SIMPLE INTERIOR

Good day sa inyo mga sir at mam! Ito po yung mga product ko sa second try ko sa 3ds max. Pa C&C na lang po mga sir at mam. Pasensya na po sa quality, very low quality po kasi hindi na kaya mag render ng laptop ko.

Workflow: SU7 - 3dsMax+vray1.5sp2

(di ko pa na change sa green ang pendant light)

ok ang design ito comments ko
-gloomy lahat ng rendering fix the lighting nlng or ps mo siya curve up mo lng
-1st image add accessories sa dinning table mag lagay ka ng light sa bar counter
-2nd image ng iba ung fixture mo sa bar counter from red to green ng bleed tuloy yung kulay ung door hindi nakalapat mabuti
-3rd image same as the 1st image
-4th image sunog ung labas mo madilim sa loob ng wash yung taas ng cabinets mo wala nang shadow
-5th image sunog ung sa may pin lights mo

1.1st Image Change your curtain texture
2.Minimize the 4 wood texture, its much.
3.2nd Image 2 doors right , the bottom is closed then small opening in the upper part.
4.2nd Image, their is a kitchen-bar hood wheres the exhaust vent?.
5.Put some lights in the 2nd floor.( for space depth).
6.Last Image review background and interior lighting (light contrast)
7.

paki update nalang mga comento ng mga bihasa sir.

adiktuz wrote:ok ang design ito comments ko
-gloomy lahat ng rendering fix the lighting nlng or ps mo siya curve up mo lng
-1st image add accessories sa dinning table mag lagay ka ng light sa bar counter
-2nd image ng iba ung fixture mo sa bar counter from red to green ng bleed tuloy yung kulay ung door hindi nakalapat mabuti
-3rd image same as the 1st image
-4th image sunog ung labas mo madilim sa loob ng wash yung taas ng cabinets mo wala nang shadow
-5th image sunog ung sa may pin lights mo

maraming salamat sir! nangangapa pa rin ako sa tamang pag timpla ng lighting. galing po ng mga advice mo sir! noted po lahat.

aesonck wrote:1.1st Image Change your curtain texture
2.Minimize the 4 wood texture, its much.
3.2nd Image 2 doors right , the bottom is closed then small opening in the upper part.
4.2nd Image, their is a kitchen-bar hood wheres the exhaust vent?.
5.Put some lights in the 2nd floor.( for space depth).
6.Last Image review background and interior lighting (light contrast)
7.

salamat ng marami sa comments sir. lalo akong ginaganahan mag practice.