4th Post 6th Practice 2 storey Modern Contemporary

Mga sir,
latest work ko din practice parin. design by me.
work flow. Autocad > SU > 3dsmaxVray > PS
render time : 50mins 43 sec.

c & C are high appreciated.
Thanks and More power CgP's mabuhay.

this is better than your previous posts.
*check the verticals
*remove mo na lang ang house(right).
*masyadong mataas ang elevation ng main door.
*huwag mong takpan ang structure (IMHO).

nice improvement. congrats & goodluck.

Thanks Phrang. it really helps...=D
1.) hindi ko po sinunod ung vertical sa susunod na works susundin ko na po
2.) un house sa right actual pics po yan dating bahay nila pero nganun cguro ipaparent na nila so talagang na jan yan may about 2.00M ang setback mula proposed house
3.) sa picture na main door? kasi natakpan nang column ang main door ko.
4.) xenxa na po akala ko kasi dagdag realistic nag expermento lang po.

and Thank you po sa Comments its very helpful po.

p.s. ano ung IMHO.
xenxa nah newbie pa talaga

blink_tonie wrote:

p.s. ano ung IMHO.
xenxa nah newbie pa talaga

In My Humble/Honest Opinion

blink_tonie wrote:
xenxa nah newbie pa talaga

please read the forum rules and apply it.
enjoy your stay here, marami kang mapupulot dito.

btw it's phranq.

nice one.
i like the reflection of your glass.
what gamit mo na settings sa glass mo sir?
mas maganda if tinangal mo na yung puno sa harap right side para makita yung buong bahay
-concept i like it
-dapat lagi pakita main door para yung client hindi malito.

over all good job

nice 87%

nice render. wag kang maxadong magDOF sa foreground kasi d maintindihan ng client.

konting tweak na lang ito sir...tambay lang po dito..by the help of our master's and co-CGP's...madami tayo matutunan dito.

nice design & render sir,,,nasabi naman nila lahat ng medjo aayusin,,,comment ko nalang siguro ay ung ventilators sa ceiling sir,,,mas maganda siguro kong my bump o kaya minodel niyo nalang sir,,,suggestion ko lng naman,,the rest,ayus na ayus sir,,,
galing,,,,thanks for sharing ang keep posting sir,,,

Good job na! If you're using vray cam, press mo yung gues vertical sa vray cam settings. Kung normal camera naman, right click mo then hanapin mo yung camera correction dun sa upper left side.

Thanks mga masters try ko apply lahat nang advises ninu sa mga next project ko practice parin pero totoong project nah =D dami ko pah talagang dapat matotonan. hehe
More power cgp's and God bless us all

ayos ang lighting sir! welcome to cgp!

nice render bro and welcome to cgp...

oking ok sir..ganda ng render and concept..sir.san ba me makakadownload ng mga car and puno??naman ng puno?hehehe...tanx cgp's.

ayos ang pagka render mo bro. pwedi maka hingi ng punong kahoy mo bro? email: cito_rjr@yahoo.com thanks.

sir ask kulang po kung ano ang SU sabihin...tanx..

for me,this is really a good job..welcome to CGP

arkirein wrote:nice render. wag kang maxadong magDOF sa foreground kasi d maintindihan ng client.

+1 ako dito. nice design and render sir. tfs!