Bungalow House

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Mga masters pa post muna ako kayo na po bahala ang humusga. Still practicing parin po God bless mga ka CGP. More power

bro yung background mo 3d ba yan o nilagay mo lng yan as jpg jan?

davens07 wrote:bro yung background mo 3d ba yan o nilagay mo lng yan as jpg jan?

@ davens07 salamat sa pag daan Sir. 70% 3d po and 30% jpeg yung tress background.

ahh ano pala software gamit mo bro?

davens07 wrote:ahh ano pala software gamit mo bro?

SU+3dsmax 2012+vray+CS5 Sir. parang maliwanag lang ba Sir? hehe.

Hey bro, gotta figure out which is your subject, composition-wise.

The problem with the image is that the trees look too good and detailed, the car and and bike just screams "LOOK AT ME!", which veers away the attention of the viewer from the actual house (which is supposed to be the subject).

I would suggest applying some depth of field that could reduce the detail of the background trees, and you could change the color of the bike and car, or veer them away from the frame and focus your composition on the house. You could also check other options for paint color.

Btw, your tegola roof looks wicked!

^eksakto si sir badz. super neon yun color ng car and bike maganda siguro kung dark lang para sa house mapunta yun attention or you can apply DOF. very nice render though very detailed.

badongrodrigs wrote:Hey bro, gotta figure out which is your subject, composition-wise.

The problem with the image is that the trees look too good and detailed, the car and and bike just screams "LOOK AT ME!", which veers away the attention of the viewer from the actual house (which is supposed to be the subject).

I would suggest applying some depth of field that could reduce the detail of the background trees, and you could change the color of the bike and car, or veer them away from the frame and focus your composition on the house. You could also check other options for paint color.

Btw, your tegola roof looks wicked!

@ badongrodrigs Maraming Salamat po sa mga comments sir laking tulong for future development hindi lang sa akin kundi ma e share ko din sa iba. well noted po lahat. and also thanks sa pagdaan.

hotarubi wrote:^eksakto si sir badz. super neon yun color ng car and bike maganda siguro kung dark lang para sa house mapunta yun attention or you can apply DOF. very nice render though very detailed.

@ hotarubi Maraming salamat din Sir sa pagdaan well noted

sir anong gamit mo sa grass?.baka pwedeng makahingi ng mga tip.
salamat sa pagshare.

scale ng rooftiles bro medyo malaki lang..

a_than03 wrote:sir anong gamit mo sa grass?.baka pwedeng makahingi ng mga tip.
salamat sa pagshare.

Sir 3d grass po yan. Madalian kasi

reimhedz wrote:scale ng rooftiles bro medyo malaki lang..

Thanks sir sa comment noted po and also thanks sa pagdaan.

a_than03 wrote:sir anong gamit mo sa grass?.baka pwedeng makahingi ng mga tip.
salamat sa pagshare.

It looks like the free Grass Pack from 3D Mentor.

badongrodrigs wrote:

a_than03 wrote:sir anong gamit mo sa grass?.baka pwedeng makahingi ng mga tip.
salamat sa pagshare.

It looks like the free Grass Pack from 3D Mentor.

maraming salamat mga sir..

nice render..composition wise medyo off nga..nagmukha kasing driver quarters house sa mga sasakyan mo na naka showcase.. i like the pebbles

ambient occlusion siguro sir para magkaroon ng details sa corners, lalo na sa bahay. dagdag lang baka makatulong

laroin mo nalang kunti yong glass reflection sir, para kasing butas tingnan..

ortzak wrote:nice render..composition wise medyo off nga..nagmukha kasing driver quarters house sa mga sasakyan mo na naka showcase.. i like the pebbles

Wow Salamat master "ortzak" sa pagdaan malaking tolung komento nyo po.

jen_tol84 wrote:ambient occlusion siguro sir para magkaroon ng details sa corners, lalo na sa bahay. dagdag lang baka makatulong

Yeah Salamat sa idea also Master jen_tol84 well noted po

arkidhon wrote:laroin mo nalang kunti yong glass reflection sir, para kasing butas tingnan..

salamat Master arkidhon practice lang talaga.

Bro, thumbs up ganda ng lighting, focus on the subject lang para hndi ma divert ang attention ng viewer, possibly yung set up ng cam majority sa angle ng house.all in all galing na.

lobusta_86 wrote:Bro, thumbs up ganda ng lighting, focus on the subject lang para hndi ma divert ang attention ng viewer, possibly yung set up ng cam majority sa angle ng house.all in all galing na.

yeah, Salamat bro sa pagdaan at mga komento Noted po. Still practicing parin
God bless

Galing nito bro...

creativemind wrote:Galing nito bro...

Thanks Sir sa pag daan.