Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

+4
Neil Joshua Rosario
ortzak
arjun_samar
Dollmaker
8 posters

Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Dollmaker Thu May 19, 2011 3:13 pm

Here is finished Charles Allem Bel Air House! Smile Let me know what you think about it Smile

3Ds Max 2010, Vray 1.5 Smile Some Photoshop

Hello to my friend Darkirender from cgpinoy Smile

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  33625611

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  34688381

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  76607419

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  29733734

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  79494209 2thumbsup Shocked
Dollmaker
Dollmaker
CGP Newbie
CGP Newbie

Number of posts : 100
Age : 47
Location : India
Registration date : 02/08/2010

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by arjun_samar Sun May 22, 2011 9:46 pm

Looking good render love the grass, (wish my machine can do that). Dollmaker from ever and ronen's blog?
arjun_samar
arjun_samar
CGP Apprentice
CGP Apprentice

Number of posts : 772
Age : 36
Location : Catbalogan, Samar but working in Nova, Q.C.
Registration date : 12/05/2009

http://arjun-placiente.webs.com/

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by ortzak Sun May 22, 2011 10:13 pm

color is off, wood finish is too much reflective..chess like design is kinda weird for me when it rains..BG is lo-res...nice try thumbsup
ortzak
ortzak
CGP Expert
CGP Expert

Number of posts : 4555
Age : 53
Location : City Of Angels
Registration date : 14/01/2009

http://plandesignvisualize.blogspot.com

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Neil Joshua Rosario Sun May 22, 2011 10:21 pm

comment nasabi na sundin mo nalang sir
Neil Joshua Rosario
Neil Joshua Rosario
CGP Guru
CGP Guru

Number of posts : 1827
Age : 34
Location : Bangus City
Registration date : 02/06/2010

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by andy32 Mon May 23, 2011 2:32 am

nice render pero paano maiiwasan sa VRay yung reflection nya eh parang transparent ang dating? i have encountered sa mga renders ko na yung reflection ng glass ko is yung image sa background.
andy32
andy32
CGP Apprentice
CGP Apprentice

Number of posts : 235
Registration date : 22/07/2009

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Android Mon May 23, 2011 3:47 am

Sky background is inappropriate in the night scene image because you still used the daytime sky, what you did is just lower the light source to make the view or scene darker but still it cannot hide the bluish sky. In the real world the sky has redish yellow color when the sun is going down let's say 6:00 pm, not blue that turn into black. while the tree leaves has no reflection there is no gloss at all, there should be.

Android
CGP Newbie
CGP Newbie

Number of posts : 8
Age : 34
Location : Philippines
Registration date : 07/05/2011

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by aesonck Mon May 23, 2011 7:33 pm

1.3rd image you have tree blowups, at the 1st image your blocking this up with the 2 huge box supporting the canopy.
2.Reduce all the planters big wood box.
3.Relayout chekered design
buttrock
aesonck
aesonck
CGP Expert
CGP Expert

Number of posts : 2448
Age : 44
Location : Philippines. La Trinidad-Visayas
Registration date : 13/07/2010

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Dollmaker Tue May 24, 2011 12:07 pm

Thanks everyone for your reply Smile I will keep your suggestions in mind..
Dollmaker
Dollmaker
CGP Newbie
CGP Newbie

Number of posts : 100
Age : 47
Location : India
Registration date : 02/08/2010

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Dollmaker Tue May 24, 2011 12:08 pm

Arjun yes i am from there Smile
Dollmaker
Dollmaker
CGP Newbie
CGP Newbie

Number of posts : 100
Age : 47
Location : India
Registration date : 02/08/2010

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by darkirender Fri May 27, 2011 1:42 pm

nice renders baya. but you can do more than this im sure like tweaking the leaves/weeds map making them transluscent perhaps or maybe a bit of reflectivity.
darkirender
darkirender
CGP Apprentice
CGP Apprentice

Number of posts : 313
Age : 46
Location : MANAMA, BAHA RAIN
Registration date : 23/12/2009

Back to top Go down

Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!  Empty Re: Charles Allem Bel Air House At Day And Dusk!

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum