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Post by reggie0711 Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:31 am

sa makati ang site nito sa cash n carry...
chinese resto... with function rooms..
c&c are very welcome...
some problm ko pla sa table mat... d ko na mbgo ung output nia, looks dirty lng kse... bka my mga suggestions kau...


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Post by ytsejeffx Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:55 am

una na ko sir!........mapa interior or exterior galing mo talaga, ska dami nyo projects huh.
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Post by 3DZONE Fri Feb 13, 2009 11:31 am

sir clean rendering ok naman yung table texture mo ah...suguro adjust mo pa siguro yung UV mapping settings mo kung gusto m pang mag-adjust ng kaunti....the great work and brilliant 2thumbsup thumbsup wave
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Post by AJ Cortez Fri Feb 13, 2009 1:21 pm

Very nice design reg, and you rendered these very nice as well. The only thing I can say is that for the first two images, the lighting is too uniform. You're losing depth..especially when you look at the tables, they're kind of blending into each other. The 3rd and 4th images are really fantastic. Because of the contrast in lighting, you have clear defined areas.

Perhaps if you throw a different color of light coming from the circular cutouts in the dining area, it will break up the background, mid-ground, and foreground elements in the 1st and 2nd images....ya dig? keep on keepin on, Reg!

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Post by jarul Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:57 pm

yepz .i agree w ser AJ,,mdyo uniform nga,,pro ok parin bossing,,,
pansin ko lng,,,ganyan b talga mat na chairs o mga blotches yan?
pansin ko lng din ung ies na ngacast sa wall sa 3rd img tpos wala nmang
pinlyts sa ceiling,,cam corection din po 4 all images..segmented tables din ser...pro grabe ka pa rin bossing,,dami projcts ...super yaman ka na nga cgro,,
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Post by glensky Fri Feb 13, 2009 8:13 pm

a lot of room to improve on these images,
lighting is a bit flat ,tab cloth looks weird


reggie0711 wrote:sa makati ang site nito sa cash n carry...
chinese resto... with function rooms..
c&c are very welcome...
some problm ko pla sa table mat... d ko na mbgo ung output nia, looks dirty lng kse... bka my mga suggestions kau...


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Post by aldrinv2 Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:24 pm

Sir reggie..
Some comments have been said. Camera correction lang siguro on the 1st and 2nd image. Alam ko yong BG mo sa 1st image doesn't blend sa scene pero kung magagawan mo ito palitan it would be better.. God bless and keep on posting.
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Post by meiahmaya Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:49 am

dami mo ng pera bro painom ka nmn lgi ka post panalo tlga lhat na gawa mo bro psot ka po, 2thumbsup 2thumbsup thumbsup

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Post by alwin Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:31 pm

nice settings as far as rendering work is concern! sa design medyo meron pang maraming magagawa kung gusto pa nang mayari na e improve pero kung ok na th better para pera na hehehe! as for me GREAT 2thumbsup
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Post by Butz_Arki Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:18 pm

this are nice images but need some improvement like glenzky said..konting konti pihit lang dre..keep posting!!
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Post by celes Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:26 pm

my main comment would be the camera angles. i'd suggest make sure ur camera source and target are on the same z-level, you wouldn't need a camera correction modifier for that.
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Post by joeji Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:19 am

Pre nice sets of render comment ko lang ung lighting can improve pa. Suggest ko lang kung lagyan mo ng variations ung light para may drama maybe a little warmer pa. Saka if you look at a room typically medyo dark ang top part ng scene dapat kasi mahina lang naman ang bato ng lights sa top part, kung baga secondary bounce lang ang light na nagiiluminate ng ceiling unless walang direktang nakatutuk sa kanya. For your cloth model try using a cloth modifier para natural ang bagsak ng tela sa table taz
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Post by uwak Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:39 am

comments have been said na po....keep posting!

good job sir! i like it... thumbsup
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Post by qui gon Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:55 am

like the 3rd and the 4th image....keep on posting 2thumbsup
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:04 am

ytsejeffx wrote:una na ko sir!........mapa interior or exterior galing mo talaga, ska dami nyo projects huh.
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d nmn sir... mas astig p rn mga interiors mo... grabe drma... ska hndi ako mdmi project.. ung boss ko.. hehe!!
tnx sa compliment sir jeff.. tma b name sir? peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:06 am

3DZONE wrote:sir clean rendering ok naman yung table texture mo ah...suguro adjust mo pa siguro yung UV mapping settings mo kung gusto m pang mag-adjust ng kaunti....the great work and brilliant 2thumbsup thumbsup wave

slamat sir!! try ko nga dpt itweak ung cloth... medyo baguhan p kse sa gantong bgy eh... peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:08 am

AJ Cortez wrote:Very nice design reg, and you rendered these very nice as well. The only thing I can say is that for the first two images, the lighting is too uniform. You're losing depth..especially when you look at the tables, they're kind of blending into each other. The 3rd and 4th images are really fantastic. Because of the contrast in lighting, you have clear defined areas.

