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LANAI
by chao Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:29 pm
First topic message reminder :
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! THIS IS MY FIRST POST OF THE YEAR HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS!!HAPPY NEW YEAR AGAIN!!
"THERE IS NOTHING GLAMOROUS ABOUT WHAT I DO , I AM JUST A WORKING MAN"
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! THIS IS MY FIRST POST OF THE YEAR HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS!!HAPPY NEW YEAR AGAIN!!
"THERE IS NOTHING GLAMOROUS ABOUT WHAT I DO , I AM JUST A WORKING MAN"
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Re: LANAI
by dickie_ilagan Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:30 am
very much like it...
ganyan mo ako iniinspire lalo kung model by handcraft mo lahat...
ganyan mo ako iniinspire lalo kung model by handcraft mo lahat...
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Re: LANAI
by Guest Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:01 am
Rendering wise its fine but one thing I'd always suggest - Research.
Tatami mats are made in fixed sizes, similarly - they are laid out in a fixed fashion. You don't just fit them in. They aren't really shiny because they are made from straw...
Why do I know - because I love sleeping in them
Also, sliding doors should have a base from which they could slide - and you don't have them as if the doors will cut the tatamis to shreds. Its already looking photorealistic the only thing missing are the fine important details that will tell me that your work is true to a Japanese setting...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tatami
Tatami mats are made in fixed sizes, similarly - they are laid out in a fixed fashion. You don't just fit them in. They aren't really shiny because they are made from straw...
Why do I know - because I love sleeping in them
Also, sliding doors should have a base from which they could slide - and you don't have them as if the doors will cut the tatamis to shreds. Its already looking photorealistic the only thing missing are the fine important details that will tell me that your work is true to a Japanese setting...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tatami
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Re: LANAI
by ytsejeffx Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:33 am
galing nito sir!......ok ang rendering......kaya lang nkaka-bitin, wala bang ibang camera angle?...... 
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Re: LANAI
by wheay Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:11 pm
may naalala lang ako nung nakita ko to. prang kill bill ang dating nya sakin. hehe! nice one. hanep! astig.
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Re: LANAI
by AJ Cortez Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:30 pm
These are really nice! The lighting of the space makes it look very peaceful & relaxing!
Watch the coincidental edges of your image, where the edge of the wood on the left meets the edge of the image, also on the bottom where the pillows meet the edge. If you give it a little breathing room there, it might make the composition better.
Keep up the good work!
Watch the coincidental edges of your image, where the edge of the wood on the left meets the edge of the image, also on the bottom where the pillows meet the edge. If you give it a little breathing room there, it might make the composition better.
Keep up the good work!
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Re: LANAI
by Guest Thu Jan 08, 2009 4:03 am
NIce one CHao!Long time no post a..Busy ata sa work..Nice lighting bro..Goodluck! 
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Re: LANAI
by vamp_lestat Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:45 am
v_wrangler wrote:Rendering wise its fine but one thing I'd always suggest - Research.
Tatami mats are made in fixed sizes, similarly - they are laid out in a fixed fashion. You don't just fit them in. They aren't really shiny because they are made from straw...
Why do I know - because I love sleeping in them
Also, sliding doors should have a base from which they could slide - and you don't have them as if the doors will cut the tatamis to shreds. Its already looking photorealistic the only thing missing are the fine important details that will tell me that your work is true to a Japanese setting...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tatami
sir v_rangler.... i love the c&c... ang galing nyo talga sir... very informative...
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Re: LANAI
by chao Thu Jan 08, 2009 11:21 pm
salamat sa lahat ng nag comments...hayaan nyo revise ko po to para dun sa mga comments nyo pag may extra time!! about dun sa area ko. sa RETIRO LALOMA po ako sir!! tnx again cgpinoy!!!
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