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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:01 pm

msta pipol...post ulit ha...plza espanol ay pangalan po ng bldg,,un ang gusto ng owner...somwer in gensan po location...
pki cc nlng po..

cad / max / vray / vraydirt as ao / ps .......tnx mga bos......

update lng po,,nilagyn ko na po ng mga tao sabi ng mga master dito...slamat po,,
cnsya na po,pbalik2 lng,,konti lng kc ps tao ko..

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Post by ERICK Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:27 pm

sky na lang for background ok na to... galing mo na
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Post by silvercrown Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:48 pm

Nice Rendering Jarul! thumbsup
Some observations:
Show some hint of texture on the walls, mapping issues, road and curb needs some dirt, a bit surreal too much luxury car kase pero walang tao, try japanese cars they look much better.... Paint finish is not really convincing, light hues looks fine but dark ones looks flat... parang brushed colored aluminum...
Very good Lighting though! cheers I got to reiterate my request, I hope you Won't be Selfish to post your Vray Cam, Vray Sun Settings... I hope you'll do this time...
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Post by skyscraper100 Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:06 pm

galing nyo naman po sa vray sir ang ganda ang design at ng render
mayron po kasi akong vray for sketchup trial version, alam niyo po ba kung pano maglagay ng sky sa render? at yung mga settings ng sun?

maraming salamat po
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Post by bokkins Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:21 pm

maganda ung setup mo bro. pro parang something is wrong pa din talaga. Ang lumalabas dito is something like showcasing cars and trees at may building on the background na sobrang hindi pansin kasi parang blurred by the details of your entourage. spend a little more time on the textures. Trust me you will love yourself for doing that. Good luck! gdluck
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Post by 3DZONE Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:50 pm

sir jarul ganda ah...sabi lagi ng amo ko bakit daw ang pinoy malilinis gumawa sabi ko naman..e ganyan kami eh..linis bro pati reflections ok na ok peace man 2thumbsup 2thumbsup
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 9:55 pm

ERICK wrote:sky na lang for background ok na to... galing mo na

tnx boss
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:07 pm

[quote="silvercrown"]Nice Rendering Jarul! thumbsup
Some observations:
Show some hint of texture on the walls, mapping issues, road and curb needs some dirt, a bit surreal too much luxury car kase pero walang tao, try japanese cars they look much better.... Paint finish is not really convincing, light hues looks fine but dark ones looks flat... parang brushed colored aluminum...
Very good Lighting though! cheers I got to reiterate my request, I hope you Won't be Selfish to post your Vray Cam, Vray Sun Settings... I hope you'll do this time...[/quote

tnx boss,,if ur talking about the bumps on the walls,meron po,,sa tingin ko sa gnito ka layo na mga views,,mdyo hnd na kita ung bumps,,oo nga noh,dpt may dirt sa road...hehe..about the cars,,cnsya na paborio kac,,and i think hnd naman mkkaapekto kung japanese or americam o kahit anong cars,,hnd ko po nilgayan ng tao kac i find it not so good,,
tnx boss..
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:09 pm

skyscraper100 wrote:galing nyo naman po sa vray sir ang ganda ang design at ng render
mayron po kasi akong vray for sketchup trial version, alam niyo po ba kung pano maglagay ng sky sa render? at yung mga settings ng sun?

maraming salamat po
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tnx boss...im not so in to sketch up..pero pwd mo naman ilagay ung desired sky mo sa ps,,save as png file lng ung nirrender nyo po boss,,,,ganyan din po style ko....tnx po boss,,
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:16 pm

bokkins wrote:maganda ung setup mo bro. pro parang something is wrong pa din talaga. Ang lumalabas dito is something like showcasing cars and trees at may building on the background na sobrang hindi pansin kasi parang blurred by the details of your entourage. spend a little more time on the textures. Trust me you will love yourself for doing that. Good luck! gdluck

tnx boss,,im not showcasing the cars and trees boss,,in real lyf,,ganyan tlga,,and since this is a commercial and sa major road pa,kaya marami cars .hnd ko nilagyan ng mga tao kc la kong mga tao na bbgay sa scene,kc sa tingin ko mapapangit lng,and i dont like 3d peolpe..and i think hnd naman na boblock ung bldg,,ung entourage lang cgro hnd ko tlga dinetalye yan,,lgyan ko sana ng mga signage etc,pro sabi ni mr arkitek,,huwag nlng..imho lng po master boks,,,,
noted po lahat sir,,tnx sa cc..... thumbsup
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:16 pm

3DZONE wrote:sir jarul ganda ah...sabi lagi ng amo ko bakit daw ang pinoy malilinis gumawa sabi ko naman..e ganyan kami eh..linis bro pati reflections ok na ok peace man 2thumbsup 2thumbsup

heeh...salmat bosing,,,ganyan nga,,arya mga pinoy.. Crazy_Lion
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Post by arkiedmund Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:25 pm

clean image...a few points:

1. Tiling issues on the walls
2. Work more on your wall textures
3. Maybe a better reflection map will make this look more better.

Overall render and lighting is good.
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:27 pm

arkiedmund wrote:clean image...a few points:

1. Tiling issues on the walls
2. Work more on your wall textures
3. Maybe a better reflection map will make this look more better.

