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Pahingi po ng mga commento sa inyo mga masters in visual technique kung paano ko ito ma improve kasi paulit-ulit kung tinitingnan itong render ko talagang hindi pa sapat sa standard presentation.. Sana matulungan niyo ako mga sir.. Thank you in advance.. Scheme 1 pa lang ito. Mixed use building po. minadali ko lang dito ang design kasi target ko mahaba-haba na time sa presentation but still not happy with the result.. Same WF: S.u.>3dsmax+vray>p.s.

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Looks great man.

First remove the unnecessary elements like baloons and lamp posts. Add blur or opacity sa mga BG bldgs.

To showcase your verticals, mag-3 point worms view perspective ka bro with the sun behind the building. Afternoon or sunset mood with lights in and out of the building. I'm sure "they" will have sudden discharge of accumulated sexual tension. Yes, yes, AW!

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Thank you sir orange.n.green.. I'l try your suggestion tonight. Thank you so much..

sir panalo sa akin yung buildings and overall. balloons lang medyo contrast.

oo nga sir benj.arki.. agaw pansin yung ballons, tanggalin ko yan pag present ko. thanks.

napakahumble mo naman sir, hehe. e ang ganda ganda na nito e

masyadong high level kasi mga presentation nila dito sir jen_tol84 hindi ako mka match sa kanila, kaya ask ako ng opinion dito sa cgp.. hindi talaga ako masyado marunong pagdating sa 3d rendering, gumagaya-gaya lang ako dito sa mga master sa mga gawa nila..

nice design & the render is great as well...

It's a nice image already, over all. Just a bit high contrast. The balloons don't work, bro.

If you want a flashier presentation, use a portrait view instead of a landscape one. Highlight the verticals of the building, show more of a bold sky, with high contrast patterns of blue sky and white clouds.

Thank you sir ramzarki..
@ Sir Badongrodrigs, im glad that you drop an excellent comment and suggestion to me sir, really useful to us who struggle in 3d viz. i will work on it together with sir orange.n.green comments. Thank you guys for sharing us your knowledge. These are the things i need to know from you.

oRangE.n.GreeN wrote:.... Afternoon or sunset mood with lights in and out of the building. I'm sure "they" will have sudden discharge of accumulated sexual tension. Yes, yes, AW!.

Rogan wrote:Thank you sir orange.n.green.. I'l try your suggestion tonight. Thank you so much..

HIBDAWHAAAAAT?!?!?! ts, ano po itchura nun?

very good design and render. the entourage looks good already but the building looks incomplete.. maybe providing lights on the ground floor interior will improve the image by highlighting activity on that area, then some interior ceiling lights for the upper floors. Plus we must do something about the blank white area on the right side of the image, it pulls the focus away from the building.

nice practice sir... .. ganda ng entourage mo ah.. yung lobo kulang ng reflections.. tsaka tsaka napigtas yata ng payaso ang tale,, nyaha

overall more practice

nindot na kai ni sir oi,,mabuhi ka Bisaya!

lupet nito sir..