private pool house(updated)

proposed resthouse, practice na rin sa water galing sa tuts ni master z at sir nomer...pa cnc na lang po for improvement..thanks and have a nice day to all cgpians..
su8+vrsu+ps.


update scene 1




update scene 2

lights....lights...lights

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Texture is very good lalo a sa wood. Kailangan mo pa ipost-process ang overall mood. Kulang pa sa illumination at color tone. Pool wall needs alot of work. This kind of water is Manila Bay area, same character ang makikita mo sa may Ocean Park. Murky at maalon.

Suggestion ko sa pool are:
1. Lagyan mo ng blue tile walls.
2. Lessen mo ang bump/wave. Very calm lang dapat. May konting distortion lang.
3. make it mo transparent para kita ang refraction at reflection at the same time. Ilawan mo if you like, It will help brighten the scene.
4. Maglagay ka ng rectangular vraylight right above the surface and color it blue para mailawan nya ng blue ang bahay. Then make the lights inside the house warm white or yellow na.
5. Dagdag ka ng folded umbrellas siguro sa tabi ng 2 chairs to cover the white walls.

I guess that's it. Good luck!

bokkins wrote:Texture is very good lalo a sa wood. Kailangan mo pa ipost-process ang overall mood. Kulang pa sa illumination at color tone. Pool wall needs alot of work. This kind of water is Manila Bay area, same character ang makikita mo sa may Ocean Park. Murky at maalon.

Suggestion ko sa pool are:
1. Lagyan mo ng blue tile walls.
2. Lessen mo ang bump/wave. Very calm lang dapat. May konting distortion lang.
3. make it mo transparent para kita ang refraction at reflection at the same time. Ilawan mo if you like, It will help brighten the scene.
4. Maglagay ka ng rectangular vraylight right above the surface and color it blue para mailawan nya ng blue ang bahay. Then make the lights inside the house warm white or yellow na.
5. Dagdag ka ng folded umbrellas siguro sa tabi ng 2 chairs to cover the white walls.

I guess that's it. Good luck!

salamat sa mga tips sir bokkins, malaking tulong po ito sa akin..

aesonck wrote: lights....lights...lights

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salamat sa sir..

nice render sir!!! medyo konting adjustment nlang...

nice sir

Nice render, nasabi na mga comments work more on the water on pool.

nasabi na ang comment ni sir bookins,ang sa akin lang is i modern mo ang building pa.imho lang sir

ayus sir galing.

salamat sa mga comment mga master..

Try mo iupdate to para makita natin ang progress. Hope you'll have time, malaki ang potential ng gawa mo. Good luck!

bokkins wrote:Try mo iupdate to para makita natin ang progress. Hope you'll have time, malaki ang potential ng gawa mo. Good luck!

sige sir pag nagkaroon ulit ng bakanteng oras...maraming salamat ulit sir bokkins...

The water surface is too disturbed. Maliban na lang kung may bagyo, malakas ang hangin, may jacuzzi or may taong naglalangoy or naglalaro sa pool.

It would look more natural if you lessen the displacements.

sir verin angelo ang ganda po nang pgka-render...tama po yung sabi ni sir bokkins wag lang po masyado wavy yung water natin...sir pwede po bang mkahingi nang preset ninyo sa su8 exterior render....salamat po...

v_wrangler wrote:The water surface is too disturbed. Maliban na lang kung may bagyo, malakas ang hangin, may jacuzzi or may taong naglalangoy or naglalaro sa pool.

It would look more natural if you lessen the displacements.

salamat sa pagdaan master..

nice.....

konting post process nalang sir. the rest nasabi na po ng mga maters. overall its nice sir.

[quote="michael.vincent60"]nice.....[/quote

salamat po

neil wrote:konting post process nalang sir. the rest nasabi na po ng mga maters. overall its nice sir.

salamat sa pagdaan sir..

Brighten it a little more and add texture to the trellis. I tried adjusting it in photoshop, i hope you don't mind.

ayus parin ang update galing sir.

sir galing ng pag kaka update mo.nakuha mo na ung suggestion ni sir Bokkins..lalo na ung sa pool.nice render din sir.galing mo din mag texture..realistic ang dating..pero sir IMHO po..para kasing hindi naka tulong sa scene ung poste na may mga sira..para kasi need renovatoin ka agad..samantalang ung iba naman materials mo e panay bago..peace tyo sir ha..opinion ko lang po un..thanks for sharing sir..keep it up..

Galing ng update mo sir Bokkins... thanks for guiding us sir..godbless...

[quote="bokkins"]Brighten it a little more and add texture to the trellis. I tried adjusting it in photoshop, i hope you don't mind.



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maraming salamat ulit sir bokkins..