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Post by AJ Cortez Mon Jan 12, 2009 3:00 pm

Hi everyone,

Here's my take on the CGTalk's Lighting Challenge...Model was made by Alvaro Luna Bautista and Joel Andersdon.
Textured and Rendered by me using 3DS Max Design 2009 & Mental Ray.

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Just checked today that there's a new challege, check it out at cgtalk...
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Post by nyop Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:14 pm

render is okay, but your architrave are segmented.
bump also, look like's flat. it cant be perfect like this image? imho.
how about the flooring plain granite?
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Post by Butz_Arki Mon Jan 12, 2009 5:27 pm

looks great ...i agree with madznyop. noticeable segmented architrave..lighting is good...rendering is fine...keep it up
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Post by silvercrown Mon Jan 12, 2009 6:44 pm

Lighting is really good sir! It's Perfect! 2thumbsup
Segments in curves is fine, it adds realism IMHO thumbsup
May we know sir kung para saan ang building?
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Post by AJ Cortez Mon Jan 12, 2009 6:58 pm

Thanks for your critiques! Fair enough, yung mga objects in the foreground should get extra TLC Wink I'm still working on the proper unwrapping techniques. The building is actually the London Natural History museum.
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Post by Nico.Patdu Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:09 pm

very nice sir Very Happy both rendering and modelling
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Post by jay3design Mon Jan 12, 2009 10:19 pm

galing ng modeling & render keep it up 2thumbsup
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Post by Guest Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:16 am

Nice lighting bro and texturing as well..Hindi po ba standard yung view ng challenge?Ive seen some guys here na sumali din po ata sa challenge and they both have the same view..Anyway nice work here..Keep it up..

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Post by vamp_lestat Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:52 am

sir.. nice mapping... suggest lang siguro to add some dirt para mas realistic.. since this is an old building... tama po ba... and sir.. where are the dinos!!! Smile sayng din un... nwei.... nice study in lighting.. galing nyo po sir...
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Post by skyscraper100 Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:09 am

wow!! galing po sir thumbsup
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Post by bokkins Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:13 am

looking good AJ. good luck on this one. 2thumbsup
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Post by arkiedmund Tue Jan 13, 2009 9:31 am

Nice lighting, Specially since you used mental ray. Are the views not standard. Hope I could also see the dinos, and some other elements. Looking forward to an update to this wonderful image.
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Post by oDi120522 Tue Jan 13, 2009 7:38 pm

goodluck ser!!! post more!!! hippie hippie hippie
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Post by Guest Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:32 am

astig! hippie

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Post by jadamat Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:23 am

sir,ang lupit nman ng modelling na ito,but there are things still need to be fixed like the voussoirs on your arch,,,they appear too long, there are metalwork ornaments between the web members of the steel arch in that museum,,,i think yours has none and the mapping of the veneer stones in your walls appear to be large...lighting is excellent po,,,sa details na lang ang kulang,,,sinimulan mu na kasi ehh,,tapusin mu na lang...hehehe,,,looking forward to see the final output... thumbsup
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Post by enjoy8OGART Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:19 am

wow sir astig toh ha detailed na detailed.. ganda pa nun stained glass na material.. hehehe astig!!! mental ray... galeng buttrock
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Post by AJ Cortez Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:02 pm

To everyone!

I really really appreciate all of your comments and cCs! Its funny how when I post an image, I have this habit of thinking that I've spent as much time as I can with it already...got to get out of that habit, or just not post until it's completed...

...which again comes back to, nothing really ever gets totally completed...there's always something to fix, or tweek, or crop, or color correct, lol.

But really, I thank you all again for viewing and comments! I continue to be inspired by your own posts and work!
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Post by aldrinv2 Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:11 am

Sir,
Like the floral detail on the ceiling. Galing ng render. Keep on posting.
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Post by Mastersketzzz Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:03 am

hi man, everything looks perfect, great composition, some comments on small details, bricks maybe need some bumps, the arch is segmented and over burnt on some parts, the rest great... good luck bro and congrats..Post more....

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