BEDROOM

Share ko lang mga master marami pa kasing kulang kaya I need advice sa mga master, comments and critics is highly appreciated TIA.

WF: Autocad 2011 + 3dsmax with V ray SP 1.5 + PS CS5


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TIA mga masters for the comments and suggestion

sir comments lang...parang mataas ung yellow tint sa wood(saturated), ung pinto sir baka tumama na sa kama pag bukas(2nd and 4th image)...TFS sir! keep posting!

very nice sir. medyo saturated lang imho. tfs

dedspecdam wrote:sir comments lang...parang mataas ung yellow tint sa wood(saturated), ung pinto sir baka tumama na sa kama pag bukas(2nd and 4th image)...TFS sir! keep posting!

Salamat sa pag silip sir dedspecdum napasubra ko siguro ang adjustment sa PS regarding the door on 2nd and 4th image the door opening is outside because this door is the toilet door thats why i prepare to open outside the bedroom anyway noted po lahat sir

thanks

RQUI wrote:very nice sir. medyo saturated lang imho. tfs

Salamat sa pag daan sir ROUI napasubra yata sa Ps siguro sa monitor ko

noted po lahat sir thanks

galing sir panalo nice render and design

modelrenz_2011 wrote:galing sir panalo nice render and design

Salamat sa pag silip sir modelrenz at nagustuhan mo

dedspecdam wrote:.... ung pinto sir baka tumama na sa kama pag bukas(2nd and 4th image)...TFS sir! keep posting!

parang papasok ng shower naman ata yun [change hinge lang hehe].

@johnolive100
- masyado malinis yung vertical corners - di na defined ang bounderies
- yung header sa door to the shower, kita na ung crack
- doorknobs, sobra sa standard height

rendering - apparently improving! cheers!

M_Shadows wrote:

dedspecdam wrote:.... ung pinto sir baka tumama na sa kama pag bukas(2nd and 4th image)...TFS sir! keep posting!

parang papasok ng shower naman ata yun.

@johnolive100
- masyado malinis yung vertical corners - di na defined ang bounderies.
- yung header sa door to the shower, kakarender pa lang - nag crack na.
- doorknob, sobra sa standard height.

rendering - apparently improving! cheers!

Salamat sa pag silip maam
-oo nga ah nag crack di ko na malayan
-regarding sa doorknob hindi ko napansin sumobra pala
-noted po lahat maam still kicking up some tips to make my render good thanks

medyo yellowish ang image,
3rd image

wow. laki ng improvement sir. keep it up!

jheteg wrote:wow. laki ng improvement sir. keep it up!

Salamat sa pagsilip sir jteg still kicking up some tips and settings hindi pa ako kontento sa output ko 32 bit lang kasi PC ko

At credit ko sayo mga arch models by evermotion salamat ulit sir you are very kind man