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Post by vilpang Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:30 pm

hello mga masters & mga cgpians, 2nd post po, update lang sa practice render ko.. comments & critics are always welcome for my improvement, thank you very much...

WF: 3dMax 2009+vry sp2+hdri+ps.

view1. A Two-Storey House 9

view2. A Two-Storey House 7
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Post by atelier82 Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:19 pm

Great Design Concept and Rendering skills sir... A Two-Storey House 290602 for my IMHO here is some of my comments.


-Try to improve your camera settings or use camera correction for accuracy ng angle. follow po tayo sa 1.8m height for typical height for a man's eye view.

-Apply some displacement and Bump sa grass and wall treatment

-Adjust contrast lang po sa image and improve your BG image.

-mas maganda sir kung 3d trees ung gagamitin nyo A Two-Storey House 290602

-and sa 2nd image try to use 3/4 margin rule crop image sir.

I hope makatulong sir! A Two-Storey House 290602

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Post by mez Wed Jul 27, 2011 5:31 pm

comments nasabi na, konting contrast pa siguro. thumbsup
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Post by RQUI Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:53 pm

ganda ng design sir. panalo. agree ako kay sir mez. mas gaganda pa ito. thumbsup
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Post by vilpang Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:00 am

atelier82 wrote:Great Design Concept and Rendering skills sir... A Two-Storey House 290602 for my IMHO here is some of my comments.


-Try to improve your camera settings or use camera correction for accuracy ng angle. follow po tayo sa 1.8m height for typical height for a man's eye view.

-Apply some displacement and Bump sa grass and wall treatment

-Adjust contrast lang po sa image and improve your BG image.

-mas maganda sir kung 3d trees ung gagamitin nyo A Two-Storey House 290602

-and sa 2nd image try to use 3/4 margin rule crop image sir.

I hope makatulong sir! A Two-Storey House 290602

Keep it up! Post more...Welcome sa CgP! A Two-Storey House 323663



all comments noted... maraming salamat sir atelier82 at ngustohan mo.. more power to you..


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Post by vilpang Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:02 am

mez wrote:comments nasabi na, konting contrast pa siguro. A Two-Storey House 290602



maraming salamat sa pagdaan master mez....
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Post by vilpang Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:07 am

RQUI wrote:ganda ng design sir. panalo. agree ako kay sir mez. mas gaganda pa ito. A Two-Storey House 290602





thank you sir RQUI at nagustohan mo ang design, try ko sir na maimprove pa...
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Post by michael.vincent60 Thu Jul 28, 2011 6:52 am

nice design A Two-Storey House 290602
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Post by vilpang Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:05 am

michael.vincent60 wrote:nice design A Two-Storey House 290602



thank you sir michael.vincent60...
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Post by hotarubi Thu Jul 28, 2011 1:59 pm

galing naman kainggit. A Two-Storey House 290602
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Post by vilpang Thu Jul 28, 2011 2:53 pm

hotarubi wrote:galing naman kainggit. A Two-Storey House 290602



maraming salamat sir/ma'm hotarubi...A Two-Storey House 290602
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