Residence and Sari-Sari Store (Update)

Hello cgpipz! Share ko lang pinarender ng isang kaibigan, exterior material choices at konting design contribution sa akin. C & c's are most welcome. TIA!

Update: Pinatanggal na ng owner yung sari-sari store. C and C's for further improvement pa rin. Thanks.

cool! ganda ng pagkakarender sir... ayos!.

wow..

astig to sir..nice design and render..
ganda ng glass.!!!

ang ganda ng pagkakarender nito bos ah.,

wow ayos oh very nice

minor coments:
-for me sir pagtuloy nalang yong bricks (sa gitna second level) sa bandang ibaba
- sa sari sari (first image ) ano diskarte sa roll up kasi may grills

-nice render master!

BUNAKIDDz wrote: cool! ganda ng pagkakarender sir... ayos!.

kieko wrote:wow..

astig to sir..nice design and render..
ganda ng glass.!!!

arkiranz06 wrote:ang ganda ng pagkakarender nito bos ah.,

zromel wrote:wow ayos oh very nice

minor coments:
-for me sir pagtuloy nalang yong bricks (sa gitna second level) sa bandang ibaba
- sa sari sari (first image ) ano diskarte sa roll up kasi may grills

About sa bricks, diskarte yan ng nagparender, may sketch kasi na binigay, sinunod ko lang.
About sa grills may horizontal support na bakal sa taas 2" from the door paloob kabilaan and lower than the door's headroom.

Thanks for dropping by mga sir.

deosrock wrote:-nice render master!

Thanks for dropping by, ikaw ang master sir lakay.

matindi perfect sakin

nice bro...ganda rin.

nakakainlab naman lakay.habang tumatagal tingnan lalong kaibig ibig sa mata.ganda

akoy wrote:matindi perfect sakin

Thanks lakay!

comgrapart wrote:nice bro...ganda rin.

Salamat bro!

theomatheus wrote:nakakainlab naman lakay.habang tumatagal tingnan lalong kaibig ibig sa mata.ganda

Ayos lakay a. Pang chicks yan a. He he.

panalo pagkakabanat mo rito sir!galeng!

ambiance is ok for me... see my comments below
- glass too reflective
- some material issues here; roof too glossy, glass (as mentioned above) metal framing (fix the reflectiveness)
- image is too sharp (its not pleasing IMHO)

thats it for now...

pepedahepe wrote:panalo pagkakabanat mo rito sir!galeng!

Salamat sa pagbisita.

ERICK wrote:ambiance is ok for me... see my comments below
- glass too reflective
- some material issues here; roof too glossy, glass (as mentioned above) metal framing (fix the reflectiveness)
- image is too sharp (its not pleasing IMHO)

thats it for now...

Noted lahat yan sir Erick, thanks for dropping by.

napasobra yung sharpen.. you can lessen this by pressing Ctrl + Shift + F after sharpening in Photoshop. you can adjust the percentage of sharpening.. try it & enjoy..

mokong wrote:napasobra yung sharpen.. you can lessen this by pressing Ctrl + Shift + F after sharpening in Photoshop. you can adjust the percentage of sharpening.. try it & enjoy..

Thanks sir mokong, na try ko na, ayos! Maraming salamat.

ang galing naman ang ganda...nice!

kahit malaki ang mga roof nya sir panalo pa rin sa akin nice job sir

merwin_dc04 wrote:ang galing naman ang ganda...nice!

archshade02 wrote:kahit malaki ang mga roof nya sir panalo pa rin sa akin nice job sir

Salamat at nagustuhan niyo mga sir.

I like it......reminds me of my kapit bahay sa Novaliches.

Great render.

panalo sa akin to sir..ayos lahat..gusto ko lighting..too reflective lang nga ata yung glass imho pero nonetheless astigin sir...galing!

Very nice sir. Medyo oversharp nga ng kaunti. Lighting is good; pasilipin mo ng kaunting kaunti lang yung sun para magkadrama at kaunting shadows na din...

nice render bro..design need some improvements

oks na oks tong bant nyo sir arist!!.. thanks for sharing!!