apartment building, tacloban

gud day mga sir! this is one of my own project... sideline kumbaga...
c&c are very welcome...
ano pb magpapagnda d2.. hndi p kse cya tnatayo so my chnce pko ayusin ung design...

nice post sir,design wise: i was just wondering what's behind those small windows, bigger might be better, otherwise They are toilets. Color concept is ok, maybe add some exterior lightings and also on the corridor., Rendering is good for me also, IMHO over burnt, less multiplier of the sun then play on the physical camera, use better sky, sir bokkins shared a link regarding 1000 skies where you can use one. Play with the contrast and gradient of the plants and the red car is too dominating... The rest are ok...Congrats and good luck..Post more sir,.. God Bless...

ok na naman regg. jsut small thing. i think medyo babaan mo lang ng kaunti ang multiplier ng sun. abit burn out.

I second the comment about the window sir, we're on a tropical country we need air to come in/out freely, lakihan nlng sir, disadvantage din kase nyan sir e pag nasira Aircon...
Burn out nga sir, lower your sun intensity...
Nice Design! School ba to sir?
Keep it up!

Mastersketzzz wrote:nice post sir,design wise: i was just wondering what's behind those small windows, bigger might be better, otherwise They are toilets. Color concept is ok, maybe add some exterior lightings and also on the corridor., Rendering is good for me also, IMHO over burnt, less multiplier of the sun then play on the physical camera, use better sky, sir bokkins shared a link regarding 1000 skies where you can use one. Play with the contrast and gradient of the plants and the red car is too dominating... The rest are ok...Congrats and good luck..Post more sir,.. God Bless...

oo nga noh lakas nga ng sun.. gusto ko kse lumabs na tanghaling tapat ung scene.. about dun sa windows pra sa toilet un sir! ung mga main window nla ung mga large ones nsa outer side nung structure... so hndi na nkta dito sa camera ko..

silvercrown wrote:I second the comment about the window sir, we're on a tropical country we need air to come in/out freely, lakihan nlng sir, disadvantage din kase nyan sir e pag nasira Aircon...
Burn out nga sir, lower your sun intensity...
Nice Design! School ba to sir?
Keep it up!

windows po sa toilet un sir.. d pde lakihan..
ska sir apartment po ito hehe!! hndi skul...

everything is great!....

The eyes cannot lie bro...IMHO lang...it seems na medyo overburn na sya...i think u need to reduce your lighting...but ok na sa kin to...

sir tanong ko lng ung sa corridor,grout ba un or it was a part of a flooring design? then ung door(along stair) frame against the wall,hindi kaya manipis ung wall thickness?.pasensya na sir ha..
but the design ok siya.malaki to kaya malaki din ang kita, am sure.hehe.
then for the rendering part nasabi na nila..keep posting sir..
sana maapproved na to.

wow!!! gaganda nga mga comments ngayon o... halos covered na lahat sir reg... you could try to render your scene a lil on the dark side then boost lighting on photoshop just to take care of the burn... great render as always sir

i like the design..render wise...keep it up

ytsejeffx wrote:everything is great!....

salamt sir! kayo lng yt nasatisfy sa lighing ko.. hehe!!

natzki wrote:The eyes cannot lie bro...IMHO lang...it seems na medyo overburn na sya...i think u need to reduce your lighting...but ok na sa kin to...

cge sir.. noted po yng comments nio.. ayusin ko cya especially ung sun... tnx sa advice

Draku wrote:sir tanong ko lng ung sa corridor,grout ba un or it was a part of a flooring design? then ung door(along stair) frame against the wall,hindi kaya manipis ung wall thickness?.pasensya na sir ha..
but the design ok siya.malaki to kaya malaki din ang kita, am sure.hehe.
then for the rendering part nasabi na nila..keep posting sir..
sana maapproved na to.

yes sir grout hu cya.. makapal ba.. hehe!! sa shaders ko kse nakuha yn... ung sa door sa stairs.. precast moulding yn so ok lng.. normal p rn ung thickness ng wall sa likod nia... tnx po sa comment.. til my nxt post nlng ulit

direct light and GI are good enough for me.. change mo lang cguro nang mas interesting clouds sir.. a bit plain kasi especially on the last image..

sir... maybe there is still an area para mapaglagyan ng window along the corridor... sayang space and ang view for the users inside kasi eh... kahit na accent window... ok lang un.. i guess it will add more beauty sa design.. un lang sir... u can also make your entry door at 800mm just to give way for the window... render is fine...

Nice design & rendering sir. Pa OT ...... mayroon akong project (completed 2 yrs ago owned by a prominent doctor here in tacloban) similar ang concept nito. Sana matoloy to bro....

vamp_lestat wrote:sir... maybe there is still an area para mapaglagyan ng window along the corridor... sayang space and ang view for the users inside kasi eh... kahit na accent window... ok lang un.. i guess it will add more beauty sa design.. un lang sir... u can also make your entry door at 800mm just to give way for the window... render is fine...

my purpose po yun sir kya nsa outerside ung mga window... kse pagnsa loob ung window,parking lng nmn makkta... ung paligid po nyan plain fields at my bundok sa likod... so ok ang view...
ska sir if i consider... wla n rn space for window kse buong toilet ang nsa wall nyan....
maybe yt kelangn ko rethink ung plan... tignan ko mggwa ko sir... tnx sa suggestions

same hir,,,overburn,lalo na ung road papasok.....and i think masyadong nadistort( i dont know kung tama term ko) ung mga cam angles...add ceil lyts din po bossing..

jarul wrote:same hir,,,overburn,lalo na ung road papasok.....and i think masyadong nadistort( i dont know kung tama term ko) ung mga cam angles...add ceil lyts din po bossing..

hehe!! nasobrahan b ng tanghaling tapat... buti nlng pinaalala nio ung lighting fixture pra sa lbs... wla nga ako nilagay kht sa lighting layout ko... salamt mga sir!!!

nice design...
san banda po ba to s tacloban sir?
great work.

stillshady wrote:nice design...
san banda po ba to s tacloban sir?
great work.

tnx for dropping by... not sure san exact... d ko nmn kse kabisado tacloban... actually malalamn ko n ung site pagconstruction na... puro site pics lng kse meron ako

sir reggie..ang gling ng mga render mo...nkispire...