Practice Render(additional view)

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konting twist pa bro tingin kulang eh parang yue sya nang grey...

cloud20 wrote:

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:

cloud20 wrote:--check verticals..
--too much road not enough sky..
--kulang sa contrast making it a bit flat/pale..
--nice garden grouping..
--pretty good overall..

thanks for droping by sir cloud. noted po yan sir. ask ko lang po why does may trees look dark. but the house look brighter?

--Dark talaga magrender ang specific archmodel tree na yan; try to render it in proper gamma magli-lighten yan. But of course more often than not ma wa-washout din ang house mo..

ayun eperiment nalang ako sir.thanks for droping by again

icefrik19 wrote:konting twist pa bro tingin kulang eh parang yue sya nang grey...

noted po sir thaks for droping by

nice design and render neil... napalakas lang siguro ang lighting mo... keep it up...

Ar_Can_EVSU wrote:nice design and render neil... napalakas lang siguro ang lighting mo... keep it up...

ayun salamat sa pagsilip master. noted po sir

Ganda Sir improve kana talaga, keep it up

reybits wrote:Ganda Sir improve kana talaga, keep it up

ayun master reybits salamat sa pagdaan. well practis ng practis ayun may kinalabasan. pero syempre huwag parin titigil para maging mahusay tulad ng mga masters

Sir ok po ung render nio. Ung sa sky/background lang din po napuna ko sir, tapos masyado siguro malinis yung harapan natin..add a bit of fallen leaves or something cgur0.nice render!..

my comments:

- medyo pale ang sky
- yung lightings iba ibang type at iba iba ang level
- find more suitable camera view
- wall bricks is repetitive
- mappings of door
- glass reflection
- arrangement of landscapes.
- undefined pavement.

Practice lang ng practice bro. makukuha rin yan. tignan mo, masasanay mo yan kung ano ang to avoid or dapat gawin. paunti unti. basta mag refer ka sa magazine, or pagtyagaan mo yung part na yun kung san ka may mali...

Nice job pards! keep it up!

allanix wrote:Sir ok po ung render nio. Ung sa sky/background lang din po napuna ko sir, tapos masyado siguro malinis yung harapan natin..add a bit of fallen leaves or something cgur0.nice render!..

noted po sir

kensweb wrote:my comments:

- medyo pale ang sky
- yung lightings iba ibang type at iba iba ang level
- find more suitable camera view
- wall bricks is repetitive
- mappings of door
- glass reflection
- arrangement of landscapes.
- undefined pavement.

Practice lang ng practice bro. makukuha rin yan. tignan mo, masasanay mo yan kung ano ang to avoid or dapat gawin. paunti unti. basta mag refer ka sa magazine, or pagtyagaan mo yung part na yun kung san ka may mali...

Nice job pards! keep it up!

note po yan lahat sir salamat sa pagdaan

ibang view nmn sir neil, yung makikita yung right side, ilayo mo ng konti ang view pra maappreciate yung ganda ng garden, babaan mo cguro ng konti itensity ng sun, galing sir gusto ko yung garden settings mo, simple ang design ng bahay pero mganda.

Hindi maganda ang camera angle, walang dating IMO lang naman, pati railing design pwede pang iimprove to add accent sa facade.
Pwede mo nang ayusin ang background with PS, add trees and nice sky. Color correct mo na lang din sa PS ung sa tingin mo hindi ok na objects.

artMhan wrote:ibang view nmn sir neil, yung makikita yung right side, ilayo mo ng konti ang view pra maappreciate yung ganda ng garden, babaan mo cguro ng konti itensity ng sun, galing sir gusto ko yung garden settings mo, simple ang design ng bahay pero mganda.

maraming salamat po sa pagdaan noted po lahat ng sinabi niyo master.
try ko pong gumawa ng view after ng pinapagawa sakin medyo natabunan ako sir

corpsegrinder wrote:Hindi maganda ang camera angle, walang dating IMO lang naman, pati railing design pwede pang iimprove to add accent sa facade.
Pwede mo nang ayusin ang background with PS, add trees and nice sky. Color correct mo na lang din sa PS ung sa tingin mo hindi ok na objects.

noted po master

ayus to master ganda ng landscape kunting retouch nalang

cutie_raine wrote:ayus to master ganda ng landscape kunting retouch nalang

thanks ate sa pagdaan

nice render master neil.

ar_monzter wrote:nice render master neil.

salamat sa pagdaan sir

nice practice sir...nasobrahan lang ata yung intensity ng araw..at parang madilim masyado yung shadow..add level to lighten the shadow nalang para pagmatch sa scene lighting mo then add din ata ng contrast...great practice sir..

Update looks much better..

cloud20 wrote:Update looks much better..

well thanks again master cloud sa pagdaan. nagapply ako ng vray dirt. then i control sa photoshop.

nice update sir neil, konting adjust pa ng camera pa kanan. itaas mo din pa yung height. (man's eye level)lagyan mo pa ng trees sa likod.IMHO... praktis ka din sa saktong composition. just keep on practicing bro.thats the secret.

bizkong wrote:nice update sir neil, konting adjust pa ng camera pa kanan. itaas mo din pa yung height. (man's eye level)lagyan mo pa ng trees sa likod.IMHO... praktis ka din sa saktong composition. just keep on practicing bro.thats the secret.

naku si master bizkong- salamat sa pagdaan master. noted po lahat master. try ko magpractice ng magpractice at magbasa ng tuitorial. try ko pong lagpasan mga render ng mga master to be a challenge in my life.

Lighting looks much more natural in the new update. Nice render po sir!

burjdubai91 wrote:Lighting looks much more natural in the new update. Nice render po sir!

salamat again sa pagdaan sir. ill keep exploring how to set the best lighting using max and photoshop.thanks for everything