2 Storey Residential Updated

Open for comments and suggestions. salamat po..

sir ok, yung glass reflection lang....at rest good render....

salamat sir.. newbie pa sa glass refelction. pano po ba yun?

http://www.cgpinoy.org/t2990-vray-glass-reflection-and-glossiness?highlight=glass+reflection

nice post sir
comment ko po ito

1.yung reflection
2. yung arc sa entrance sir nagkaroon ng kanto
3. konting bump or displacement sa stone wall
4. madili yung sa puno and yung car na pula agaw atensyon mas ok siguro
kung tanggalin ..( opinyon ko lang yun sir )

the rest is ok... keep on posting... tambay lang tambay and post sa cginoy marami kang matutunan dito

God bless..

salamat mga bossing. noted po lahat!!

-nice start..
--additional comment: walang ridge cap yung roof..

sir deo hindi ko pa nakakapa kung pano gawin yun po e.

good start.more study..,

Sir,

Ganda po ng design and rendering mo,
dagdag ka lang ng pathway sa maliit na gate at lagay guro ng kurtina para lalong makita yung reflection sa glass mo...
Konting photoshop po para hindi madilim yung mga puno.
Lagay mo din Workflow mo Sir,para sa mga bago na tulad natin.
Maraming Salamat po!!!

IMHO: saturation & exposure issues.
- saturation: car, window muntin, Vegetation
- over exposure: roof tiles or kulay ba talga ito ng roof?

keep posting sir.

ang cool ng design.. nice render

yung car lang po sa front agaw atensyon
overall nice start

keep postin

salamat sa mga comment and suggestion sir. newbie pa talaga ako sa rendering e..

update ko po yung second image..salamat!

1.Put your red car on the right lane.
2.Ceiling and gutter, differ in max materials.
3.Put some Struct. support on your carport roof
4.Make your home porch inviting ( make it bigger).
5.Segments and Noise.
6.Their's a big and small window at your dining ,make it identical.
7.