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i just wanna share this guys. comments are very welcome. modeling is not mine only rendering.

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Maam, suggest ko lang... mas maganda sana kung hinanapan mo ng mas magandang angle yung camera...

at least mas malapit, mas kita yung detail at materials..

mas maganda rin siguro kung mas kit yung pool kesa sa grass..

add more trees for the background..parang ang taas kasi nung area..

nice render maam..!!!

-a little more lighting should do it..
-camera location siguro sa left side para sapul ang pool and good details
-wood texturing tweak pa siguro
-focus more on the model..not on the grass
-takaw tingin ang blue tile ng pool

keep it up ganda ng model, sayang use it

Sayang yung design ok na sana kaso yung composition ng foreground kulang pa talaga and i agree from the comment above i tilt mo ng kaunti yung camera mo ialagay munaring yung sun sa opposite side ng bldg. para mag karoon ng shades and sadows. Dapat sna yung shadow ng eave mas naka emphasized, aangat ang structure mo nun. ung outline sana ng shadow umabot ng atleast 50cm to 1000cm from outer celing line.I balanse munalang yung sky and foreground hindi baleng mas lamang yung sky. pero ok sya

masters blockz, ortzak and 3stan. maraming salamat po sa mga comments nyo. i really appreciate it.

-about sa angle yan po kasi ang gusto na portion na makita nung client.
-about naman po sa background and foreground hindi po ako naka paglagay ng maraming trees kasi di kinaya ng pc.
-i also have other angles yun nga lang hindi na naayos kasi minamadali po. post ko na lang din po.

i'm really thankful that you dropped by on my post. it's a big help for me.

AO will do this better...same comments as mentioned above..

nice render ma'am ..

additional comments lang, glass reflection po..

nice render ma'am comments po nasabi na....siguro more experimenting nalang sa materials, TFS...

arkitrix wrote:AO will do this better...same comments as mentioned above..

thank you very much sir for dropping by. i'll try to do it next time sir.

vilpang wrote:nice render ma'am ..

additional comments lang, glass reflection po..

ok po. thank you sir.

dedspecdam wrote:nice render ma'am comments po nasabi na....siguro more experimenting nalang sa materials, TFS...

thank you po sir.

nice design ang render maam

asian na asian nga...ganda ng design mam..more improvement pa sa rendering but your on right track keep on improving everytime you render...goodluck mam!...

arkijayr_17 wrote:asian na asian nga...ganda ng design mam..more improvement pa sa rendering but your on right track keep on improving everytime you render...goodluck mam!...

thank you very much sir!

modelrenz_2011 wrote:nice design ang render maam

thank you po.

i like the design totaly,some comments mam for your maping sa ceiling,pero stay lang kayo dito dami kayo matutunan GOd bless

maychelle wrote:masters blockz, ortzak and 3stan. maraming salamat po sa mga comments nyo. i really appreciate it.

-about sa angle yan po kasi ang gusto na portion na makita nung client.
-about naman po sa background and foreground hindi po ako naka paglagay ng maraming trees kasi di kinaya ng pc.
-i also have other angles yun nga lang hindi na naayos kasi minamadali po. post ko na lang din po.

i'm really thankful that you dropped by on my post. it's a big help for me.

Ano ba specs ng pc mo?Use proxy para maka save ka nang memory.

nice ganda ng design

archshade02 wrote:i like the design totaly,some comments mam for your maping sa ceiling,pero stay lang kayo dito dami kayo matutunan GOd bless

thank you sir for dropping by. God bless you too.

3STAN wrote:

maychelle wrote:masters blockz, ortzak and 3stan. maraming salamat po sa mga comments nyo. i really appreciate it.

-about sa angle yan po kasi ang gusto na portion na makita nung client.
-about naman po sa background and foreground hindi po ako naka paglagay ng maraming trees kasi di kinaya ng pc.
-i also have other angles yun nga lang hindi na naayos kasi minamadali po. post ko na lang din po.

i'm really thankful that you dropped by on my post. it's a big help for me.

Ano ba specs ng pc mo?Use proxy para maka save ka nang memory.

corei5, 4g ram and 1g video card.....nung ni render ko po kasi yan sir 32bit pa lang yung os ko. so everytime i render it nag ca crash ang max ko. now medyo ok na pinalitan na ng 64bit. my only problem na lang is while modeling in max dun na naman sya nag ca crash.

michael.vincent60 wrote:nice ganda ng design

thank you sir!

very nice design maam. gi is good... materials at bg nalang po..

RQUI wrote:very nice design maam. gi is good... materials at bg nalang po..

thank you very much sir for dropping by. till next post po.

nice work madam,
since nag Photoshop ka na lubus lubusin mo na un adjustment
Level, Brightness and Contrast, Saturation and Curves... paglaruan mo my makukuha k n magandang result..
keep posting!!!

crist wrote:nice work madam,
since nag Photoshop ka na lubus lubusin mo na un adjustment
Level, Brightness and Contrast, Saturation and Curves... paglaruan mo my makukuha k n magandang result..
keep posting!!!

thanks a lot po sir sa tips.