de Guzman Residence

Latest work. CnC nalang po! para mahasa pa!

ang puno naginamit ko dito ay ni-rip ko lang sa catalog(PDF) ng archmodel tapos sinalpak ko lang ps, para mabilis lang ma render!

CAD+MAX2009+Vray+PS

original design(mas gusto ko)


approved design

imho.kindly look for anothr bg...add refraction sa glass po bosing..cant dtermine ano roof mat nyo po,,add bump on it,,,,,ano po ba nangyari sa upper leftmost part ng roof?cgro sa model nyo po yan bosing,pki chek po..
i notice a rflction sa carport wall po,ung sa property line,pwede pa yan ma tweak sa ps,,,car shaders din po,,,,ang ung mat ng syd wlk and road dpat magkaiba,,pls lower the cam view,,cnsya po, naprami ung comments,,
,,kip posting boss...

jarul wrote:imho.kindly look for anothr bg...add refraction sa glass po bosing..cant dtermine ano roof mat nyo po,,add bump on it,,,,,ano po ba nangyari sa upper leftmost part ng roof?cgro sa model nyo po yan bosing,pki chek po..
i notice a rflction sa carport wall po,ung sa property line,pwede pa yan ma tweak sa ps,,,car shaders din po,,,,ang ung mat ng syd wlk and road dpat magkaiba,,pls lower the cam view,,cnsya po, naprami ung comments,,
,,kip posting boss...

oo nga dami mo comment, hehehe! yoko pakita loob kasi ala time imodel kaya sinagad ko ang reflection nito, shingles po ang mat sa roof, upper leftmost ng roof? cant see any problem? hehehehe

thanks man! noted yan! well appreciated ang comments mo!

WURPWURPS wrote:

jarul wrote:imho.kindly look for anothr bg...add refraction sa glass po bosing..cant dtermine ano roof mat nyo po,,add bump on it,,,,,ano po ba nangyari sa upper leftmost part ng roof?cgro sa model nyo po yan bosing,pki chek po..
i notice a rflction sa carport wall po,ung sa property line,pwede pa yan ma tweak sa ps,,,car shaders din po,,,,ang ung mat ng syd wlk and road dpat magkaiba,,pls lower the cam view,,cnsya po, naprami ung comments,,
,,kip posting boss...

oo nga dami mo comment, hehehe! yoko pakita loob kasi ala time imodel kaya sinagad ko ang reflection nito, shingles po ang mat sa roof, upper leftmost ng roof? cant see any problem? hehehehe

thanks man! noted yan! well appreciated ang comments mo!

bosing,,pwede k namn mglagay ng blinds/curtain kung ayaw mo pakita sa loob..khit ako..hnd ko naman gnagawan ng detail sa loob..tnx boss

sir... modeling is very good... maybe udjust on the rendering... there is a reflection on the wall, left side(fence)... reflection on the mirror... a bit too reflective... imho... on framing the scene, maybe adjust the height of the the image to give more space for the background to play... you can do this in ps nlng siguro... just crop ur image then adjust the height...

oi bro sensya na ha ngayon lng nakasilip! pagaling na talaga ! oo nga ganyan talaga pag post editting minsan kasi mahirap din and matagal makuha gusto mong timpla at naghahabol pa tayo ng oras ... alam mo ang solusyun jan he he he bili ka na ng bagong pc na malakas he he he he...modelling and texturing ok na pero sa lighting adjust mo pa kunti and settings kalutin pa cguro mahuhuli din yan c vray he he he...pag nahuli na ikulong mo na patawan mo ng life sentence he he he! good job bro...wait ako sa nect post..

