THREE DOOR APARTMENT
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yaug_03
fidel
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THREE DOOR APARTMENT
>>>Mga master, this is my 1st post. I need comments on my drawings para i can improve my works thru rendering, i'm using Sketchup + V-Ray. Thank you!
fidel- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 83
Age : 45
Location : babatngon , leyte
Registration date : 01/04/2011
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
1st, work on the composition, 2nd try to frame your main subject properly (putol siya ngayon).
yaug_03- CGP Guru
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Age : 41
Location : Cainta,Rizal
Registration date : 05/07/2009
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
okay po. yung pagrender ko ba sir okay lang atsaka yung mga textures?
fidel- CGP Newbie
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Age : 45
Location : babatngon , leyte
Registration date : 01/04/2011
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
saan dadaan yan papunta sa taas? plus may nabangga ata yun vehicle mo?... additional view plus basa basa ka sa mga tut dito for sure mapapaganda pa yan...
JVT_Ltd- CGP Apprentice
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Age : 44
Location : Philippines
Registration date : 14/10/2010
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
thank you po sa mga comments ninyo. :-)
fidel- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 83
Age : 45
Location : babatngon , leyte
Registration date : 01/04/2011
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
Get the subject centered.
Scale problem, higante yung mga tao.
Floating car and fallen leaves.
Lighter sky.
Use high quality car model.
Improve road texture.
Lack of/NO post processing.
good luck!
Scale problem, higante yung mga tao.
Floating car and fallen leaves.
Lighter sky.
Use high quality car model.
Improve road texture.
Lack of/NO post processing.
good luck!
hotarubi- CGP Apprentice
- Number of posts : 717
Age : 40
Location : Akita
Registration date : 18/11/2010
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
since you dont have anything on the side its only a wall, why not show as one point perspectives...
betterman- CGP Newbie
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Age : 29
Location : philippines
Registration date : 15/03/2012
Re: THREE DOOR APARTMENT
ok po sir betterman thanks po sa comment... update ko po....
fidel- CGP Newbie
- Number of posts : 83
Age : 45
Location : babatngon , leyte
Registration date : 01/04/2011
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