vacation house (UPDATED) w/nyt scene

haluw po again..papost po ulit.,.1st exterior kopo eto.,.medyo mahina ako sa exterior kaya i need ur komment en crits para matuto pko.,,nkakainspire po kc mga exterior nkapost dto.,. kya gumawa ako ng simple house 1 view lang po try ko gawa oder view nya sa ngayon eto na lang muna ma share ko sa inyo.,.,pagpasensyahan nyo na nkayanan ko mga master i know maraming tips pa ang mashare nyo sakin bout sa exterior.,. tnx for viewing & godbless u all.,.

update ko mga master base sa mga komment nyo.,i know marami pa pde ayusin pkichek po para ma update ulit.,.heheh.,., tnx po sa mga tips en komment sana nag improve kahit onte lang.,.,tnx again en gb u all.,.,

eto pa po nyt scene naman,. dagdag kona rin .,.tnx uli.,.

eto pa

nice one maam..

ok naman ang exterior mo master carla ah...parang makintab lang masyado yung ceiling eaves, at harsh ang illumination. soften it a little, the rest, composition, pati grass ang ganda...all around ka na talaga.

looking good..i agree with ed, lessen the light intensity..also lessen the brick material..konting adjustment sa mapping na rin..the composition is just fine..keep it coming..

galing nman nito..i aggree with sir ed..keep it up maam. very nice output

At last, meron kanang Exterior! ang Galing! Keep it up!

maam carla.. ok na ok nman po ung exterior nyo din..kayo talaga maam.. napasobra lang sa humble... the composition is on the right track... siguro maam just the background try to change it... if u want try to put a background with lots of trees.. just for visual purpose... pero if there is an exact scene na sa village ba ito or somewhere else... u may want to put what u desire... maybe as of now.. the background's horizon is kinda shakey...

carla3d...mam ok naman ah...ganda nga eh....i'm with vamp_lestat BG lang ang problema...the rest are brilliant and superb...

waah, ganda lahat mula sa nagrender, hanggang sa nirerender!!! wala ako ma sabi na comments

hi mam hows canada?... scene looks good, play a lil with intensities... right now its really clean, details sharp, maganda... explore pa sa materials... sa entourage try grouping things together mejo makalt siya tingnan for now... as always practice lang ang katapat ng mga masters mam...

Haay...pati Exterior, tinitira nyo na rin Mam..paano na lang!

Few comments lang:
1. Work on the grass. The displacement is too much, why not try your Vray Fur Setting, afaik malakas naman PC mo now.

2. Proper distribution of entourages, lalo na yung mga plants..
3. Control of lights(Vray Sun ba to?)

Yan lang muna, wala me masyado alam sa Exterior e...

Wish you all the best Carl!

sumobra na ang bangis mo... at namamarako ka na
galeng nito carla..

post mo nman ang iyong wires at settings..
and inspiring us as always

ok naman. good attempt.. alam ko and i am confident with it, just give you some little time you will able to bring the quality of your exterior na parang quality ng interior mo.

just few cents..

1. siguro konting exploration sa landscape architecture.
2. play siguro yung intensity ng lighting.
3. work out the grass. i think yung scale ng map is a bit high (of course base ko to sa SU displacement)

4. siguro find more suitable camera angle.

ganda po..cguro sa design na lang maam..sana yung may 2 variation ka ng finishes sa wall..or maybe ganyan tlga mga design sa aborad like canada?heheh..pero ayus po cya!

galing khit bago pa lamang sa exterior . ...nsabi npo nila lahat

djayboy007 wrote:nice one maam..

sir tnx po sa pagdaan.,.

by kurdaps! on Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:42 pm
Haay...pati Exterior, tinitira nyo na rin Mam..paano na lang! peace man

Few comments lang:
1. Work on the grass. The displacement is too much, why not try your Vray Fur Setting, afaik malakas naman PC mo now. Suspect

2. Proper distribution of entourages, lalo na yung mga plants..
3. Control of lights(Vray Sun ba to?)

Yan lang muna, wala me masyado alam sa Exterior e... Laughin
Wish you all the best Carl! cher

sir daps tnx po.,. noted lahat yan.,oo nga no vray fur kaso sir naiinip ako dun pag nirerender lalo na maraming grass yan heheh pero try ko po sir.,yup vray sun dko talaga makuha ung taste na want ko nid more praktis pko.,.tnx ulit wait uupdate ko kagad to.,.,

by dickie_ilagan on Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:49 pm
sumobra na ang bangis mo... at namamarako ka na
galeng nito carla..

post mo nman ang iyong wires at settings..
and inspiring us as always

sir hnd naman po kita nyo naman dami error.,. update ko kagad sory now lang reply bc po kc.,.cge sir try ko ayusin ung wire en settings popost ko nalang dto,..tnx ulit ingat.,.


by nomeradona on Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:52 pm
ok naman. good attempt.. alam ko and i am confident with it, just give you some little time you will able to bring the quality of your exterior na parang quality ng interior mo.

just few cents..