Perhaps if you throw a different color of light coming from the circular cutouts in the dining area, it will break up the background, mid-ground, and foreground elements in the 1st and 2nd images....ya dig? keep on keepin on, Reg!

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thanks for the comments sir!! i rili apreciate it sir... try to tweak the lights nextym... 2thumbsup
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:11 am

jarul wrote:yepz .i agree w ser AJ,,mdyo uniform nga,,pro ok parin bossing,,,
pansin ko lng,,,ganyan b talga mat na chairs o mga blotches yan?
pansin ko lng din ung ies na ngacast sa wall sa 3rd img tpos wala nmang
pinlyts sa ceiling,,cam corection din po 4 all images..segmented tables din ser...pro grabe ka pa rin bossing,,dami projcts ...super yaman ka na nga cgro,,
kip posting... thumbsup

oh sir tnx for dropping by... nagkabloches yn nung pinalitan ko ung ilumination ko ng medium to very low sa iradiance map... gahol kse oras dat tym... ung ies nmn.. actually nsa taas ng drop ceiling ko ung spot light... maliit lng ung space pero enuf nmn ung sukat kya hndi n msydo nkta... segmented nga po sir... praktis pa kse sa clothing sa max eh , d pa sanay...
nga pla sir d ako ung mayaman.. ung boss ko... hahaha!!!
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:16 am

[quote="glensky"]a lot of room to improve on these images,
lighting is a bit flat ,tab cloth looks weird


oo nga sir dmi pa improvements.. regarding sa design.. aprove na cya.. some minor detail changes nlng.. tab cloth wierd ba sir.. hehe!! d pa marunong gumawa ng cloth eh... praktis plng... 2thumbsup
cgro ngng flat sir kse ang instruction kse well lighted lht ng area ng dining...
tnx for dropping by... peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:18 am

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir reggie..
Some comments have been said. Camera correction lang siguro on the 1st and 2nd image. Alam ko yong BG mo sa 1st image doesn't blend sa scene pero kung magagawan mo ito palitan it would be better.. God bless and keep on posting.

actually sir wlng bg ako nilagay... 3d bamboo trees ung mga un.. un kse tlga ung nsa layout ko... inilawan ko lng ung mga bamboo sa ilalim... tnx for the comments sir... peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:19 am

meiahmaya wrote:dami mo ng pera bro painom ka nmn lgi ka post panalo tlga lhat na gawa mo bro psot ka po, 2thumbsup 2thumbsup thumbsup


sir d ako ang mdmi pera... ikaw!! hahaha!!
tnx bro nsagustuhn mo.. til next post ulit peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:20 am

alwin wrote:nice settings as far as rendering work is concern! sa design medyo meron pang maraming magagawa kung gusto pa nang mayari na e improve pero kung ok na th better para pera na hehehe! as for me GREAT 2thumbsup

oo nga sir eh pera na... pero improve ko nlng toh pagmy tym ako for personal preference n dn!! thumbsup
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:22 am

Butz_Arki wrote:this are nice images but need some improvement like glenzky said..konting konti pihit lang dre..keep posting!!


uu nga sir... ayusin ko pa toh... specially ung tab cloth... d p kse ako marunong... my tuts b d2 cgp ng pagawa ng cloth???
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:22 am

mushroom wrote:my main comment would be the camera angles. i'd suggest make sure ur camera source and target are on the same z-level, you wouldn't need a camera correction modifier for that.

yes sir noted po... tnx for dropping by... peace man
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Post by reggie0711 Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:25 am

joeji wrote:Pre nice sets of render comment ko lang ung lighting can improve pa. Suggest ko lang kung lagyan mo ng variations ung light para may drama maybe a little warmer pa. Saka if you look at a room typically medyo dark ang top part ng scene dapat kasi mahina lang naman ang bato ng lights sa top part, kung baga secondary bounce lang ang light na nagiiluminate ng ceiling unless walang direktang nakatutuk sa kanya. For your cloth model try using a cloth modifier para natural ang bagsak ng tela sa table taz

un nga po sir much better kung my drama ung lighting... pero gusto ko lng sna i lighted ko buong dinning... kse gusto nla maliwanag ang buong dining... still studyng p rn sir sa cloth making... tnx sa pagbisit peace man
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