simple 2-strorey (updated)

under construction na po,,garage,balcony at render lang saken,hehehe.Practice ko na rin po ng hdri envi,i don't know if i got it correctly..pasensiya na rin sa mga sablay pati sa mga light leaks, mediyo minadali at low settings lang po ..SU-VFSU-Ps
C and C's are welcome

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i dont know if sobra postpro, pero lighten mo ang darkgreen na wall paint at mga trees,. yun lang boss, halata kasing 3d masyado bigla ang transition mula sa white (imho) dapat may pambasag na element hehe!! like semidark or other complementing color or maybe moulding.. yun lang sakin boss wag ka sana ma-offend..

imho
bump sa bricks
palutangin mo pa konti yung bump sa wall
add bump sa tiles
gawa ka walk way pa sa harap sa may grass
chamfer mo pa side walk
mas ok ata nasa loob na ng fence yun mga puno

noted po lahat!

...ayos lng yan padi! nice car..
nkakatakot lang yung roof mo,heheh
scale down mo ng konti..mas mganda kung
same mat. ng road mo dun sa pathway..then
bwas ulit ng noise sa glass,frosty n ang dating..

try mo rin ung ambient occlusion sa PS..

Congratz!

comments are said... same here... nice. keep posting sir...

1.Change your brown stone
2.Carport, their is a green paint connecting the stone that intersects the edge.
3.Exposed column ,instead of green paint change to stone
4.1st image, front wall- green -white- stone (its align), put some shape variation/contrast.
5. Rendering ( )

thanks for the comments guys and noted po lahat!i'll try to update,dami kasing gawain,yung dream house ko nga sa WIP di ko pa nagagalaw.hehehe

...padi manually model mo ba yng roof tile mo?
ganda nyan san pwde mka download ng ganyan?
pa share naman,SU user din'

--thnks'

nice render especially the roof

thanks sir!
pa-update lang po

comments had been said... keep posting

bro try mo same color ng roof ang window frames mo para lumutang ang window mo,
terrace bro mababa yata
-ramp din bro nakalimutan mo yata heheh
-lighting ayos bro

i think the update is more like it bro!!!... hehe ito yung gusto kong feel ng scene mo..

hindi bumagay yung brick cladding sa window sir. sharp edge ng sidewalk.
masiyadung mataas ang multiplier ng displacement mo sa roof.

BONE CRUSHER wrote:hindi bumagay yung brick cladding sa window sir. sharp edge ng sidewalk.
masiyadung mataas ang multiplier ng displacement mo sa roof.

hahaha!sorry but can't you distinguish a roof texture with displacement from a modeled roof?

maganda. good render settings.
kulang lang ata sa blending ng overall compositions.
do you really have to use two types of wood color?
medyo confusing lang yung design intent nung house, anong architectural style sya sir?