1. siguro konting exploration sa landscape architecture.
2. play siguro yung intensity ng lighting.
3. work out the grass. i think yung scale ng map is a bit high (of course base ko to sa SU displacement)

4. siguro find more suitable camera angle.

tnx alot master.,.inonote ko lahat yan.,. update ko to kagad.,.salamat ulit sir en tnx sa mga tips laking tulong yan.,.,

by basky07 on Sat Jan 31, 2009 10:35 am
ganda po..cguro sa design na lang maam..sana yung may 2 variation ka ng finishes sa wall..or maybe ganyan tlga mga design sa aborad like canada?heheh..pero ayus po cya!

tnx sir basky.,.actually personal work ko lang to.,.kumuha lang me idea bout sa mga finishes dto.,. usually dto mga bricks stone en shingles..,noted po lahat sir.,.salamat po ingat.,.

by blackmaled on Sat Jan 31, 2009 11:46 am
galing khit bago pa lamang sa exterior hippie . ...nsabi npo nila lahat

sir blackmaled tnx po sa pagdaan.,., dami pa po error noted po lahat ng komment.,.,update ko nalang kagad.,.,ingat po.,.,

arkiedmund wrote:ok naman ang exterior mo master carla ah...parang makintab lang masyado yung ceiling eaves, at harsh ang illumination. soften it a little, the rest, composition, pati grass ang ganda...all around ka na talaga.

tnx sir ed noted po lahat yan napasobra pa sa ps.,.,.ingat po update ko kagad.,.,

tnx kuya sid.,.noted po update ko kabad.,.,salamat sa pagsilip ingat po.,.,

sir aa_meneses tnx po.,. agree din po ako kaya noted po lahat.,,ingat po.,.

sir silvercrown tnx po sa pagdaan.,.,oo nga meron na pero dami parin error.,.,nid more pako praktis.,., ingat po jan .,.,

sir vamp_lestat tnx po at sa magandang komento nyo.,.hnd naman po.,.,dami nga error eh! vacation haws sa province not in village.,praktis ko lang po.,.noted po lahat yan ingat po sir.,.,

sir 3dzone tnx po sa pagdaan.,.at naibigan nyo kahit dami error.,.,update ko kagad sir ingat po.,.,

sir alwin tnx po sa pagdaan.,., dami nga pde ikoment sir.,. wag po kayo mahiya magsabi para maimprove kopa exterior ko.,.ingat po.,.,

sir cloud musta po?.,., ok lang naman ako dto enjoy na pero dati malungkot.,.,heheh noted po yan sir tnx po sa koment en suggest nyo laking tulong skin po ito ingat po.,.,

agree ako sa lahat ng comments practice lang ng practice ma'am... you deserve it! napakasipag mo kaya palupit ng palupit ang output ma'am

mapa interior man o mapa exterior, malupit ka talaga carla! astig to. keep it up!

kietsmark wrote:agree ako sa lahat ng comments practice lang ng practice ma'am... you deserve it! napakasipag mo kaya palupit ng palupit ang output ma'am

mitch tnx ha agree din ako.,. hehehe.,.,nku hnd naman po mas masipag ka sir ahihihi.,., tama mkukuha ko rin to dahil sa tulong nyo dto.,. tnx ingat gb.,.,

bokkins wrote:mapa interior man o mapa exterior, malupit ka talaga carla! astig to. keep it up!

sir tnx po.,. hnd po sa exterior dami pa po error.,.nid more praktis talaga para makasabay sa inyo.,.heheh.,., tnx ulit sir ingat po en gb.,.!

mas maganda update ate.

nomeradona wrote:mas maganda update ate.

sgrdo ka sir?hehe parang hnd eh.,.try ko gawan ng nyt scene kuya.,.,salamat master sa mga suggest en komment.,, nkatulong un ng malaki.,.ingat po.,.,

ganda po mam... ayan di lang pala kay pang interior, pang exterior din, I like the grass of the second image. rendering and lighting wise superb

ang galing naman ng update mo....parang titigil nalang akong magrender...sa 5 yrs ko, di ko pa nagagawa yang ganyan kalupit....