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Post by MrHarimani Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:30 pm

another design home renovation....please comment and critic....no photoshop work except the couple beside car....

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Post by aesonck Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:44 pm

1.Remove the small white moulding
2.How can we open the big panel of your windows??, no awning?
3.Check your background trees and reflection trees infront.
4.What's this white mannequin at the door.
5.Your exterior pinlights wont last.
6.Palm stem texture.
7.Car Front lights are gone.
8.Design Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven home exterior 523692 Nice
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Post by rasskizge Sat Apr 23, 2011 12:59 am

MrHarimani wrote:another design home renovation....please comment and critic....no photoshop work except the couple beside car....

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I recommend the following
1) The parking lot is very congested,infuture if you have more than one car will cause you parking problem.Remove the room on the backside of the car ,to get good space.
2) The windows elevation on the ground floor,particularly to the left of the tree is of high raise.You can make it look simple,can grow garden before that.

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Post by MrHarimani Sat Apr 23, 2011 4:31 am

oke i will fix it..the mannequin is request from owner..he want to add a little sculpture at the main entrance....from fengshui....thanks for the input

okay thanks for your comment...i am waiting revision from owner too....

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Post by bing1370 Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:33 am

we can do lot of design but if the client speak what they want you can not do anything, client always follow. nice render...
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Post by archshade02 Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:44 am

nice lighting bro
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Post by RQUI Thu Apr 28, 2011 5:31 am

nice design and clean render. like the lighting. thumbsup
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Post by MrHarimani Thu Apr 28, 2011 11:13 pm

thanks for the comment sir...anyway this view being rejected.....i update the revision.....
please comment and critic...sorry bad english...i speak english just little...if any forum rules i broke..please advised me....
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Post by Neil Joshua Rosario Fri Apr 29, 2011 1:33 am

nice lighting
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Post by theomatheus Fri Apr 29, 2011 7:28 am

i like the update render, its cool home exterior 808695
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Post by MrHarimani Fri Apr 29, 2011 10:59 pm

thanks sir...

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