig ung veryron

oo nga sir... nahihirapan talaga ako sa mga salamin....
nasa proseso pa ng panga2pa...hehe...
but its ok salamat po at nagustuhan nyo!!!

i cant grasp the concept of your design it is overshadowed by too much texture sir,

-just use accent pieces on wall treatment sir, tone it down a bit,

-i see minimalist, brutalist, vernacular, contemporary,zen treatment on your scene thats why its a bit heavy poh,

nice render.ganda kotse mo!.
agreed medyo chopsuey ng kaunti ang design.mabigat sa mata at magulo ang testures nag aaway..

my 2 cents cabalen!

Loozter wrote:glass shaders seem too reflective.. IMHO love the realism, may wires pa hehe.. astig ung veryron

the rendering is good, great Lighting... yung composition Lng sir... saka yung choice of materiaLs... mejo overkiLL...


reaLism?
I guess you wouldnt see a veyron stroLLIng aLong that viLLage... unLess its in beverLy hiLLs...
i nice european or japanese car wouLd do...

maLa ICU ba? peace tyo bro...

buset..pinost yung gawa sa subject na cad! haha.. ayus ka tol..keep it up!

bro tama c ice ..try daw update bro tanglin yung brick wall into or just plain white wall... it will look gud promise.... ngayon palang kita kna hitsura..
kac ok ang concept modern kac.. try to make look minimalist.....

cis lighting very realistic, nice rendering din, fix m nalang yung brick at saka granite maps

i second to them all...
peace brother.