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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:46 am

Good Day Mga cgpians, did a simple rush scene last night c/c are much appreciated Seating Room 290602 same WF cad+max+vray & corel. Thanks

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Post by mez Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:13 am

nice set as usual, ang kinis inuman na
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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:04 am

mez wrote:nice set as usual, ang kinis Seating Room 323663

salamat mez thumbsup
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Post by Valiant Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:12 am

husay! Smile door ba ung chrome bro?
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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 14, 2011 10:25 am

Valiant wrote:husay! Smile door ba ung chrome bro?

salamat chief, actually existing elevator yan to the upper floors, medyo may kalakihan din kasi yung bahay nakalimutan kong sabihin Very Happy
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Post by Agda Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:33 pm

Nice render sir Seating Room 290602 .... Comment ko lang yung magiging flow ng tao... At yung living area hinde ata comfortable sa mga manonood ng TV sir..... IMHO lang naman yun sir.... Smile
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Post by yaug_03 Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:38 pm

Agda wrote:Nice render sir Seating Room 290602 .... Comment ko lang yung magiging flow ng tao... At yung living area hinde ata comfortable sa mga manonood ng TV sir..... IMHO lang naman yun sir.... Smile
Agree.Relocate your TV.or just remove it, siguro sa laki ng bahay na yan may entertainment room yan.nice set.
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Post by RQUI Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:15 pm

nice render. agree din po ako about sa relocation ng tv. mukhang sasakit ang leeg ng manunuod. anyway superb renders. thumbsup
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Post by M_Shadows Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:07 pm

- emphasis on the beams looks stunning - harmonious rythm to the scene.
really impressed how you successfully pull every element together.
now i think you did it with the help of the flooring and beams!

- agree with one of the comments regarding the sofa/telly layout
- i like your grays tho i find the chic lounge chair a loner a bit
- over and above, the frames behind the sofa looks a bit alarming too.
especially when you feel all in after the day's work at the office
you'll hardly notice the edges and the blood gushing as you recline

- good thing your drop light didnt have a black strip or something
or i feel that it'll look like a post-modern time bomb from afar.
Nice abstract flowery lighting fixture nonetheless

- the planter looks rather rushed. i dont normally see a pattern like that
especially at close up, it looked like an upholstery mapped perfectly
mostly i see it horizontally or standing images. so far no diagonals like that.

- not sure if it has to do with reflection but cab doors looks seamless
i dont actually see any seams at all. i wonder how you open it. hehe

- the sheer...hmmm....i think i'd like it in satin rather than semi-opaque.

- like your main door. but maybe you could add some silloute at the back
so it doesnt look like reflectors at first glance - if that's glass.

- closeup: really like the angle and DOF and the pen - interesting one.
one thing concerns me tho... the orchid over the coffee smoke hehe
distancia amigo - i see the lovely plant beginning to gasp for air. [OT?]

By and large, for a rush scene such as that - ohhhh man! "whuttaaa shot!"
you've fabulously taken care of the quintessence! i wonder how rush is rush.

got a question: how do you achieve that lighting for the pinlights?
your play on lighting and striking but not-so-striking-rendered colors
supports each other's element and does really grab my eyes.


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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:40 pm

Agda wrote:Nice render sir Seating Room 290602 .... Comment ko lang yung magiging flow ng tao... At yung living area hinde ata comfortable sa mga manonood ng TV sir..... IMHO lang naman yun sir.... Smile

yaug_03 wrote:
Agda wrote:Nice render sir Seating Room 290602 .... Comment ko lang yung magiging flow ng tao... At yung living area hinde ata comfortable sa mga manonood ng TV sir..... IMHO lang naman yun sir.... Smile
Agree.Relocate your TV.or just remove it, siguro sa laki ng bahay na yan may entertainment room yan.nice set.

RQUI wrote:nice render. agree din po ako about sa relocation ng tv. mukhang sasakit ang leeg ng manunuod. anyway superb renders. Seating Room 290602

Thanks guys! salamat agree din ako since i already brought this issue to the client as she really wants that location, sana nga pumayag na maerelocate...Although may isang tao lng naman sa family n madlas gumagamit nito (yung oversized nyang asawa) kaya this elevator will not that bc hihihi Very Happy
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Post by penzlake21 Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:48 pm

M_Shadows wrote:- emphasis on the beams looks stunning - harmonious rythm to the scene.
really impressed how you successfully pull every element together.
now i think you did it with the help of the flooring and beams!

- agree with one of the comments regarding the sofa/telly layout
- i like your grays tho i find the chic lounge chair a loner a bit
- over and above, the frames behind the sofa looks a bit alarming too.
especially when you feel all in after the day's work at the office
you'll hardly notice the edges and the blood gushing as you recline

- good thing your drop light didnt have a black strip or something
or i feel that it'll look like a post-modern time bomb from afar.
Nice abstract flowery lighting fixture nonetheless

- the planter looks rather rushed. i dont normally see a pattern like that
especially at close up, it looked like an upholstery mapped perfectly
mostly i see it horizontally or standing images. so far no diagonals like that.

- not sure if it has to do with reflection but cab doors looks seamless
i dont actually see any seams at all. i wonder how you open it. hehe

- the sheer...hmmm....i think i'd like it in satin rather than semi-opaque.

- like your main door. but maybe you could add some silloute at the back
so it doesnt look like reflectors at first glance - if that's glass.

- closeup: really like the angle and FOV and the pen - interesting one.
one thing concerns me tho... the orchid over the coffee smoke hehe
distancia amigo - i see the lovely plant beginning to gasp for air. [OT?]

By and large, for a rush scene such as that - ohhhh man! "whuttaaa shot!"
you've fabulously taken care of the quintessence! i wonder how rush is rush.

got a question: how do you achieve that lighting for the pinlights?
your play on lighting and striking but not-so-striking-rendered colors
supports each other's element and does really grab my eyes.


you really give valuable comments and critics dude, thanks for that. Regarding the pinlights I will drop my setting here sometime, nothing special just a freelight/IES then mostly used default warm white color. Intensity varies from 15-25 %. Thanks for dropping by Seating Room 290602
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