my vfsu 1st post

by draftermag$ Sun Aug 21, 2011 7:58 am

model and render lang po ang sa akin...
c&c's are always welcome for my improvement

my vfsu 1st post 84700546

salamat ng marami pala to all vfsu guru here and to all cgpeps...

by charlie Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:34 am

maganda sir.. nice roofing,,

by vilpang Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:48 am

ayos nice first post sir..

design and render ok my vfsu 1st post 290602

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-camera vertical shift lang sir, kasi medyo tumba yong house..

-kaunting dislacement sa grass..

keep it up sir draftermags... Smile

by RQUI Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:24 am

the image is saturated sir..

by modelrenz_2011 Sun Aug 21, 2011 12:57 pm

for me

good start sir

by vhychenq Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:44 am

Welcome to CGP,
image is kinda sharp,lalo na yung shadows. I agree with sir Rqui,kinda saturated din lalo na sa vegetations.
*try increasing the size of the sun and its shadow subdivision para maging smooth dating ng shadows mo
*edit mo din yung diffuse color ng trees,darken mo para di magmukhang saturated.
tambay lang dito bro,keep posting.

by draftermag$ Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:52 am

charlie wrote:maganda sir.. nice roofing,,

maraming salamat po sir... Very Happy

by draftermag$ Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:59 am

vilpang wrote:ayos nice first post sir..

design and render ok ..

-camera vertical shift lang sir, kasi medyo tumba yong house..

-kaunting dislacement sa grass..

keep it up sir draftermags...

okey sir, pagpractizan ko po yan sir...
salamat sa pagdaan sir...

by draftermag$ Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:06 am

RQUI wrote:the image is saturated sir..

hirap kasi sa photoshop sir, next time po sir RQUI kunting adjustment nalang...
thank you po sir...

by draftermag$ Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:07 am

modelrenz_2011 wrote:for me good start sir

thank you sir... Very Happy

by draftermag$ Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:15 am

vhychenq wrote:Welcome to CGP,
image is kinda sharp,lalo na yung shadows. I agree with sir Rqui,kinda saturated din lalo na sa vegetations.
*try increasing the size of the sun and its shadow subdivision para maging smooth dating ng shadows mo
*edit mo din yung diffuse color ng trees,darken mo para di magmukhang saturated.
tambay lang dito bro,keep posting.

thank you sir vhychenq...
napasobrahan nga po sir, okey po sir noted po yan lahat,
lage nga akong nakatambay dito sir, hahanap ng mga tutz... Very Happy

by ar_monzter Mon Aug 22, 2011 8:46 am

magandang simulain bro. nice roofing. saturated nga. sundin naten advice ng mga masters. thumbsup

by aesonck Mon Aug 22, 2011 11:22 pm

Hi bro ..some c/c's....

I'm wondering for the entrance bro...if im drunk..I would really miss the main door... Very Happy

" tog! ", then sa trellace grabee ang mixing nito ..orange, brown, pink.

For the environment bro, its deceptive.kung saan lugar., see this for the front view..,compare it with the main env..

https://s1104.photobucket.com/albums/h321/aessck/?action=view¤t=00.jpg

or thinking of something else ....co'z of the firehose sa road... Smile

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and the other half baka sa kabilang bahay. pale