Exterior practice

Hello everyone, this is gonna be my first post here & my first 3dsmax vray render. Been a silent cgpian, just observing & learning from our masters. Pa cc nlng po for improvement. Workflow: SU, 3dsmax, vray & ps

brad may tumagos na dahon.

kensweb wrote:brad may tumagos na dahon.

salamat sa pagsilip sir.oops d ko napansin ung dahon..

kensweb wrote:brad may tumagos na dahon.

tinanggal ko na sir

ay namali po yata ako napasukan for posting. pasensya na po admin.

ok ang mood ng lighting mo dito, para sakin cguro i-improve mo yung materials mo like glass, medyo reflective, make it more visible ang interior para madefine mo yung furniture inside. then put more vegetation para di masyadong empty ang lot, swimming pool handrail wala, yung texture na brown with strip hindi halata yung pagkainset ng bawat strip, looks plain. then yung flooring sa labas, lagyan mo ng bump, then avoid repeating the pattern para ok sya. grass is good, no lights on balcony? ilang oras ang render? good for the first. keep it up!

kensweb wrote:ok ang mood ng lighting mo dito, para sakin cguro i-improve mo yung materials mo like glass, medyo reflective, make it more visible ang interior para madefine mo yung furniture inside. then put more vegetation para di masyadong empty ang lot, swimming pool handrail wala, yung texture na brown with strip hindi halata yung pagkainset ng bawat strip, looks plain. then yung flooring sa labas, lagyan mo ng bump, then avoid repeating the pattern para ok sya. grass is good, no lights on balcony? ilang oras ang render? good for the first. keep it up!

thanks sir, noted. rendering time is 15 mins, medium lng.