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Post by arkirein Sun Jul 31, 2011 2:28 am

Good day to every one. Share ko lang po yung latest project nmin. Please feel free to post your comments and suggestions...


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Post by aesonck Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:14 am

Living to > bedroom Hotel Suite 576143, then right vase malapit ng mahulog...

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Post by vilpang Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:56 pm

panlo sir, magandaHotel Suite 290602 ...
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Post by Butz_Arki Sun Jul 31, 2011 4:06 pm

nice!! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil..learn more the color mapping,USE reinhard to avoid color burnt...add some AO would be fine!..
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Post by arkirein Sun Jul 31, 2011 11:26 pm

Butz_Arki wrote:nice!! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil..learn more the color mapping,USE reinhard to avoid color burnt...add some AO would be fine!.

thank you sir. actually nakareinhard po ako...
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Post by arkirein Mon Aug 01, 2011 5:11 am

aesonck wrote:Living to > bedroom Hotel Suite 576143, then right vase malapit ng mahulog...
hehe.thank you sir. di ko nakita yun ah...

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Post by Galaites07 Mon Aug 01, 2011 7:26 am

ayos approved na to. suggest lang since hotel ito, mas maraming pillow sa bed mas maganda sa presentation.

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Post by valencha08 Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:13 am

nice render sir Hotel Suite 290602
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Post by arkirein Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:12 am

Galaites07 wrote:ayos approved na to. suggest lang since hotel ito, mas maraming pillow sa bed mas maganda sa presentation.

Thank you sir. gawin ko yan next time...
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Post by ortzak Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:20 am

nice renders again.. thumbsup try mo kaya a hint of yellow sa lighting mo..
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Post by arkirein Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:23 pm

vilpang wrote:panlo sir, magandaHotel Suite 290602 ...

thank you sir...
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Post by qcksilver Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:02 am

- carpet medyo flat, add bump nalang sir
- wood floor medyo may noise, add nalang subdivision kaso medyo tatagal render
- leather material malaki po yung mapping
- lagyan nalang ng accessories mga niches, natakpan lang ng lampshade yung iba, kahit ung 2 niche nalang sa likod ng bed ok na
- alisin or palitan nalang ung mga plato sa center table better to put then sa dining table po
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Post by arkirein Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:22 am

aesonck wrote:Living to > bedroom Hotel Suite 576143, then right vase malapit ng mahulog...

Render rocks!

thank you sir...
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Post by arkirein Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:55 pm

qcksilver wrote:- carpet medyo flat, add bump nalang sir
- wood floor medyo may noise, add nalang subdivision kaso medyo tatagal render
- leather material malaki po yung mapping
- lagyan nalang ng accessories mga niches, natakpan lang ng lampshade yung iba, kahit ung 2 niche nalang sa likod ng bed ok na
- alisin or palitan nalang ung mga plato sa center table better to put then sa dining table po

thank you sa advice sir...
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Post by anmarj1258 Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:11 am

Nice render.....but color scheme is really bad for image 1 & 2, bedrooms are okay but can be improved more. Smile
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Post by ymhon Sun Aug 07, 2011 7:08 am

medyo flat sir. add ambient occlusion. or reduce the effect on your ambient light kung meron man... Smile
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Post by Kaspersky Sun Aug 07, 2011 7:15 am

workflow sir? Very Happy
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Post by M_Shadows Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:27 am

i think you got a very good floor plan for a hotel suite...
got the essentials all set... tho it feels like heaven! [puro clouds]
lagay ka ng BG - kahit anong bagay. also lower intensity ng env.
see, we can't see yung drapes/sheer mo sa may opening...invi Very Happy

Image 1 & 2:
- re anmarj1258, sorry but i'd have to second the notion hehehe
you got to fix the colors. coz the ones at the bedroom look good...
- flooring, stick to one. kung stone, stone. kung wood, wood. wag both. ehehe
i prefer the stone. then you can add the area rug as you please [tho there's no need to]
and scale it relative to the size of your space... [now, laki for the area ng dining]
it will create an illusion na mas liliit yung space mo pag lahat sama-sama together.
- sofa, i'd go for the ones that belongs to the green scheme. [way better]
ung sa red kasi ang tigas ng dating talaga tho okay din style nun. modern.
it's just a sofa w/ backseat and arm rest that wide doesnt look comfy and stable at all...
- coffee table and side table finish [ung pinaka-legs] sir di ko gets...
so reflective, as if fiberglass na but with prints [that of a fabric] on it?
- pillows modelling - pull the polygons some more - looks so flat...
- paintings - sir, clone talaga ah... hehe. you can retain the one sa dining.
dont disturb the nice wallpaper behind the sofa. [painting+that pattern collides!]
instead, lagay ka ng mirror [w/ good black frame perhaps].

image 3 & 4:
- love how you retained the sheen of the fabrics! [duvet cover]
but the pillows that looked like in metal finish - parang off siya?
go for the tones close to your lounge - not s.s. or 24k-gold looking
- i think, two niches behind the bed and the lounge are enough...
4 is just too much for me. niches behind the lamps, mawawalan ng silbi,
coz the lamp will obstruct yung complete view lalagay mo dun. [conflict]
- carpet, i think you should add bump and displacement

add warmth to it as ortzak has alluded and i think you'll get the mood right. Smile

*arg for the wall of text [of mine]! Rolling Eyes
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Post by arkirein Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:57 am

