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Post by natski08 Thu Apr 28, 2011 1:01 am

Hi CGP pips,

Exterior naman, again good and bad comments are welcome.
3D max, Vray and PS
thanks. Exterior renovation 523692

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Post by arkiedmund Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:01 am

here are a few comments:

- work on your composition, maybe a better camera angle will work here. Maybe move the camera to the right a bit.
- get rid of the car, as it is distracting in this view of yours.
- image needs more contrast to it, as it is generally looking flat for now.

Hope you can update this so we can compare the difference and help you also along the way.

Good luck!
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Post by aesonck Thu Apr 28, 2011 8:10 pm

capuccino lang sa akin, nice render! 2thumbsup
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Post by natski08 Fri Apr 29, 2011 1:43 am

arkiedmund wrote:here are a few comments:

- work on your composition, maybe a better camera angle will work here. Maybe move the camera to the right a bit.
- get rid of the car, as it is distracting in this view of yours.
- image needs more contrast to it, as it is generally looking flat for now.

Hope you can update this so we can compare the difference and help you also along the way.

Good luck!

thanks sir ed for the info. i will definitely update this. and will incorporate your suggestion. Very Happy

aesonck wrote:capuccino lang sa akin, nice render! Exterior renovation 808695

thanks sir.. cappucino coming up... hehehe
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