two storey residential building

share ko po woek ko sa max, di lang ako sure sa genre ng design pero parang mediterranean, cnc's are welcome

mmmhhh.well presented bro..i think this falls under contemporary....

arjaeboi wrote:mmmhhh.well presented bro..i think this falls under contemporary....

thanks sir jae, pasensya na mahina talaga ako sa identity ng mga building hehe ty ulit at kinorrect nyo sir jae, god bless

suggestion:
1. Improve your entourage
2. Improve your roof materials and give more displacement
3. Put few people and car to give more depth on your scene..
4. Mas mganda siguro kung white paint nalang ang color ng gutter..
I Hope makatulong to.. Nice post bro!! A little tweaks lang!!

Ok po ung rendering sir...comments po...
1. Mas ok kung vertical position ung wood m s elevation.
2. Glass nyo sir msyado syang nag blur pero pag na perfect m to ok sya tingnan.
3. Roof bumb and sidewalks adjust m lng po....

Post more!!!!

comments been said... poor reflection from the windows for me... tweak a little more on that... good job

nice work sir... i think same din skn mga comments nla, like dun sa glass not good enuf ung reflection..
dmi nla cnbi pampagnda... hhehe!! post more sir or wait ntn ung update base sa comments nla...

ligthing is good for me...
yung reflection lng sir..

overall good renders..


kip posting sir!!!

wow galing nix!!!!

laki ng improvement mo...

paturo naman sa roofing...hehe
great job....!!!!

yung plant box na lang.. dumihan mo p ng konti...

dear idol...
looks good... nice lighting... excellent mats except for the wood siguro baka bugbugin ng ulan yan not unless simulated lang siya... there are two red strips on your carport area; i'm guessing may car talaga dyan then dinelete mo at naiwan yung dalawang red reflectors?... maybe?...
the foreground trees upper left & right, seems like sa road nakatayo ah...
great work nonetheless...

Nice Lighting, Nice rendering!
comments has been said, attn lang dun sa main door bro.

Nice one bro. Lighting is very good. bawasan mo ng konti ang bump. too sharp ang image mo always. then putol ung shot mo, parang bitin ung pagkapresent. it's either you focus on something na malapit at putol or show the whole building. something in between is awkward. good luck.

galing rendering as always...
ang sakin lng ay bakit iba yung bubuong iba yung kalahati dun sa kalahati...
tapos bakit may dalawang pula dun sa garage?
bitin din ng view...
pero kahit ganun master ka pa rin!,,,

naydu hindi nauubusan a.. .. ayus ung kulay sarap sa mata,.. oo nga may kulay redlines ..nangilabot ako ...
ung roofing nlang cguro.. nagblurred .

nice design+render hehe passive cleaning o..

nice render po mam, add ko lang din sa comments, add more on the entourage.. add some distractions at back din po mam para di halata yung horizon line..

AUSTRIA wrote:Ok po ung rendering sir...comments po...
1. Mas ok kung vertical position ung wood m s elevation.
2. Glass nyo sir msyado syang nag blur pero pag na perfect m to ok sya tingnan.
3. Roof bumb and sidewalks adjust m lng po....

Post more!!!!

ty sir austria po sir austria

1. that was a nice idea, thanks
2. na stretch kasi yung geometry nung glass kaya siguru nag blur, try ko ayusin sir
3. anong bumb sir?

ERICK wrote:comments been said... poor reflection from the windows for me... tweak a little more on that... good job

thanks sir erick, okie ill try to fix that

reggie0711 wrote:nice work sir... i think same din skn mga comments nla, like dun sa glass not good enuf ung reflection..
dmi nla cnbi pampagnda... hhehe!! post more sir or wait ntn ung update base sa comments nla...

ty sir reggie, okie fix ko yung reflection map dun sa glass

Butz_Arki wrote:suggestion:
1. Improve your entourage
2. Improve your roof materials and give more displacement
3. Put few people and car to give more depth on your scene..
4. Mas mganda siguro kung white paint nalang ang color ng gutter..
I Hope makatulong to.. Nice post bro!! A little tweaks lang!!

thank you very much rob este pala butz hehe, notes taken, nagkakarash kasi sir nung linagyan ko ng kotse eh, memory issues siguro,

cubi_o: wrote:ligthing is good for me...
yung reflection lng sir..

overall good renders..


kip posting sir!!!

thanks sir cubi sa bwena mano mong comment sa akin

xxdarcxx wrote:wow galing nix!!!!

laki ng improvement mo...

paturo naman sa roofing...hehe
great job....!!!!

yung plant box na lang.. dumihan mo p ng konti...

ty cis , roofing ? hehe plane mapping lang nga yun wala mang bump or displacement hehe kayang kaya mo yun mas magaling pa,

sir... nice design... hmm. comments have been said. siguro sir ung mga puno po.. especially the one on the left side of the screen. parang maxado malaki. doesnt fit the image i gues.. imho... and meron din sir red lines sa may carportt... just wondrin what it is.

cloud20 wrote:dear idol...
looks good... nice lighting... excellent mats except for the wood siguro baka bugbugin ng ulan yan not unless simulated lang siya... there are two red strips on your carport area; i'm guessing may car talaga dyan then dinelete mo at naiwan yung dalawang red reflectors?... maybe?...
the foreground trees upper left & right, seems like sa road nakatayo ah...
great work nonetheless...

yes sir cloud tama ka, naglagay ako ng car kaso nagcrash nung rinender ko,kahit nakaproxy na pati structure ko, ty ulit idol

silvercrown wrote:Nice Lighting, Nice rendering!
comments has been said, attn lang dun sa main door bro.

yep ayusin ko po yung mat setting nung door, ty sir silver

bokkins wrote:Nice one bro. Lighting is very good. bawasan mo ng konti ang bump. too sharp ang image mo always. then putol ung shot mo, parang bitin ung pagkapresent. it's either you focus on something na malapit at putol or show the whole building. something in between is awkward. good luck.

sir boks ty sa mga comments , wow lapit na bday, borjer borjer borjer