I Need Help on this Render

Hello to all CGPians I need help on how to improve this output, Papaano ko ba mapaganda tong output nato,

ano po ang kailangan kong baguhin sa settings? any tips po mga masters

I'm using LAPTOP intel core i5 4GB RAM 64 Bit Windows 7 and ATI Mobility random premium graphics

TIA to all

original render



photoshop enchancement



Update using different angle sa Sun Turbidity 9.0 intensity multiplier .1 HDRI overall mtlp 1.3 and render mltp. 50




setting

check your curves....halata yung pagka segmented
view sana nang whole structure

Brew_ratz wrote:Ok naman ah, i think tweaks lng sa mga materials boss..
lalo sa mga glossy stuff, wag ka matakot mag experiment
try mo lessen gamma or increase f-number mo..

thanks for viewing sir noted po.

anensan wrote:check your curves....halata yung pagka segmented
view sana nang whole structure

hindi ko na aplayan ng modifiers ang curves, noted po sir, need ko lang ng tips kong ano pa kailangang baguhin sa settings

ayus naman setting mo by the book yan ..tama si sir some materials need tweaking lagyan mo ng blurri glossiness pa para d magmukhang glass yung pavement i think napasobra photoshop mo masakit na sa mata

repair your model to have nice curves good luck..

arch_mirasol wrote:ayus naman setting mo by the book yan ..tama si sir some materials need tweaking lagyan mo ng blurri glossiness pa para d magmukhang glass yung pavement i think napasobra photoshop mo masakit na sa mata

repair your model to have nice curves good luck..

Salamat sa pag silip sir arch_mirasol noted po sir

ayos ang render mo sir, siguro konting drama lang, like added landscapes or drama sa background, more trees or sky effect pa,
try mo rin laruin ang vray sun location, baka makakuha ka ng mas maganda position ng sun mo na mas maganda casting ng shadow and more shadow effect pa siguro medyo lumabo na ang shadows mo, para mas magkaroon ng contrast sa building.. pero nice render sir

check your composition... maybe adjust your angle or your view...imo alisin mo na lang "scooter" -- it direct my eyes to this ... parang ito ung subject

oby20 wrote:ayos ang render mo sir, siguro konting drama lang, like added landscapes or drama sa background, more trees or sky effect pa,
try mo rin laruin ang vray sun location, baka makakuha ka ng mas maganda position ng sun mo na mas maganda casting ng shadow and more shadow effect pa siguro medyo lumabo na ang shadows mo, para mas magkaroon ng contrast sa building.. pero nice render sir

Salamat sa pag silip sir Noted po lahat sir

ONCIRE wrote:check your composition... maybe adjust your angle or your view...imo alisin mo na lang "scooter" -- it direct my eyes to this ... parang ito ung subject

Salamat sa pag silip sir update ko to sir, Noted po lahat sir

update ko lang may konting tweaking sa v ray sun position

hi! kung gusto mo kita tayo sa batha. dalhin mo nalang laptop mo. maybe i can share a thing or two to improve your output. better siguro to explain sa actual para mas madaling maintindihan. friday afternoom mostly nasa batha ako. you still have my no. right? text mo nalang ako kung ok sayo.

jheteg wrote:hi! kung gusto mo kita tayo sa batha. dalhin mo nalang laptop mo. maybe i can share a thing or two to improve your output. better siguro to explain sa actual para mas madaling maintindihan. friday afternoom mostly nasa batha ako. you still have my no. right? text mo nalang ako kung ok sayo.

ok sir thanks ng marami tawagan kita sa sa friday,

sir isali niyo naman ako kaya lang dito ako sa jeddah..