Overall render and lighting is good.

noted po bossing,,,tnx
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Post by Butz_Arki Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:56 pm

nice design & rendering bro..a little tweaks lang sa materials ok n ok n to..keep it up..dami project bro ha.. 2thumbsup
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Post by bokkins Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:58 pm

wala naman problems sa cars bro. wala din problem sa trees, the more the merrier. ang point ko lang sa sinasabi ko, is that the cars and trees are too detailed for your building. I'm just pushing you to your limits which you will realize someday soon. I have high hopes on your renders, I know you can do it. Sometimes I just feel frustrated when I see that you post something "Hilaw". imho. Smile
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Post by silvercrown Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:00 pm

jarul wrote:
tnx boss,,if ur talking about the bumps on the walls,meron po,,sa tingin ko sa gnito ka layo na mga views,,mdyo hnd na kita ung bumps,,oo nga noh,dpt may dirt sa road...hehe..about the cars,,cnsya na paborio kac,,and i think hnd naman mkkaapekto kung japanese or americam o kahit anong cars,,hnd ko po nilgayan ng tao kac i find it not so good,,
tnx boss..

Boss Jarul, These are just a few hints and of course you are not obliged to follow it, at the end of the day you and you alone would decide what u really want Very Happy
If you can't put people in your scene, then there's really no sense in putting lots of cars, or else wala ng balance... it's not the real life as u pointed out you defeat it's purpose... it's commercial and major road madaming luxury cars pero walang tao...
Your rendering skills, No doubt about that... thumbsup you know sometimes we need to evaluate other aspects of our craft, and you could get this from unselfish observation and suggestion of other artists...


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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:01 pm

silvercrown wrote:
jarul wrote:
tnx boss,,if ur talking about the bumps on the walls,meron po,,sa tingin ko sa gnito ka layo na mga views,,mdyo hnd na kita ung bumps,,oo nga noh,dpt may dirt sa road...hehe..about the cars,,cnsya na paborio kac,,and i think hnd naman mkkaapekto kung japanese or americam o kahit anong cars,,hnd ko po nilgayan ng tao kac i find it not so good,,
tnx boss..

Boss Jarul, These are just a few hints and of course you are not obliged to follow it, at the end of the day you and you alone would decide what u really want Very Happy
If you can't put people in your scene, then there's really no sense in putting lots of cars, or else wala ng balance... it's not the real life as u pointed out you defeat it's purpose... it's commercial and major road madaming luxury cars pero walang tao...
Your rendering skills, No doubt about that... thumbsup

ok po..salmat boss...
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:03 pm

bokkins wrote:wala naman problems sa cars bro. wala din problem sa trees, the more the merrier. ang point ko lang sa sinasabi ko, is that the cars and trees are too detailed for your building. I'm just pushing you to your limits which you will realize someday soon. I have high hopes on your renders, I know you can do it. Sometimes I just feel frustrated when I see that you post something "Hilaw". imho. Smile

hehhe,,sori po kung hilaw pa boss...cge po..nxt tym...tnx boss
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:03 pm

Butz_Arki wrote:nice design & rendering bro..a little tweaks lang sa materials ok n ok n to..keep it up..dami project bro ha.. 2thumbsup

tnx master butz...
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Post by bokkins Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:28 pm

haha. OT lang ha, naka-ilang next tym ka na. joke lang bro. Nakakabitin kasi talaga ang post mo, pagpasensyahan mo na ako. kung baga, nanghihinayang lang. or maybe, you're still young and stubborn, but who knows, one day magulat nalang kami. gulatin mo nga kami minsan. Anyway, magstop na ko. Thanks for sharing ulit bro. thumbsup
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Post by jarul Tue Jan 20, 2009 11:31 pm

bokkins wrote:haha. OT lang ha, naka-ilang next tym ka na. joke lang bro. Nakakabitin kasi talaga ang post mo, pagpasensyahan mo na ako. kung baga, nanghihinayang lang. or maybe, you're still young and stubborn, but who knows, one day magulat nalang kami. gulatin mo nga kami minsan. Anyway, magstop na ko. Thanks for sharing ulit bro. thumbsup

hehhe..young but not stubborn bossing,,,,cge po..nxt tym again bossing...hehe
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Post by arjaeboi Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:00 am

nice post bro..however, sakin lang....napansin ko the road is to clean, maybe put a better texture or put some dirt on the road....., the BG, maybe change it too...., and as they said the mats.......akin lang naman bro...... i know makukuha mo yan.....kunting pihit nalang.... 2thumbsup
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Post by jarul Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:02 am

arjaeboi wrote:nice post bro..however, sakin lang....napansin ko the road is to clean, maybe put a better texture or put some dirt on the road....., the BG, maybe change it too...., and as they said the mats.......akin lang naman bro...... i know makukuha mo yan.....kunting pihit nalang.... 2thumbsup

ok po bossing..tnx
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Post by cloud20 Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:28 am

since everything's said na, pa ot na lang; no doubt master jarul is very talented... down to earth din naman yan pag nakakachat ko... we all have our egos, varying degrees lang... maybe sometimes his ego gets the best of him dahil nga magaling... my unsolicited advice to master jarul: learn meekness... and a little tact sa pagsagot... namimisinterpret ka kase sometimes... and no matter how good you are there will always be someone better than you... peace out man...
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Post by jarul Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:06 am

cloud20 wrote:since everything's said na, pa ot na lang; no doubt master jarul is very talented... down to earth din naman yan pag nakakachat ko... we all have our egos, varying degrees lang... maybe sometimes his ego gets the best of him dahil nga magaling... my unsolicited advice to master jarul: learn meekness... and a little tact sa pagsagot... namimisinterpret ka kase sometimes... and no matter how good you are there will always be someone better than you... peace out man...

cge po master cloud..salamat po,,ill take note of that..
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