Interiors of a 3 Storey House located at Greenhills

Mga masters, andito po ulit ako, Pa Comment and suggestion nalang po mula sa inyo. hehe. triny kong i-adopt yung mga comment nyo from my other post. sana po nagkaroon ako ng improvement.
Salamat po!

Workflow: Sketchup 8+Vray+Photoshop

Living Room


Family Room


Gallery


Lanai


Salamat po mga masters. more power to you!

not bad at all.. very nice setting...

malinis at ang ganda po maam=)..kasing ganda nyo=).tfs

nice set...

Nice design and setting, kunting ps pa ma'am....

ganda mo ma'am AO nlang kulang perfect na.

So pointers:

SHOT 1:

- some textures need improvement, floor tiles are repetitive

- exterior landscape looks a bit fake, try to vary the green colors as they all look the same

- the throw pillows on the sofa look like they are floating??



SHOT 2:

- lighting needs improvement, i cannot tell if this is a day shot or a night shot. the outside image needs to be consistent with your interior lighting. maybe darken the outside background more so it really looks like it is night time outside. Also the exterior parts of the building look like they are some sort of lighting which should not be the case during a night shot.



SHOT 3:

- needs more contrast, lighting is s bit too even and can use more drama



SHOT 4:

- some textures are repetitive like the stone wall

- the 2D trees in the background are inconsistent with your lighting solution, the shadows of the 3D plants should tell you how the trees should look like.

nomeradona wrote:not bad at all.. very nice setting...

Sir NOMERADA, wow, this is such an honor. coming from you tapos sasabihin mong very nice setting, grabe ang saya ko na. ahehe. mas lalo ko pang pag iigihan. salamat sa mga turo mo sir, actually sayo ko natutunan ang mga settings na yan. nadownload ko po ito sa website nyo tapos inayos ayos ko nalang.. salamat sir! super thanks!

theomatheus wrote:malinis at ang ganda po maam=)..kasing ganda nyo=).tfs

Naku maraming salamat sir. hehehe

james_iha wrote:nice set...

Thanks po sir james!

torring wrote:Nice design and setting, kunting ps pa ma'am....

sige po sir next time gagawin ko po, ano po bang sinasabi nyong konting ps pa? sa contrast ko po ba gagalawin?

hotarubi wrote:ganda mo ma'am AO nlang kulang perfect na.

aheheh.. salamat sir sa pag compliment mo sakin, naglagay po ako ng AO sir, pero maliit lang po yung radius, medyo nadudumihan po kasi yung client pag me malaki radius ng AO ko po.. pero salamat sir, gagawin ko po yan. ^_^

LWF wrote:So pointers:

SHOT 1:

- some textures need improvement, floor tiles are repetitive

- exterior landscape looks a bit fake, try to vary the green colors as they all look the same

- the throw pillows on the sofa look like they are floating??



SHOT 2:

- lighting needs improvement, i cannot tell if this is a day shot or a night shot. the outside image needs to be consistent with your interior lighting. maybe darken the outside background more so it really looks like it is night time outside. Also the exterior parts of the building look like they are some sort of lighting which should not be the case during a night shot.



SHOT 3:

- needs more contrast, lighting is s bit too even and can use more drama



SHOT 4:

- some textures are repetitive like the stone wall

- the 2D trees in the background are inconsistent with your lighting solution, the shadows of the 3D plants should tell you how the trees should look like.

Salamat sir sa mga comments, ill look into it sir next time, medyo rush kasi po iyan, yung 3 interiors po dyan sir kailngan kong tapusin within the day lang kaya po yung mga maliliit na detail na hindi pang architectural hindi ko muna binigyang detalye ng sobra.hehe. pero salamat sir, nakita ko rin po mga mali ko.. thanks

nice sets of images! comment nasabi na ng mga masters maam

reimhedz wrote:nice sets of images! comment nasabi na ng mga masters maam

Maraming salamat sir reimhedz sa pagdaan. Godbless!

nice render.. ask lang sana ako , saan ka kumukuha ng mga 3d model mo sa mga shrubs, palm tree at yung iba mong mga 3d components maam?

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mam, ok lahat. nice render, kasing ganda mo lahat..

joerem wrote:nice render.. ask lang sana ako , saan ka kumukuha ng mga 3d model mo sa mga shrubs, palm tree at yung iba mong mga 3d components maam?

hello sir joerem, salamat po sa comment mo sir, sa 3d warehouse lang din po ako kumukuha ng mga components ng puno sir, medyo hindi pa nga po iyang realistic eh.pero okay na rin po siya kahit papano..

vilpang wrote: ....

salamat sir... ^_^

quel wrote:mam, ok lahat. nice render, kasing ganda mo lahat..

ahehehe. thanks po sir sa pagdaan..

nice set of renders maam..cguro sa post processing nalang ata ang kulang to make the images more aggressive to look at..approve!!!

ang gaganda ma'am..

rccboinks wrote:nice set of renders maam..cguro sa post processing nalang ata ang kulang to make the images more aggressive to look at..approve!!!

Sir maraming salamat po.. hehe.. pag aaralan ko pa po yang post processing. thanks po!

tanting wrote:ang gaganda ma'am..

sir a million thanks po! ^_^

lahat na nasabi na nga mga masters....ang pagka render kasing linis ng kutis mo maam...

jude wrote:lahat na nasabi na nga mga masters....ang pagka render kasing linis ng kutis mo maam...

Ahehe, salamat sir, salamat sa pagdaan po!

tiling and background issues- background on the fourth image looks too dark for the scene..more on post-pro and this set will look more impressive..

stillshady wrote:tiling and background issues- background on the fourth image looks too dark for the scene..more on post-pro and this set will look more impressive..

Maraming salamat sir sa pagdaan at honest commeNt, i will apply it next time po. thanks

nice try maam! =) matanong ko lang po sa sketchup ba di ba mabigat ang mga puno at shurbs pag nilagay na sa scene? meron po kasi akong nakita na gumagamit din nang su tapos nang nilagay na niya ang kahoy ay nag hung up na po di na ma orbit. curios lang po ako kasi di ako masyado gumagamit nang su..

gln wrote:nice try maam! =) matanong ko lang po sa sketchup ba di ba mabigat ang mga puno at shurbs pag nilagay na sa scene? meron po kasi akong nakita na gumagamit din nang su tapos nang nilagay na niya ang kahoy ay nag hung up na po di na ma orbit. curios lang po ako kasi di ako masyado gumagamit nang su..

Depende po siguro sa lakas ng PC mo. dati kasi ganun din nangyayari sakin pag naglalagay ako ng puno e. minsan pa nga nag ba Bugs splat. pero nung inupgrade ang PC ko dito sa opis kahit madaming puno kaya na. pero yung mga puno po sa labas photoshop nalang yun, kasi matatagalan ang render.