modern slender two storey residential(w/ update as requested)

hello po cgp pa post ulit .design and render is mine. its my first time na magpost na akin lahat .kasi my prevoius post is may associate.. slender siya kasi ang lot is 3MX12M
done in su+vfsu+pscs3
sana makapsa sa panglasa ng mga masters natin dito
pasensiya na sa sablay
salamat po GOD bless

update (with step and a little bit color changes request by sir phranq salamat po )

road map courtesy of bro vhychenq






DOF(update)






view 1(vraysun+hdri blending)






view 2 (vraysun+hdri blending)





DOF attemp (ewan ko dito kung ok ba ito )

nice render sir zromel.

*elevate mo lang ang main door and provide steps.
*ano po yung sa taas ng 2nd floor? kung roof deck yan, masyadong mababa ang harang.
* siguro laro ka pa ng ibang color scheme.
* dagdag pa post pro para mas gumanda pa ito.

good job & good luck!

mauna na ko tol!
nice design and render!
sa DOF: try different cam angle,nag-iba yung gulong ah!,hehehe at nasobrahan yata ng blur!hehehe,
try ko rin pag aralan yung tuts ni sir erik about DOF pag nagka-time, pag nakuha ko turo ko na lang sayo..

naunahan tuloy ako ni sir phranq.hehehe!bagal ko kasi magtype

phranq wrote:nice render sir zromel.

*elevate mo lang ang main door and provide steps.
*ano po yung sa taas ng 2nd floor? kung roof deck yan, masyadong mababa ang harang.
* siguro laro ka pa ng ibang color scheme.
* dagdag pa post pro para mas gumanda pa ito.

good job & good luck!

maraming salamat po sir pranq(isa sa mga idol ko dito sa cgp)
ang talas ng mata ng master ko yon talaga ang ibig kong sabihin sa sablay ko sa description ko heheheh(steps)
hindi po roofdeck sir .clerestorey po kasi 3x 12 yong lot then firewall na ,para makapasok ang liwanag at hangin sa bandang gitna
color scheme naman sir cge sa update nito ibang scheme naman hehehhe

maraming salamat sa pagdaan master

Designwise & renderwise; this is perfect for me...

Yung step up nga lang...

ok sa akin sir! pero yung door parang ang haba lalo na sa 2nd floor, ganun po ba talaga yun? para sa akin lang naman po yun, the rest ok sa akin. !

vhychenq wrote:mauna na ko tol!
nice design and render!
sa DOF: try different cam angle,nag-iba yung gulong ah!,hehehe at nasobrahan yata ng blur!hehehe,
try ko rin pag aralan yung tuts ni sir erik about DOF pag nagka-time, pag nakuha ko turo ko na lang sayo..

nako salamat bro chen . old version yon kay sir erick ang gamit ko dito vfsu1.48.98. kinapa ko talaga pero di ko maachieve eh ewan ko.heheheh

cloud20 wrote:Designwise & renderwise; this is perfect for me...

Yung step up nga lang...

oi idol master cloud napadaan ka salamat ng marami and its an honor for me .ill try to update it master with step

o.t master ang ganda ng avatar ah

benj.arki wrote:ok sa akin sir! pero yung door parang ang haba lalo na sa 2nd floor, ganun po ba talaga yun? para sa akin lang naman po yun, the rest ok sa akin. !

salamat ng marami sir benj mababa tingnan siya sir kasi nasa eye level ang cam.

nice design! put your cam at eye level lang bro. other comments nasabi na.

Nice! For me, parang naiipit na yung dalawang wall lamp, siguro mas maganda ilipat sa harap (property wall) para mas maluwang naiilawan and add ceiling light. Ok na sana yung third image kaso naging distorted yung building, parang tutumba na di maintindihan, check the verticals.

nice one sir

mez wrote:nice design! put your cam at eye level lang bro. other comments nasabi na.

wow thanks bro mez . naka eye level po ang cam except 3rd image .thanks for dropping.kita kits sa ibang thread

ARIST wrote:Nice! For me, parang naiipit na yung dalawang wall lamp, siguro mas maganda ilipat sa harap (property wall) para mas maluwang naiilawan and add ceiling light. Ok na sana yung third image kaso naging distorted yung building, parang tutumba na di maintindihan, check the verticals.

thanks sir arist noted po sa lamp. sadya po ang 3rd image ni rotate ko yong cam salamat po

akoy wrote:nice one sir

nako sir akoy salamat talaga

salamat mga sir . try ko pa ayusin ang update nito kasi nasira ang file

great work! it's nice to know that it is possible to make Sketchup renders that are comparable to 3DS Max.

maliit man pero napaganda mo sir

burjdubai91 wrote:great work! it's nice to know that it is possible to make Sketchup renders that are comparable to 3DS Max.

thank you very much sir.

theomatheus wrote:maliit man pero napaganda mo sir

salamat bro, oo nga maliit talaga .praktis praktis parin mode parin ako sir salamat sa pagdaan sa thread na ito

may update na po mga masters (idols)
pa c and c parin ulit salamat po

i like this slender type structure, minsan na din akong nagdesign ng ganito and i find it challenging. nice design and render, minor comments, nasabi na na mga masters natin sir romel. again , nice post..

road map ko nga!heheh..birthday gift ko sayo yan ha.hehehe!
Very nice update!keep posting tol! ..
Galing nung DOF sa may bicycle scene!

Galing sir zromel! ayus lahat! puede pahingi ng link nung DOF ni master Erick?heheh...nice bike bro..eherm..heheh.

nice updated sir

thanthan wrote:i like this slender type structure, minsan na din akong nagdesign ng ganito and i find it challenging. nice design and render, minor comments, nasabi na na mga masters natin sir romel. again , nice post..

sir than challenging talaga ,sa second floor may 2 bedroom,mini kitchen,mini dine/living(clerestorey above)

maraming salamt si than

brodger wrote:Galing sir zromel! ayus lahat! puede pahingi ng link nung DOF ni master Erick?heheh...nice bike bro..eherm..heheh.

wow salamat master brodger. sarap mag ride ng bike para ma exercise katawan ko ( kasi palagi nalang 3d)heheheh

vhychenq wrote:road map ko nga!heheh..birthday gift ko sayo yan ha.hehehe!
Very nice update!keep posting tol! ..
Galing nung DOF sa may bicycle scene!

salamat bro sa roadmap, wow maraming thank you sa iyo bro hahaha

na tsambahan yata yong DOF kasi pangalawa ko pa ito

brodger wrote:Galing sir zromel! ayus lahat! puede pahingi ng link nung DOF ni master Erick?heheh...nice bike bro..eherm..heheh.

by the way sir ito po yong link http://www.cgpinoy.org/t2186-dof-tutorial bale old version kay sir erick dito .ang gamit ko vfsu1.48.98 .pero parang walanf effect yong sa version ko ang gamit ko sa DOF ko sir Blur sa p.s

maraming salamt sir