REJECTED BATHROOM :(

Hi Gals and Guys
Here a work I've done but rejected unfortunately
Pero Share ko na lang para di sayang
Comments and Crits on how to improve po needed badly.
Thank you !

ano po ba reason bkt na reject?

Pangit daw po mukhang swimming pool
Seriously iyon po ang sabi, and i feel so upset.
Thou this is not my design I feel so far for me is good thou, or maybe ako lang ang may sabi kay need ko ang comments and critics other than mukhang swimming pool.

hmm...lagyan mo nalang ng shower dun sa parang ginawang bintana ba yan? Yun, myabe wala nalang yung bintang yun..kasi diba..madalas naman pwede mong align ang shower sa lavatory at water closet mo, tipid pa sa plmbing yan.

mukhang sumobra sa reflection at transparency to, at di na gets ng client bro...IMHO lang...

yah i think blue is too much... the floor and wall are dsame mat... try to chnge map on walls or floor,jst to make a diffrnce... naging flat yt ung scene bcoz of un nga repetitive ung maps and color... comments ko lng un sir...
wait for the masters to comment...

arkiedmund wrote:hmm...lagyan mo nalang ng shower dun sa parang ginawang bintana ba yan? Yun, myabe wala nalang yung bintang yun..kasi diba..madalas naman pwede mong align ang shower sa lavatory at water closet mo, tipid pa sa plmbing yan.

mukhang sumobra sa reflection at transparency to, at di na gets ng client bro...IMHO lang...

thanks arkied, noted po yun sa reflection,
As I told its not my design, there a pop up handheld shower on the right side of the tub.

here's the tiles that i've use as specified by the designer .

http://www.mosaictileco.com/fap_crea_cobalto_ceramic_and_porcelain_tile_options.htm

@hans, ic...so, it's the designer's fault, kung yung design ang di nagustuhan. kung baga, you just interpreted his vision. It looks nice naman, I think it had to do with the colors choosen by your designer.

Hope next time...maging ok na..

very clean output
nice working...

sipag ni inday ser!!! linis!!! post pa!!

Don't be too hard on yourself Hans, look at it as a learning experience.
At least you made the front page of CGP with this image!

I agree, changing the color of the blue tile to something warmer, might make it look more inviting. Keep it up, you'll only get better from here.

Sir,
Sayang na-reject. Anyway, di naman nasayang work you can still use this for reference. i-lessen mo na lang ang color blue. But render wise magaling. Keep it up.

FOR this is good..but don't upset bro... prove to him na magaling ka...dapt mas magsikap ka na gumaling pa..kaya mo yan...nice post bro

arkiedmund wrote:@hans, ic...so, it's the designer's fault, kung yung design ang di nagustuhan. kung baga, you just interpreted his vision. It looks nice naman, I think it had to do with the colors choosen by your designer.

Hope next time...maging ok na..

Arkiedmund.> THANKS yaan mo next time cge we'll look into that, I think suggest ko na rin sa designer.


aldrinv2 \oo nga po dagdag na lang sa portfolio, for next time. Thanks po.

Lessen yung blue its ok,better ask ko muna designer and we'll see. noted po.


Butz_Arki Thanks po, charge to experience na nga lang po.

AJ Cortez Its better now to see it on front page, charge to experience na nga lang po. THanks po.

[b]oDi120522[b] Thanks for viewing po.

[b]dickie_ilagan [b] Salamat po Sir, Nice to hear that from the master.

reggie0711 wrote:yah i think blue is too much... the floor and wall are dsame mat... try to chnge map on walls or floor,jst to make a diffrnce... naging flat yt ung scene bcoz of un nga repetitive ung maps and color... comments ko lng un sir...
wait for the masters to comment...

nOTED po Sir, I'll try to convince yung designer para may options po kami sa colors, and we'll see what happen.
Thanks po .

i have no comments with the design and the way you render it Hans, siguro just change the color scheme...try black tiles and wenge woods to make it look classy and a plant will help ...

ravenvillareal wrote:i have no comments with the design and the way you render it Hans, siguro just change the color scheme...try black tiles and wenge woods to make it look classy and a plant will help ...

Thanks po, yup, black tile looks nice, we'll try to have this options, thanks sa suggestions po.

sir napansin ko lang. magkalayo po ung bidet and wc. hmmm. i think dapat magkatabi sila. rendering is nice sir. use of materials lang. post more sir

For me, there is no problem with the rendering. The choice of color of the marble that it looks a pool. It is not your fault Hans. . If given a chance, take the opportunity to apply the colors/texture you want, maybe the client will prefer your choice instead from the Designer.

Kitakits sa EB.

not your fault dude, rendering is great!

you may suggest though to make the scheme warmer.
use wood or earth color tiles, that would make it very different from this.

goodluck!

pakunat wrote:sir napansin ko lang. magkalayo po ung bidet and wc. hmmm. i think dapat magkatabi sila. rendering is nice sir. use of materials lang. post more sir

Thanks po sir, well see about it. Siguro talagang dapat kami mag-usap ng designer muna hehe.

kurdaps! wrote:For me, there is no problem with the rendering. The choice of color of the marble that it looks a pool. It is not your fault Hans. . If given a chance, take the opportunity to apply the colors/texture you want, maybe the client will prefer your choice instead from the Designer.

Kitakits sa EB.

This is a great Idea, kaso nga po yung boss ko sya rin ang designer eh. Ill try to give yung gusto muna nng boss then after saka na lang yung gusto ko hehehe para walang problema.

I'll try to come in our EB if God permit.(inshala).
Thanks po!

torvicz wrote:not your fault dude, rendering is great!

you may suggest though to make the scheme warmer.
use wood or earth color tiles, that would make it very different from this.

goodluck!

I thinks I like this Idea, Warm color, earth tone. dramatic wise
Thanks po I'll update this for sure.
Compile this ideas and Hit F9 again.
Thanks po mga Render Masters!.

ganda ng pagkarender..swabe..its just that nareject ang design dahil sa materials cguro..try mong lagyan ng accent wall sa gawing may mirror..opinion ko lang yun ha..peace!

galing bro very nice clean at nice lighting color scheme din post more

ganda sir, and ang linis! sayang di na approved ganda naman eh!