Modeling is very good. Suggestions ko is you change the shader of your car or remove it from the scene nalang. also, change your background. check this site, madami silang free skies... good luck!

http://www.1000skies.com/partials/index.htm

unting hagod pa, master
hagod nang hagod

Kunti nlng kulang, hingi ka kay jarul ng vray sun, camera, at rendering settings!

bokkins wrote:Modeling is very good. Suggestions ko is you change the shader of your car or remove it from the scene nalang. also, change your background. check this site, madami silang free skies... good luck!

http://www.1000skies.com/partials/index.htm

noted po yan! thanks sir!
sir boks thanks sa site! tagal ko na hanap ng ganito! thanks ulit! da best ka talaga!

3dpjumong2007 wrote:oi bro sensya na ha ngayon lng nakasilip! pagaling na talaga ! oo nga ganyan talaga pag post editting minsan kasi mahirap din and matagal makuha gusto mong timpla at naghahabol pa tayo ng oras ... alam mo ang solusyun jan he he he bili ka na ng bagong pc na malakas he he he he...modelling and texturing ok na pero sa lighting adjust mo pa kunti and settings kalutin pa cguro mahuhuli din yan c vray he he he...pag nahuli na ikulong mo na patawan mo ng life sentence he he he! good job bro...wait ako sa nect post..

thanks sir! hehehe sana nga may maawa sakin bigyan ako ng pinaglumaang quadcore na machine! hehehe!
thanks sir! tagal ko na talagang hinahabol at patawan ng sintensya! hahahhaa!

vamp_lestat wrote:sir... modeling is very good... maybe udjust on the rendering... there is a reflection on the wall, left side(fence)... reflection on the mirror... a bit too reflective... imho... on framing the scene, maybe adjust the height of the the image to give more space for the background to play... you can do this in ps nlng siguro... just crop ur image then adjust the height...

thanks sir sa advice! well noted to! apply ko sa next post ko!

@jarul; oo nga po curtain solution(bat di ko naisip to?)! hehehehe, sir penge naman ako settings mo sabi ni bossing crown!

@silvercrown; thanks sir

@sir dickie; master sensei, hehehe hagurin ko na talaga!hahahha! thanks sensei! session tayu ulit!

oks nmn para skin GODBLESS

im going to call it as it is so please take this with a pinch of salt:
---camera view will be better from the right side, semi 1-point. right now most of the scene is taken up by the carport & its blank firewall... speaking of the firewall, is that glossy paint on it?...
---did you try for a beige color or is that really yellow all over the house?... besides it clashes with the violet (???) car...
---be patient with modelling; your gutters could use more work unless you decided to really make them flat... like fascia boards...
---i think what sir jarul pointed out re the upper left part of the roof is that photoshopped mess you did with the eaves... it IS post edited is it not?...
---is there a difference between the original & the approved design except for the color of the grillwork?...
---lighting is a study in contrasts... partly too bright, partly too dark...

more work sir...
we'll all get there eventually...

ganda neto sir, background lang cguro, camera angle and yung car, very dominating...IMHO lang sir, but the rest are good...keep posting pa po sir...God Bless...

dagdag lang ako ng suggestion sir,

masyado malaki yung image ng bahay sakop lahat ng space ng frame mo..
kung medyo layuan mo ang camera - pwede mo lagyan ng konting drama - worms eye view o kaya medyo birds eye view. medyo malaking lens o pati na rin FOV ( wag ka limited sa 45 defualt)
pag nagawa mo na yan magkakaron ka na ng space sa ground, space sa sky,
pwede mo nang iframe sa dahon ng puno o lagyang ng kotse na buo or lagyang ng depth of field.

isang suggestion lang to pero pag ginawa mo malaking diperensy pag na render mo!

gudluck!

ok to sir!, galing ng lighting mo....keep it up!

Hi sir Wurps..Dami na nilang comments and suggestions.Oks nmn lhat ng comments work out na lng po natin..Design is good and rendering as well.Keep it up bro and Keep posting..

medyo pihitin pa natin to..keep it up

cgro sir.. antialiasing problema d2

okey na man ah.. kunting practice pa...
good luck