my practice render 101

by micoliver1226 Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:40 am

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c's and c's are most welcome..thanks cgp my practice render 101 - Page 2 Trial7

sunset mood my practice render 101 - Page 2 Trial3q

thanks all!

by micoliver1226 Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:54 pm

Valiant wrote:nice rendering maganda din ang paglaro sa massing... although matalas for me ang mga edges... distance between sunshades din parang malaki yata, not sure din kung yellow ba dapat ung line sa gitna ng kalsada, also your fence and carport gate bro, ok siguro kung lalagyan natin ng verticals and scale down ng kunti ung frames kasi mukhang 10 to 15 centimeters na. madami din masyado ang kulay but this is debatable base sa gumagawa at owner, un ding tension cable/wire bro napalaki yata ang diameter at naparami sa kabilang side. lastly, sagad na yata sa property line sa kanan kaya dapat merong firewall. thanks fro sharing.

thanks sir valiant..ang idea kasi dito ay maemphasize yung mga ibang metal materials kagaya nung fence frame which is 10.16 cm na meron visual weight especially yung tension rod na i considered na focal elements sa design..meron pang 1.524m mula sa prop line to bldg sir at yung yellow naman na dessaturate ng husto sa post pro.ehehe..i'll take note lahat sir at maraming salamat sa pagbisita..