BOSARI KUWAIT
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
sir ayos to.on going na pla..sir dun sa night view sobra po yata ung ilaw ntn..din over burn..2nd ung fixed window po ntn,seem's wala po yatang glass..check lng po. din kunting tweak sa grass..
pero sir kumita na yata tau dito ah..hehehe..
pero sir kumita na yata tau dito ah..hehehe..
Last edited by Draku on Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:38 am; edited 1 time in total
Draku- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
wow galing master.
nyt scenes - ano po ba nangyari sa curve sa 1st img?....ung buga po ng mga wall lamps nyo parang hnd tama?ps po ba yan? horizon line po,,pls chek.
and since u have shown the interiors,y not add furntures,dn lyt sa ceil?
ung volume lyt efect sa cars,,pls alisin nyo nlng po,,a bit off for me..laruin nyo pa po landscp..cam corection din po bossing..
morning scenes - rflction of the glass id too much..jalos parehong pareho na sa sky mo bossing,,add rfraction po..the trees looks like plastic..
lower a bit the cam angle,,mdyo mataas po.. imho lng po boss
nice lighting,modeling and luv the design......
nyt scenes - ano po ba nangyari sa curve sa 1st img?....ung buga po ng mga wall lamps nyo parang hnd tama?ps po ba yan? horizon line po,,pls chek.
and since u have shown the interiors,y not add furntures,dn lyt sa ceil?
ung volume lyt efect sa cars,,pls alisin nyo nlng po,,a bit off for me..laruin nyo pa po landscp..cam corection din po bossing..
morning scenes - rflction of the glass id too much..jalos parehong pareho na sa sky mo bossing,,add rfraction po..the trees looks like plastic..
lower a bit the cam angle,,mdyo mataas po.. imho lng po boss
nice lighting,modeling and luv the design......
Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
nice work sir, on going na pala construction, some comments will might be on your next projects, For me, IMHO it needs more tweak in terms of composition, you can use vertical shift or camera correction sir to check your camera angle, some issues on mapping, the reflection of the glass needs enhancement also, unchecked maybe the reflection/refraction override environment, because your reflections looks like the background on your 3rd and 4th image. On the design area, that red wall is too dominating, i don't know but maybe that's the way the client wants it. You can play also, with the balance, rhythm, unity, and proportion in terms of your design, and maybe it is better to have a one concept and concentrate on it. Take it constructively bro, It is what we need..onti nalang, kuha mo na...Post more...and God Bless...
Mastersketzzz- CGP Apprentice
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
ok n to..a little improvement you need para sa entourage para ms mgkaroon ng depth.. ncei design bro..keep posting
Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
sir.. comments have been said.. just want to congratulate u on this one.. on going na toh... ang galing sir...
vamp_lestat- CGP Guru
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
unti tweak pa sa night scene panalo na...ung morning scene aprub na pero on going na pla sure kwarta na hehehe...
saan sa kuwait yan sir?
saan sa kuwait yan sir?
Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
hoi joey!comment lng ko sa imong figure krn hehehe!
lighting issues and mapping issues, practice more and research more....need some improvements kuya joey! try to change the direction of your sun and the angle of your camera so that it will not look flat..murag korek kuya!
lighting issues and mapping issues, practice more and research more....need some improvements kuya joey! try to change the direction of your sun and the angle of your camera so that it will not look flat..murag korek kuya!
ericson_ya- CGP Newbie
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
comment lang ako sa glass - parang LED e
pwedeng dark tapos reflective ng konte - or see trough pero dark pa rin.
pwedeng dark tapos reflective ng konte - or see trough pero dark pa rin.
Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
nice render! congrats at tinatayo na!!!!
pixelburn- CGP Guru
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Re: BOSARI KUWAIT
waow tinatayu na??? hehe galing
jhames joe albert infante- CGP Expert
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