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Hi to all cgpepz! I'm a newbie po on this site. I found this forum very informative and a learning package for everyone like me.
ang galing!! I'm very proud to all pinoy here, very talented.
I hope madami pa ako matutunan dito.
c&c po are very welcome.

welcome to cgp sir. ganda ng rendering nyo. some issues on the post process.

very nice rendering..i like your lighting.very well presented.

got one minor comment, the red car is very eye catching inaagaw yung ganda ng design ng bahay...you can use gray or white on the car.

yun lamang po sir, welcome to CGP!

Wishing you all the best stay...
nicely done...
keep posting

Sir,
Galing ng compo mo. like the car very realistic. Imho lang on the downspout mo medyo na-move lang siguro. Sige and keep on posting. welcome dito sa forum.

nice post bro...... enjoy tayo sa CGP! masaya dito.....

wow,galing....the render looks realistic..hnd lng bumagau ung mga tao,,,
mas ok pa sana kung hnd mo nalng nilagyan ser..
pls chek ur horizon ser,,..too much distortion (dunno f it is the ryt term) on the camera view..sayang..mas ok kung normal cam view lng...pro oks n oks pa rin boss..may ao po ba to? galing:thumbs:

not bad if you consider yourself new to rendering. magaling actually ang approach mo dito which I dont see often in a rendering. ibang klase ang distortion mo and with a little more practice and maperfect mo to could really put you as one of the best. may trademark and personal touch tong gawa mo. and architecturally speaking. This could sell.

Some points I would like to stress.
1. Improve you background, Alam ko resources lang ang kulang sayo. Pro Im sure pag nakahanap ka ng better background, mas gaganda pa to. We have a link here sa materials section that could give you a jumpstart.
2. ung mga tao din, tweak mo ng konti pa sa photoshop. I believe it will match the scene sa kakapractice mo doing it.
3. shader for you car. masyadong glossy that its taking too much attention. I like the shader, I love using it as well, pro when we're talking achitectural viz, the focus should be the architecture not the cars. always take note of the. you can only find success in this if you tone it down a little.

Yun lang muna masasabi ko. Welcome to CGP bro. Hope you enjoy your stay here!

pakunat wrote:welcome to cgp sir. ganda ng rendering nyo. some issues on the post process.

sir, thanks po sa pag welcome! oo nga po sa postprocess kasi limited din resources ko. I heard marami daw dito.
thanks sir pakunat!

ravenvillareal wrote:very nice rendering..i like your lighting.very well presented.

got one minor comment, the red car is very eye catching inaagaw yung ganda ng design ng bahay...you can use gray or white on the car.

yun lamang po sir, welcome to CGP!

Thanks sir you liked it! noted po yan sir and nakita ko na din yang red car before..agaw eksena, hehe. thanks again!

dickie_ilagan wrote:Wishing you all the best stay...
nicely done...
keep posting

thank you sir!mukhang maeenjoy ko nga pagstay here coz mostly dito nag eenjoy.
cgp astig!

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
Galing ng compo mo. like the car very realistic. Imho lang on the downspout mo medyo na-move lang siguro. Sige and keep on posting. welcome dito sa forum.

maraming salamat po!

arjaeboi wrote:nice post bro...... enjoy tayo sa CGP! masaya dito.....

hehehe, masaya nga dito. thanks bro!
rock on cgp!

jarul wrote:wow,galing....the render looks realistic..hnd lng bumagau ung mga tao,,,
mas ok pa sana kung hnd mo nalng nilagyan ser..
pls chek ur horizon ser,,..too much distortion (dunno f it is the ryt term) on the camera view..sayang..mas ok kung normal cam view lng...pro oks n oks pa rin boss..may ao po ba to? galing:thumbs:

thanks sir jarul! sa post process po noted po yan sir, next time i will not use it.sa camera po nasubrahan nga, salamat po at nakita nyo po. madami nga ako matutunan dito.

bokkins wrote:not bad if you consider yourself new to rendering. magaling actually ang approach mo dito which I dont see often in a rendering. ibang klase ang distortion mo and with a little more practice and maperfect mo to could really put you as one of the best. may trademark and personal touch tong gawa mo. and architecturally speaking. This could sell.

Some points I would like to stress.
1. Improve you background, Alam ko resources lang ang kulang sayo. Pro Im sure pag nakahanap ka ng better background, mas gaganda pa to. We have a link here sa materials section that could give you a jumpstart.
2. ung mga tao din, tweak mo ng konti pa sa photoshop. I believe it will match the scene sa kakapractice mo doing it.
3. shader for you car. masyadong glossy that its taking too much attention. I like the shader, I love using it as well, pro when we're talking achitectural viz, the focus should be the architecture not the cars. always take note of the. you can only find success in this if you tone it down a little.

Yun lang muna masasabi ko. Welcome to CGP bro. Hope you enjoy your stay here!

wow galing! many thanks to you master bokkins! noted po lahat yan sir! its a big help for people like me who wants to learn more in architectural visualization. mabuhay po kayo!

ganda ng lighting mo dito sir, tamang tama lang ang timpla..

Good start for a newbie. I think everyone has said their comments on your image. All I would say is take note of the pointers and use them as a guide in creating your next scene. Hopefully you will get better as you go along..

Welcome to the forums.

welcome here sir... the first post is very great... ok ung pagkarender... i like the drama... entourage comments have been said... i agree with those.. master bokkins have a heads up cnc on u... isa sa mga generous person dito sa site... keep it up bro.. and welcome again...

welcome sa cgp bro.. post processing issue nga lang bro...enjoy your stay here...keep posting

comments been said... add ko lang ung garage floor, sidewalk and main road, pantay? they should be elevated... nice lighting you got here bro... and welcome to cgp...

not bad at all. nice soft shadows there.

nice.. i love the lighting in your 3D scene (shade and shadows are well executed).. just the entourage, looks flat and out of tone.. keep posting..

i like the rendering and the design too, medyo sabit lang yung mga tao

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Thank you guys for the compliment and healthy critz.. masaya to!!
Thanks din po sa pag welcome dito!

Ganda ng car nyo sir... pwede bang makiarbor... welcome sa cgpinoy. hope maka atend ka sa next eb dubai. sa Abu Dhabi ang venue