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Post by xtianatix Wed Oct 12, 2011 9:11 pm

hello CGP!

This is my first post since i joined this wonderful site.
I should say na marami akong natutunan sa mga generous people dito especially kay sir nomeradona for sharing his knowledge about SU-Vray. (mas sanay kasi ako gumamit ng Sketch-up)

This is my recent model and render. designed by my boss. comments and criticisms are very much welcome for further improvements. thanks in advance guys. :-)

Workflow: Sketch-up 8 -- Vray 1.49.01 -- Photoshop CS3

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pasensya na po sa minor errors. tirahin nyo na. :-P
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Post by cloud20 Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:07 pm

--the fountain sticks out like a sore thumb..
--vertical check would be nice..
--the car isn't that nice to merit a close-up, it lacks details & the plate number looks really forced..
--a bit more work on the grass..
--furniture material on the first two images missing?..

--nice design, pretty good GI, well executed framing if not for the verticals..
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Post by xtianatix Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:31 pm

cloud20 wrote:--the fountain sticks out like a sore thumb..
--vertical check would be nice..
--the car isn't that nice to merit a close-up, it lacks details & the plate number looks really forced..
--a bit more work on the grass..
--furniture material on the first two images missing?..

--nice design, pretty good GI, well executed framing if not for the verticals..


thanks for the comments sir cloud. Very Happy
hirap po talaga ako ma-achieve 'yung realistic fountain effect sa SU-Vray. hehe.
wala din po kasi masyadong detailed cars sa SU. (sana may makapgbigay ng link kung meron man.)
honest mistake po 'yung sa grass. di ko na-tweek 'yung displacement. hehe.
i just tried to change the furniture materials on the 3rd image sir kung bagay.

i'll try to post some updates soon. thanks again sir. 2thumbsup
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Post by bing1370 Thu Oct 13, 2011 12:02 am

Comments is there already, just work with it. gdluck
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Post by Guest Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:48 am

>>for me maganda sir,,..galing sir..maliit nalang ang kulang keep up the great work..

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Post by xtianatix Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:24 pm

bing1370 wrote:Comments is there already, just work with it. gdluck

thanks sir. noted po lahat ng comments. 2thumbsup
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Post by xtianatix Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:26 pm

[quote="lostinsight"]>>for me maganda sir,,..galing sir..maliit nalang ang kulang keep up the great w

thanks for the compliment sir. konting practice pa. Smile
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