Meeting room
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Meeting room
Pa share mga master this my second post c & c are welcome
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
I've been away for quite sometime but this is one of the nicests images I've seen in a long time. The careful use of photometric lights on those walls shows your skill and eye for detail.
Here's how to improve it even more:
The flooring's reflection is too perfect. It looks like there's a thin sheet of car gloss coating on top. Wooden floorings tend to have some sort of blurring (glossiness) in them.
TV Screen and the notebook screen. Right now, they look as if a printed paper is posted over them. That's because they look too matte. Monitors are usually made of glass or glossy transparent material. Which means they will pick up reflections of the environments or strong light sources.
Try to break the uniformity of the element placement. Break the perfect arrangement of the aerons, even the notebooks and pens look too similar. Put some glasses of water as you'd normally see in long and boring board meetings.
lastly, try to break the eveness of the lighting. Highlight a stronger light source. WIll it be from the opening of the ceiling and widnows (then lessen artificial lighting) or is it vice versa?
That's all I can think of right now.
Where's all the people??
Goodluck.
Here's how to improve it even more:
The flooring's reflection is too perfect. It looks like there's a thin sheet of car gloss coating on top. Wooden floorings tend to have some sort of blurring (glossiness) in them.
TV Screen and the notebook screen. Right now, they look as if a printed paper is posted over them. That's because they look too matte. Monitors are usually made of glass or glossy transparent material. Which means they will pick up reflections of the environments or strong light sources.
Try to break the uniformity of the element placement. Break the perfect arrangement of the aerons, even the notebooks and pens look too similar. Put some glasses of water as you'd normally see in long and boring board meetings.
lastly, try to break the eveness of the lighting. Highlight a stronger light source. WIll it be from the opening of the ceiling and widnows (then lessen artificial lighting) or is it vice versa?
That's all I can think of right now.
Where's all the people??
Goodluck.
Re: Meeting room
Noted sir, Thanks your time really appreciated.
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
panalo sir, ganda ng gawa nyu...
de3t3r4- CGP Apprentice
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Re: Meeting room
de3t3r4 wrote: panalo sir, ganda ng gawa nyu...
salamat sir,de3t3r4
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
Very nice render!!! Ceiling design can be improved.
anmarj1258- CGP Apprentice
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Re: Meeting room
anmarj1258 wrote:Very nice render!!! Ceiling design can be improved.
Salamat sir, anmarj1258 regarding sa ceiling yun ang gusto ng may ari arabic architecture kasi..well appreciated sir.
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
Ganda ng combination ng cool and warm light, comments lang sana wala ng mga file folders na nakadisplay they should be place in shelvings,
o.t. thanks sir v_wrangler for the comments,
o.t. thanks sir v_wrangler for the comments,
qcksilver- CGP Guru
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Re: Meeting room
qcksilver wrote:Ganda ng combination ng cool and warm light, comments lang sana wala ng mga file folders na nakadisplay they should be place in shelvings,
o.t. thanks sir v_wrangler for the comments,
Salamat sir, qcksilver noted.
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
By no means am I saying this is better. I just want to illustrate the points I raised above via a rough PS editing.
Re: Meeting room
hehehehe galing sir, V-wrangler love it.
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
very nice work.
hotarubi- CGP Apprentice
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Re: Meeting room
hotarubi wrote:very nice work.
Salamat sir, hotarubi
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
aldrinv2 wrote:like the mashrabia featured ceiling. keep it up.
Salamat sir.
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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Re: Meeting room
cool render
gorigor- CGP Apprentice
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Re: Meeting room
pocholo codilla wrote:cool render
Salamat pocholo
archmanlapao- CGP Newbie
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