hospital malaysia

halo all...i am new here...sorry bad english...lived in malaysia for almost 3 years...my recent proposal for hospital at penang..please comment.....

welcome sir.nice start

thx....critic or comment please???......

What a ramp!

Nice rendering kawan...pls indicate your workflow (software)...welcome to CGP

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Thanks and welcome to CGPinoy.

yeah right..maybe the ramp is too steep....oke...thx for critixs

i am sorry....i am just new here...okay i will read the rules first....

That ramp reminds me of a resort where they have this pool with a slide, we used to go there during summer.... hehe

Just teasing, welcome dude!

Your ramp is very dangerous!

Welcome to CGP. Your render is very good. But you have to do something with the design. Good luck!

ok thanks for the input...sorry if design is not good...i will improve it....

MrHarimani wrote:ok thanks for the input...sorry if design is not good...i will improve it....

You know what, there is no problem in the design except for that ramp. The idea why you raised that ramp is to reach the lobby which is on the second level and the first level is a parking I assume. Why not make a
basement? Make that as the parking OR you can keep it as it is just makethe lobby PLUS the parking on the first level. So hilarious seeing that ramp, imagine this is a hospital.


Thanks for sharing your works.

wow nice render but the ramp explode your design. find designers hand book the black one it will cost you 250 pesos. you can find the proportion and the standards in building

Neil Joshua Rosario wrote:wow nice render but the ramp explode your design. find designers hand book the black one it will cost you 250 pesos. you can find the proportion and the standards in building

He lives in Malaysia,

oke thanks everyone.....i will fix it...i really dont realize the ramp is my bad in this design.....sorry again bad english......anyway happy easter.....

Welcome to Cgpinoy

Nice Render, try to study ramp slopes.

we will wait for the update sir. for sure its nice
- just add shadow to the people in the scene
thanks for sharing keep posting...

Hi Harinmani...welcome to CGP...Your rendering is good!...but with that limited space/area for sure you cant attain a descent ramp slope...do you mind sharing the design brief?...TA

i am sorry...i dont understand ....design brief???sorry my english is not very good....
already revised the ramp...input from buddy here....also another view and adjust color a little grey....please comment and critic....thanks...

This ramp is way better, still steep but better than the first one. You know what you can do here? Move the start and end of the ramp to the edges of your lot, that way, you will have enough room for the slope to be less steep.

thanks sir....but this revision already been approved by owner...so i dont think i will fix it again...ahahaha..thx...

nice design sir.. keep sharing..

ramp or driveway too steep..dangerous...nice render btw!!

oke thks for the input...the ramp is still a problem..cause the lot i have is too little...here is final revision and glass material reflection seting...i think this final revision is little uglier than the first one..but the owner insist this one better....please comment.....

for me..the first one is more better but still need to work-out a little bit with your ramp(refer to IBC requirements.if applicable to your area) otherwise, isn't accessible..