M_Shadows wrote:i think you got a very good floor plan for a hotel suite...
got the essentials all set... tho it feels like heaven! [puro clouds]
lagay ka ng BG - kahit anong bagay. also lower intensity ng env.
see, we can't see yung drapes/sheer mo sa may opening...invi Very Happy

Image 1 & 2:
- re anmarj1258, sorry but i'd have to second the notion hehehe
you got to fix the colors. coz the ones at the bedroom look good...
- flooring, stick to one. kung stone, stone. kung wood, wood. wag both. ehehe
i prefer the stone. then you can add the area rug as you please [tho there's no need to]
and scale it relative to the size of your space... [now, laki for the area ng dining]
it will create an illusion na mas liliit yung space mo pag lahat sama-sama together.
- sofa, i'd go for the ones that belongs to the green scheme. [way better]
ung sa red kasi ang tigas ng dating talaga tho okay din style nun. modern.
it's just a sofa w/ backseat and arm rest that wide doesnt look comfy and stable at all...
- coffee table and side table finish [ung pinaka-legs] sir di ko gets...
so reflective, as if fiberglass na but with prints [that of a fabric] on it?
- pillows modelling - pull the polygons some more - looks so flat...
- paintings - sir, clone talaga ah... hehe. you can retain the one sa dining.
dont disturb the nice wallpaper behind the sofa. [painting+that pattern collides!]
instead, lagay ka ng mirror [w/ good black frame perhaps].

image 3 & 4:
- love how you retained the sheen of the fabrics! [duvet cover]
but the pillows that looked like in metal finish - parang off siya?
go for the tones close to your lounge - not s.s. or 24k-gold looking
- i think, two niches behind the bed and the lounge are enough...
4 is just too much for me. niches behind the lamps, mawawalan ng silbi,
coz the lamp will obstruct yung complete view lalagay mo dun. [conflict]
- carpet, i think you should add bump and displacement

add warmth to it as ortzak has alluded and i think you'll get the mood right. Smile

*arg for the wall of text [of mine]! Rolling Eyes

Wow! That was so overwhelming. I've learned a lot from you sir. With regards sa Question mo na "- coffee table and side table finish [ung pinaka-legs] sir di ko gets...
so reflective, as if fiberglass na but with prints [that of a fabric] on it?"
- Its a perforated sheet pero hindi inespecify nung senior architect kung metal or wood and kung anong patern but I prefer metal so I used just an opacity map on my material slot to show the meforated effect rather than to model it which is time consuming and energy exhausting.

btw thanks a lot to your comments and suggestions...
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Post by kensweb Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:04 am

wow, cool sa mata, gusto ko yung red theme, di ba mareflect ang sahig sa sofa? thanks for sharing! Hotel Suite 290602
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Post by lemeuix Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:42 am

Superb renderings. Nice. Hotel Suite 290602
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Post by M_Shadows Mon Aug 08, 2011 5:35 am

arkirein wrote:Wow! That was so overwhelming.....With regards sa Question mo na "- coffee table and side table finish [ung pinaka-legs] sir di ko gets...so reflective, as if fiberglass na but with prints [that of a fabric] on it?"

- Its a perforated sheet pero hindi inespecify nung senior architect kung metal or wood and kung anong patern but I prefer metal so I used just an opacity map on my material slot to show the meforated effect rather than to model it which is time consuming and energy exhausting....

alright, gotcha! awesome - like the metal idea as well. tho fiberglass with graphic tint ang labas pag shift+Q
hehe especially when you look at the gray background [supposedly see-thru] ng map and 0 gradience din.
from afar, mas okay yung side table [mukha perforated] i was thinking maybe you used multiply blend for that
[kita yung walls in between the design] anyhow, like your [abstract lion] lamp and framing, you got it a-okay!

*oops... overwhelming ba? i'll try to make it in 2-3 sentences next time...
[some were mentioned already by qcksilver... i've overlooked his] hehehe
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Post by arkirein Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:05 pm

M_Shadows wrote:
arkirein wrote:Wow! That was so overwhelming.....With regards sa Question mo na "- coffee table and side table finish [ung pinaka-legs] sir di ko gets...so reflective, as if fiberglass na but with prints [that of a fabric] on it?"

- Its a perforated sheet pero hindi inespecify nung senior architect kung metal or wood and kung anong patern but I prefer metal so I used just an opacity map on my material slot to show the meforated effect rather than to model it which is time consuming and energy exhausting....

alright, gotcha! awesome - like the metal idea as well. tho fiberglass with graphic tint ang labas pag shift+Q
hehe especially when you look at the gray background [supposedly see-thru] ng map and 0 gradience din.
from afar, mas okay yung side table [mukha perforated] i was thinking maybe you used multiply blend for that
[kita yung walls in between the design] anyhow, like your [abstract lion] lamp and framing, you got it a-okay!

*oops... overwhelming ba? i'll try to make it in 2-3 sentences next time...
[some were mentioned already by qcksilver... i've overlooked his] hehehe


thank you and i appreciate it...
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Post by arkirein Tue Aug 09, 2011 11:52 pm

lemeuix wrote:Superb renderings. Nice. Hotel Suite 290602

thank you sir...
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Post by Alapaap Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:49 am

Wala pa po bang comment ang kliyente? o ano gusto niya.. para ma rebisa..sa akin swak na rendering
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