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Post by quicklearner Sun Apr 24, 2011 12:55 pm

Hi guys, just want to add again my latest work. ako na po ang nagrevise ng exterior design. originally po di sa akin yung unang design. comments and critics are most welcome.
WF Autocad, 3dsmax09 + vray and photoshop.


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Post by mhyles Sun Apr 24, 2011 1:58 pm

nice design and render sir minor comment sir road mapping sir Final Revision 808695 Final Revision 6685
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Post by arjeitect Sun Apr 24, 2011 8:10 pm

nice render sir...
first image parang nakalutang ang building sir... thumbsup
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Post by aesonck Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:45 am

2thumbsup nice
1.Continue your wood grooves on front facade
2.Remove your carport grill above gate, you have low fence.
3.Enhance B.g trees, their is light , and dark
4.White canopy shadows (invisible)
5.Others 2thumbsup ,nice work
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Post by quicklearner Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:19 pm

mhyles wrote:nice design and render sir minor comment sir road mapping sir Final Revision 808695 Final Revision 6685

salamat po nang marami. next time po, adjust ko ang road mapping.
salamat po sa comment...
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Post by quicklearner Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:21 pm

arjeitect wrote:nice render sir...
first image parang nakalutang ang building sir... thumbsup

salamat sa pag view. parang nakalutang ba. hehehe siguro nakaapekto dun yung road mapping.. hehehe
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Post by quicklearner Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:24 pm

aesonck wrote: 2thumbsup nice
1.Continue your wood grooves on front facade
2.Remove your carport grill above gate, you have low fence.
3.Enhance B.g trees, their is light , and dark
4.White canopy shadows (invisible)
5.Others 2thumbsup ,nice work

salamat master. salamat sa mga comments. saan po ako makakakuha ng magandang Back ground trees?
textures lang kasi yan master. saan po ako pedeng magdownload ng mga trees na realistic?
salamat po ulit...
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Post by RQUI Mon Apr 25, 2011 7:47 pm

nice design.
comment lang po sir.
-material and mapping issue
*road material and garage
*bricks
*door
*concrete wall(siguro less bump lang po at tiling. nagmukha na pong anay finish?)
-daanan po sa gate para sa mga tao.

keep sharing po... godbless!
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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:42 pm

RQUI wrote:nice design.
comment lang po sir.
-material and mapping issue
*road material and garage
*bricks
*door
*concrete wall(siguro less bump lang po at tiling. nagmukha na pong anay finish?)
-daanan po sa gate para sa mga tao.

keep sharing po... godbless!
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agree ako dto
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