simple contemporary house (ochibi)

mga masters musta? eto na naman ako....
practice practice ulit..... max&vray
pasensya na kayo sa model.....hehe ginawa ko to' nung new year...... c&c

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mauna na ko sir xxdarcxx, i think konting adjust pa sa maps mo, kaunting add ka pa ng backround, mas gusto ko yung image 2 mo pati shadow ok at kaunting arrange pa ng landscape lalo na sa harap....yun lang po and keep on posting----happy new year brod

galing boss,,,,lumilipad ung car...rflction sa glass boss,laruin mo pa..and ung road mat,,pwede pa ma improv..
horizon line nyo rin po...masyadong mataas ung syd walk and overbumpp yata...pareho ba ung bump ng wall and sa walk?.imho,sna nagfocus ka sa structure and hnd sa mga entourage,im not aying na pangit un,,pro nasobrahan yata,,,,pinya ba yan?pkitanggal boss,,,
galing po ng rendering and modeling boss..peace bosing..

3DZONE wrote:mauna na ko sir xxdarcxx, i think konting adjust pa sa maps mo, kaunting add ka pa ng backround, mas gusto ko yung image 2 mo pati shadow ok at kaunting arrange pa ng landscape lalo na sa harap....yun lang po and keep on posting----happy new year brod

salamat po sir.... oo nga... medyo minadali ko kasi gawin to' nagconcentrate lang kasi ako sa lighting... thanks sir sa pagdaan hapi nu yir din!!

jarul wrote:galing boss,,,,lumilipad ung car...rflction sa glass boss,laruin mo pa..and ung road mat,,pwede pa ma improv..
horizon line nyo rin po...masyadong mataas ung syd walk and overbumpp yata...pareho ba ung bump ng wall and sa walk?.imho,sna nagfocus ka sa structure and hnd sa mga entourage,im not aying na pangit un,,pro nasobrahan yata,,,,pinya ba yan?pkitanggal boss,,,
galing po ng rendering and modeling boss..peace bosing..

boss ang galing naman ng mata mo!!!
di ko napansin ung auto lumilipad... yan ang bagong feature ng mercedes benz!!!!hehe
di ko nga po alam kung pano magpalitaw ng reflection eh...kinakapa ko pa...
actually d pa ko nakakita ng nakatanim na pinya... kaya akala ko bulaklak yun eh..hehe
salamat kahit papano nagustuhan nyo rendering
thank you sir sa pagpuna....

oi tol musta ayos to gwa mo ha nsabi n nila e...angas nyan bilis ng rendering time/....post pa

sir! gnda po ng output... same din ang napansin ko sir... comment ko lng sir ung mapping ng concrete medyo malaki yta...

my silent friend... my two cents:
--- tone down ng kaunti sa bump maps... use uvw mapping whenever necessary...
--- be mindful of the details... like they said medyo mataas kerb mo, chamfer mo na rin siguro... details will give added impact over all no matter how minute they are; nakikita ng mata natin yan di lang natin napapansin...
--- fab design... yung garage doors lang ang ayaw ko...
--- lighting definitely rocks... adjust lang ng kaunti sa curves-post processing...

i admire you young ones, imagine nasa school ka palang ganito na gawa mo... keep it up... your group is the new guard to replace the old...
batak yay ni boi bilib ku talaga...

sir everything looks out of scale

kawpaitek wrote:sir everything looks out of scale

sir for me hindi naman out of scale,,, can u elaborate dat?

bro nice render again,,, nasabi na lahat mga comment bro,,, basta lagi lng praktis,,, nice lighting n modelling,,, keep it up bro!!!

sir... this is a great practice... detailed comments have been said...
hmmmm.... maybe more activities sa iyong building nlang... para mabuhay ang scene.. and focus mo ung building sir... let's keep on practicing... dami mga masters dito... they are more than willing to help...

Noel_Diaz wrote:

kawpaitek wrote:sir everything looks out of scale

sir for me hindi naman out of scale,,, can u elaborate dat?

bro nice render again,,, nasabi na lahat mga comment bro,,, basta lagi lng praktis,,, nice lighting n modelling,,, keep it up bro!!!

sorry hindi ko na point out yung mga nakita ko wala sa scale kanina, pero to further elaborate:

1. the foreground
- (same as the previous post) the road curb seems a bit high.
- grass looks more like a bush to me (not really sure if its actually a grass, hindi ako sure kung tama yung paka interpret ko.)
- texture of the bump seems a bit harsh at malalaki kaya mukang wala sa scale.

2. the focal point (structure)
- see the main door compare the scale with the garage door parang mas malaki ata yung main door.
- scale ng car vs the garage door size parang may mali din.


imho ko lang po to. hindi ko binabaril yung overall desing ng stucture a, if its really meant to be that way so be it. overall i think the design is great! just the presentation of some of the elements seems out of scale.

konting adjust lang sir sa mga texture maps mo, but rendering and lighting wise its fine for me.......keep on tweaking and post more.....God Bless

xxdarcxx wrote:mga masters musta? eto na naman ako....
practice practice ulit..... max&vray
pasensya na kayo sa model.....hehe ginawa ko to' nung new year...... c&c

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nice work pre!, dyan ba nakatira si shider? o si jiban?, hehe my character ang mga design mo hah darc,pre medyo na burn lang ata yung diffuse mo sa second image

2. the focal point (structure)
- see the main door compare the scale with the garage door parang mas malaki ata yung main door.
- scale ng car vs the garage door size parang may mali din.


imho ko lang po to. hindi ko binabaril yung overall desing ng stucture a, if its really meant to be that way so be it. overall i think the design is great! just the presentation of some of the elements seems out of scale.

