BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
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BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
Mga MASTER post ko lang itong proposal namin sa DUBAI, welcome po lahat ng comments nyu dito, para sa ikaka-unlad ng gawa ko...salamat (nagsisimula pa lang po aq mag render)![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P8](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P8.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P4](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P4.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P3](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P3.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P8](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P8.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P1](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P1.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P4](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P4.jpg)
![BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH P3](https://2img.net/h/i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv129/oneal_02/P3.jpg)
Last edited by oneal roda on Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:33 am; edited 4 times in total
oneal roda- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
like the design,mapping of the roads i think you have to chage
archshade02- CGP Guru
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
archshade02 wrote:like the design,mapping of the roads i think you have to chage
cge sir ulitin ko yan...salamat
oneal roda- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
check the scale of palm napalaki ng kunti sir...
reimhedz- CGP Guru
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
ayos ah!
tama neal na repeat lng ang mapping ng road... galing mo na
keep on practice lalo na ang Pshop work.. ma perfect mo rin to.
God bless
tama neal na repeat lng ang mapping ng road... galing mo na
keep on practice lalo na ang Pshop work.. ma perfect mo rin to.
God bless
AUSTRIA- CGP Le Corbusier
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
what kind of tree is that? so huge
design is so fancy the colors so bold is it for the kids? or for everyone
change the back ground sky its wrong angle or just put vray sky
design is so fancy the colors so bold is it for the kids? or for everyone
change the back ground sky its wrong angle or just put vray sky
Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
try mo taasan AO nito ser. nice design
Neil Joshua Rosario- CGP Guru
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
arch_mirasol wrote:what kind of tree is that? so huge
design is so fancy the colors so bold is it for the kids? or for everyone
change the back ground sky its wrong angle or just put vray sky
thank you sa comment mo sir ( take note ko tong comment mo).... its for everyone
oneal roda- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
-out of scale ang palms try mo hanap mas ok na palms.
-konting improve pa sa mapping
-kulang sa lighting
-matitingkad masyado ang mga kulay
-konting improve pa sa mapping
-kulang sa lighting
-matitingkad masyado ang mga kulay
oby20- CGP Apprentice
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
IMHO ... im not really good at critics but i have to pin points some of things that must be put in considerations.
*color sceme
dubai is a hot place... in applying colors you have to think of it many times.. must take at consider that color affects also through the nature. in reality if i look at the bldg. it gives a hot/warm look. if the owner wants this color then its ok..I prefer low contrasting colors like gray, or neutral color white, dark colors.for color outlining,. depends on the materials used.
*designing
the design is ok..specially the center dome gives natural lighting.. but both sides invites sun's heat to enter through your structure.. huge window like this commonly used in bldg. that wants people to look through the interior..and this design more functional in car show rooms, car museums, ...
*the front of the bldg. consist of the lobby/lounge/info reception right? then the design in the exterior entrance was full of concrete .pavement I prefer you must design it well and take part landscaping ..allow the environment to be part of the design...by adding more trees,bushes,grass components it gives cooler impact through human perception. since its dubai a very hot place ..its one way of beating global warming . and it also gives a relaxation look.... .after the bowling.
*traffic flow
i cant really pin point the traffic flow cant see the detail plan ..but its ok..you just have to plan the traffic flow (site development) well..good luck on the proposed project.
*color sceme
dubai is a hot place... in applying colors you have to think of it many times.. must take at consider that color affects also through the nature. in reality if i look at the bldg. it gives a hot/warm look. if the owner wants this color then its ok..I prefer low contrasting colors like gray, or neutral color white, dark colors.for color outlining,. depends on the materials used.
*designing
the design is ok..specially the center dome gives natural lighting.. but both sides invites sun's heat to enter through your structure.. huge window like this commonly used in bldg. that wants people to look through the interior..and this design more functional in car show rooms, car museums, ...
*the front of the bldg. consist of the lobby/lounge/info reception right? then the design in the exterior entrance was full of concrete .pavement I prefer you must design it well and take part landscaping ..allow the environment to be part of the design...by adding more trees,bushes,grass components it gives cooler impact through human perception. since its dubai a very hot place ..its one way of beating global warming . and it also gives a relaxation look.... .after the bowling.
*traffic flow
i cant really pin point the traffic flow cant see the detail plan ..but its ok..you just have to plan the traffic flow (site development) well..good luck on the proposed project.
pandahorde- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOWLING CENTRE & CAR WASH
pandahorde wrote:IMHO ... im not really good at critics but i have to pin points some of things that must be put in considerations.
*color sceme
dubai is a hot place... in applying colors you have to think of it many times.. must take at consider that color affects also through the nature. in reality if i look at the bldg. it gives a hot/warm look. if the owner wants this color then its ok..I prefer low contrasting colors like gray, or neutral color white, dark colors.for color outlining,. depends on the materials used.
*designing
the design is ok..specially the center dome gives natural lighting.. but both sides invites sun's heat to enter through your structure.. huge window like this commonly used in bldg. that wants people to look through the interior..and this design more functional in car show rooms, car museums, ...
*the front of the bldg. consist of the lobby/lounge/info reception right? then the design in the exterior entrance was full of concrete .pavement I prefer you must design it well and take part landscaping ..allow the environment to be part of the design...by adding more trees,bushes,grass components it gives cooler impact through human perception. since its dubai a very hot place ..its one way of beating global warming . and it also gives a relaxation look.... .after the bowling.
*traffic flow
i cant really pin point the traffic flow cant see the detail plan ..but its ok..you just have to plan the traffic flow (site development) well..good luck on the proposed project.
thank you po sa comments nyu..e2 ang pinaka maganda na comment na, na receive ko dito sa CGP
oneal roda- CGP Newbie
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