3 storey modern minimalist concepthouse3 (Updated 3)New scene and DOF

Hi Cgp.... Dati ko pang minodel ito ngayon ko lang nairender. Isang concept house na naman.... Naiinspire kasi ako sa mga gawa ng masters dito sa CGP.... Comment naman po kayo para ma improve pa po mga gawa ko.... Cad,max,vray,ps...





As per comment ni sir bokkins.... Update ko ang grass....

Updated with BG sky na...

kakagigil ka talaga idol heheheh master of minimalist.
sky mo na lang cguro idol kasi plain lang sya eh...

wow sir nice yung composition mo dito lalo na yung design.. mas maganda pag may vignette at konting bloom effect sir.. I guess EA ito..

wo wo wo wo! gagagaling sir!!! nice composition!!!

Add dirts , and change the BG.Nice composition.

Love the cantilevers.. Siguro kaunting contrast lang for me..

wow i love it. minimalist

design & render....like ....

superb

comments ko lang:

1. as yaug mentioned, dirt pass and change the background.
2. foliage in general is good but the grass needs improvement - mas random sa scale siguro (slight lang) and the color looks dark.
3. i think you need to work on your materials. ung white wall, too glowy. in general most materials look flat - siguro add some glossiness values to the wood, slight bumps on the walls, etc
4. vertical and horizontal camera corrections on some of the camera views.

arkiranz06 wrote:kakagigil ka talaga idol heheheh master of minimalist.
sky mo na lang cguro idol kasi plain lang sya eh...

Salamat sir arkiranz.... Noted po yan sir.... Vraysky lang po kasi yan... Try to change it in my updates....

mokong wrote:wow sir nice yung composition mo dito lalo na yung design.. mas maganda pag may vignette at konting bloom effect sir.. I guess EA ito..

Salamat dun sa ginawa mo sir.... Pano mo ginawa yun sir?

RETAKS_06 wrote:wo wo wo wo! gagagaling sir!!! nice composition!!!

Salamat sir Retaks.....

yaug_03 wrote:Add dirts , and change the BG.Nice composition.

Noted po yan sir.... Salamat sa comment sir.....

cloud20 wrote:Love the cantilevers.. Siguro kaunting contrast lang for me..

Salamat master cloud.... Noted din po yan....

zromel wrote:wow i love it. minimalist

Thanks zromel.....

vilpang wrote:design & render....like ....

Salamat sir vilpang.....

archshade02 wrote:superb

Salamat sir archshade.....

celes wrote:comments ko lang:

1. as yaug mentioned, dirt pass and change the background.
2. foliage in general is good but the grass needs improvement - mas random sa scale siguro (slight lang) and the color looks dark.
3. i think you need to work on your materials. ung white wall, too glowy. in general most materials look flat - siguro add some glossiness values to the wood, slight bumps on the walls, etc
4. vertical and horizontal camera corrections on some of the camera views.

Noted po yan sir... Ill try to work and improve on all of the things uv mention master.... Salamat sa comment sir ....

nice render and composition i just want to comment on how to maximized spaces or probably the owner wanted that way. sayang kc you have a decent size lot. anyway good job i like the style!

arkibons wrote:nice render and composition i just want to comment on how to maximized spaces or probably the owner wanted that way. sayang kc you have a decent size lot. anyway good job i like the style!

Salamat sir arkibons.... Noted po yan sir...

ganda sir! add ng konting dirt

superlike . clouds na lang sir hanap ka ng magandang exr or hdri.

hanep!,.astig talaga mga gawa mo sir agda!,.

for me, wala akong masabi sir, ang ganda po...