---kawpaitek

--- usually door sizes in modern houses tend to be oversized, for max effect... you failed to notice that there are steps leading to the main entrance, hence, making the main door higher than the garage door... car scale versus garage door? i bet sir xxx measured that car to real world specs; the car is nearest the cam thats why it looks "big"... i'm not rescuing sir xxx, on the contrary he needs these kinds of crits to better his output... just couldn't let it pass...

arki_vhin wrote:oi tol musta ayos to gwa mo ha nsabi n nila e...angas nyan bilis ng rendering time/....post pa

thanks sir sa pagdaan .... dati kasi ang bagal ng rendertime ko umaabot ng limang oras... kaya pinractice ko talaga pabilisin...hehe.. salamat

reggie0711 wrote:sir! gnda po ng output... same din ang napansin ko sir... comment ko lng sir ung mapping ng concrete medyo malaki yta...

thank you rin po sir... oo nga po sir... next tym improve ko mapping ko... salamat sa pagdaan

cloud20 wrote:my silent friend... my two cents:
--- tone down ng kaunti sa bump maps... use uvw mapping whenever necessary...
--- be mindful of the details... like they said medyo mataas kerb mo, chamfer mo na rin siguro... details will give added impact over all no matter how minute they are; nakikita ng mata natin yan di lang natin napapansin...
--- fab design... yung garage doors lang ang ayaw ko...
--- lighting definitely rocks... adjust lang ng kaunti sa curves-post processing...

i admire you young ones, imagine nasa school ka palang ganito na gawa mo... keep it up... your group is the new guard to replace the old...
batak yay ni boi bilib ku talaga...

thanks master cloud... ito ang hinihintay ko... super thank you sa mga crits...
next time mag iimprove pa!!!!!! noted lahat iyan...

kawpaitek wrote:sir everything looks out of scale

yes sir medyo hindi nga proportional... medyo cartoony..hehe..
pero sa su2nod promise improve ko yan.... thank you boss

Noel_Diaz wrote:bro nice render again,,, nasabi na lahat mga comment bro,,, basta lagi lng praktis,,, nice lighting n modelling,,, keep it up bro!!!

thanks boss noel!!! gagawin ko yan idol!! salamat sa pagbisita

vamp_lestat wrote:sir... this is a great practice... detailed comments have been said...
hmmmm.... maybe more activities sa iyong building nlang... para mabuhay ang scene.. and focus mo ung building sir... let's keep on practicing... dami mga masters dito... they are more than willing to help...

sir vamp thank you... salamat sa crit... noted yan thanks thanks

ytsejeffx wrote:konting adjust lang sir sa mga texture maps mo, but rendering and lighting wise its fine for me.......keep on tweaking and post more.....God Bless

thank you rin sir ytsejeffx(hirap din nito)... noted din po yan.. salamat

namby_pamby wrote:nice work pre!, dyan ba nakatira si shider? o si jiban?, hehe my character ang mga design mo hah darc,pre medyo na burn lang ata yung diffuse mo sa second image

salamat par! si doraemon ung nakatira dyan..hehe thanks!!!!!!

good job bro,same comments sa mga masters yung mapping lang sa road adjust lng,but then again be proud,buti ka pa nagvvray na,me starting p lang post pa sir!

learn from the masters itself,indulge mo yung sinabi ni sir cloud

cheers!!

qui gon wrote:good job bro,same comments sa mga masters yung mapping lang sa road adjust lng,but then again be proud,buti ka pa nagvvray na,me starting p lang post pa sir!

learn from the masters itself,indulge mo yung sinabi ni sir cloud

cheers!!

thank sir qui
oo nga thanks sa kanila.. at marami tayo natu2tunan...
bago lang rin ako sa vray... dito lang ako halos natuto... ikaw rin sir.. sigurado agad ka rin matututo... tambay lang po tayo lagi dito...hehe
thanks sa pagdalaw!!!

at good luck sa vray... kaya mo yan!!!

Darcck**** galing mo boi .. naproject kuna buhay mo gamit ang "mahiwagang time machine " eh ayus nato pra sau ..minor comments lang bro , foreground ttsaka road ..rendering is ok... ahah namunga ung srhubs ng pinya ehe . oo much bump sa road gutter Ayus pagpatuluy mu yan pre ..

wow.. pang kakaiba ka tlga... kapit bahay to nung isa mo png gawa...
hehehe... sa akin lng yung sasakyan lumulutng yun lng rest ok nmn..
hehehe

Jay2x wrote:Darcck**** galing mo boi .. naproject kuna buhay mo gamit ang "mahiwagang time machine " eh ayus nato pra sau ..minor comments lang bro , foreground ttsaka road ..rendering is ok... ahah namunga ung srhubs ng pinya ehe . oo much bump sa road gutter Ayus pagpatuluy mu yan pre ..

thank you idol!!! crits noted... salamat s pagdalaw...
nireready ko na nga ung next post ku eh....hehe

ice wrote:wow.. pang kakaiba ka tlga... kapit bahay to nung isa mo png gawa...
hehehe... sa akin lng yung sasakyan lumulutng yun lng rest ok nmn..
hehehe

syempre back up ko si doraemon!!!!hehe
oo nga di ko napansin ung kotse...
kapilan mu ku turu kareng tekniks mu?? thank yu bossing