Simple Bedroom

hi guys! i just want to post this for my improvement. as of now i'm practicing post processing in ps. coz everytime i render hindi na ako nag eedit sa ps. comments and critiques are very welcome. thank you in advance.

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nice set ma'am. ok na sya para sakin kahit wala nang PP sa ps.

jheteg wrote:nice set ma'am. ok na sya para sakin kahit wala nang PP sa ps.

wow ang bilis naman sir. thanks po.

Over all lighting ok sya, you just have to work on your fabrics to make it more realistic, medyo matigas kase yung dating and yung carpet ano ba gamit mo? vray displacement method? o yung sa material editor lang? The curtain looks so stiff ginawa mulang ba sila?
try mo gamitin yung ffd modifier and try to imitate real ones.
Try to get better pillows, pero sa mood okay na okay sya.

Wow Maam ok sya...!!konting comments lang po:

- yung bed try po ninyo gamitin yung cloth sa modifier list, instead of using arch models..para mas magmukhang realistic sya..

- yung flooring maam wag nyo na ring lagyan ng bump..depende rin kasi yun kung saan dapat yon i-apply..

- yung curtain masyadong matigas...pwedeng gumawa or i-edit nalang by using edit poly or FFD..

- overall lighting ok naman..gusto ko yung mood..except dun sa table lamp..tanong ko lang maam ginamitan ba yon ng vray light material? kasi parang nawawala yung shadow...

nice one Maam...sensya na sa comments...!!!

3STAN wrote:Over all lighting ok sya, you just have to work on your fabrics to make it more realistic, medyo matigas kase yung dating and yung carpet ano ba gamit mo? vray displacement method? o yung sa material editor lang? The curtain looks so stiff ginawa mulang ba sila?
try mo gamitin yung ffd modifier and try to imitate real ones.
Try to get better pillows, pero sa mood okay na okay sya.

actually sir yan po ang pina practice yung fabrics. ang carpet po is vray fur ang ginamit ko. yung curtain archmodel lang po sir. next time po sir i'll try to improve it. thank you very much.

blockz wrote:Wow Maam ok sya...!!konting comments lang po:

- yung bed try po ninyo gamitin yung cloth sa modifier list, instead of using arch models..para mas magmukhang realistic sya..

- yung flooring maam wag nyo na ring lagyan ng bump..depende rin kasi yun kung saan dapat yon i-apply..

- yung curtain masyadong matigas...pwedeng gumawa or i-edit nalang by using edit poly or FFD..

- overall lighting ok naman..gusto ko yung mood..except dun sa table lamp..tanong ko lang maam ginamitan ba yon ng vray light material? kasi parang nawawala yung shadow...

nice one Maam...sensya na sa comments...!!!

vray light material lang po yung sa lamp. thank you sir sa mga comments. i really appreciate it. noted po lahat sir.

maychelle wrote:

3STAN wrote:Over all lighting ok sya, you just have to work on your fabrics to make it more realistic, medyo matigas kase yung dating and yung carpet ano ba gamit mo? vray displacement method? o yung sa material editor lang? The curtain looks so stiff ginawa mulang ba sila?
try mo gamitin yung ffd modifier and try to imitate real ones.
Try to get better pillows, pero sa mood okay na okay sya.

actually sir yan po ang pina practice yung fabrics. ang carpet po is vray fur ang ginamit ko. yung curtain archmodel lang po sir. next time po sir i'll try to improve it. thank you very much.

try mo vray dispacement method mas magaan pa sya. And kung mayroon kamang gustong itanong , feel free to ask . try mo gumamit ng speckle sa bump ng fabrics mo
i map munalang sya ng maliit and then konting amount ng bump
outstanding para sakin kung practice palang sila.

hala gumaganda na mam hehehe...konting abubot na lang po tfs mam

3STAN wrote:

maychelle wrote:

3STAN wrote:Over all lighting ok sya, you just have to work on your fabrics to make it more realistic, medyo matigas kase yung dating and yung carpet ano ba gamit mo? vray displacement method? o yung sa material editor lang? The curtain looks so stiff ginawa mulang ba sila?
try mo gamitin yung ffd modifier and try to imitate real ones.
Try to get better pillows, pero sa mood okay na okay sya.

actually sir yan po ang pina practice yung fabrics. ang carpet po is vray fur ang ginamit ko. yung curtain archmodel lang po sir. next time po sir i'll try to improve it. thank you very much.

try mo vray dispacement method mas magaan pa sya. And kung mayroon kamang gustong itanong , feel free to ask . try mo gumamit ng speckle sa bump ng fabrics mo
i map munalang sya ng maliit and then konting amount ng bump
outstanding para sakin kung practice palang sila.

thanks a lot po sir. sige po i ta try ko lahat ng sinabi nyo.

mhyles wrote:hala gumaganda na mam hehehe...konting abubot na lang po tfs mam

thanks sir mhyles.

This is a nice and decent render.Additional to their comments are:



-door stain

-hanging cabinet (medyo mabigat ata pag i-hang yan)

-toespace/base ng cabinet sa bay window is missing



That's all:)

yaug_03 wrote:This is a nice and decent render.Additional to their comments are:



-door stain

-hanging cabinet (medyo mabigat ata pag i-hang yan)

-toespace/base ng cabinet sa bay window is missing



That's all:)

oo nga no. wala palang base yung cabinet ko. about the hanging cabinet yan kasi gusto ng client. anyway thanks a lot po sir sa comment.

Miss Dimple este Mam Maychelle pala,accessories na lang siguro para sa akin,, na sabi na nila ang iba..at kung aprub na sa kliyente, ok na yan..elegante nga kahit simple lang ..nakuha mo na rin ang tamang pagkakaluto.3rd image lang dapat na PS at kaunting kabig sa cam.

para sakin ma'am ok na..

nice update ma'am. ...

Alapaap wrote:Miss Dimple este Mam Maychelle pala,accessories na lang siguro para sa akin,, na sabi na nila ang iba..at kung aprub na sa kliyente, ok na yan..elegante nga kahit simple lang ..nakuha mo na rin ang tamang pagkakaluto.3rd image lang dapat na PS at kaunting kabig sa cam.

hehehe....may ganun! thank you po sir sa pag daan. try to improve it sir next time.

vilpang wrote:para sakin ma'am ok na..

nice update ma'am. ...

sir thank you po.

para sakin ma'am sobra ok na galing!

modelrenz_2011 wrote:para sakin ma'am sobra ok na galing!

maraming salamat po.

linis mam

archshade02 wrote:linis mam

thanks po!