[first office work] Bohol Vacation House - MRay

my first office work.. (",) (part time in my prof's firm)

i was assigned to do the exterior of the proposed 2-story vacation house..

as for the project, this is my first time to render for an office work.. as for the past, i was only assigned to do details and cadd encoding.. my prof decided to give me the opportunity to do the perspective thing.. (",) (as in the past, his wife does the rendering)

these were the early days using mental ray and 3ds Max for me,. (in the learning process)
fond of using RPCs that time.. haha..

as always, comments and suggestions are welcome.. ^_^;

CADD model - 3ds Max - mental ray - CS3

GODBLESS



trying for an "afternoon mood" (",)

sir... mauuna na po ako..

if this is an old project, ok po toh sir... galing ng mental ray ninyo sir..
for improvements lang.. imho... the background seems too eyecatching...
camera correction sir... some polys are edgy. try to look at the curves. maybe improve the entourage..
building modeling is very good sir... let's wait for the masters here... more2x... post more... HAPPY NEW YEAR.

Astig ang rendering. parang napasobra lang ang diffuse glow. but i must say excellent render. just couple of cents. I noticed a faceted curve on the arch, and the plants repetition are noticeable. so ikot lang siguro ng kaunti yung iba at i vary yung scale.

Sir,
Very nice render on mray. IMHO lang on the ground material you've used. Baka pwedeng palitan lang kasi nagmumukhang carpet ito. Anyway it is an old project. Baka this time eh tapos na yan. Keep on posting more of mray. Happy new year.

vamp_lestat wrote:sir... mauuna na po ako..

if this is an old project, ok po toh sir... galing ng mental ray ninyo sir..
for improvements lang.. imho... the background seems too eyecatching...
camera correction sir... some polys are edgy. try to look at the curves. maybe improve the entourage..
building modeling is very good sir... let's wait for the masters here... more2x... post more... HAPPY NEW YEAR.

about the background, it came from the vista wallpapers.. (",) natuwa lang ako,, haha..

as for the entourage, it was all rpc that time., haven't tried using actual tree models,, masyado kcng mabigat sa 3ds., pero sa ngaun, may mental ray proxy na..

nomeradona wrote:Astig ang rendering. parang napasobra lang ang diffuse glow. but i must say excellent render. just couple of cents. I noticed a faceted curve on the arch, and the plants repetition are noticeable. so ikot lang siguro ng kaunti yung iba at i vary yung scale.

thanks sir.,

i'll take note of the diffuse glow., thanks for the tip regarding the plants..

about the faceted curve in the arch., pno po ba mag-import ng curve sa max (from cadd) retaining the arc shape..

pansin ko rin kc, every time na mag-import ako ng curve/spline from cadd to max, nagba2go ung arc..

thanks..

aldrinv2 wrote:Sir,
Very nice render on mray. IMHO lang on the ground material you've used. Baka pwedeng palitan lang kasi nagmumukhang carpet ito. Anyway it is an old project. Baka this time eh tapos na yan. Keep on posting more of mray. Happy new year.

thanks sir., yup, this is an old project, i guess last 4 months pa., and at this time, proposal pa rin..

nagkaproblema kc ung client that time.,

tedgm25 wrote:

nomeradona wrote:Astig ang rendering. parang napasobra lang ang diffuse glow. but i must say excellent render. just couple of cents. I noticed a faceted curve on the arch, and the plants repetition are noticeable. so ikot lang siguro ng kaunti yung iba at i vary yung scale.

thanks sir.,

i'll take note of the diffuse glow., thanks for the tip regarding the plants..

about the faceted curve in the arch., pno po ba mag-import ng curve sa max (from cadd) retaining the arc shape..

pansin ko rin kc, every time na mag-import ako ng curve/spline from cadd to max, nagba2go ung arc..

thanks..

alam ko sa cad mayroong facetres yata na pwde mong dagdagan yung yung number of facets. tgal ko na kasing hindi nag 3d sa cad. kasi lumipat ako ng SU mas madli kasing mag3d dun mas mabilis.

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keep posting more works

ok ang rendering mo sa MRay......post more!

sa mental ray din ako nagtagal b4 ako nag vray.. cam adjustments and mababa interpolation mo bro kaya segmented ,kung galing sa cad taasan mo ang arc and circle smoothness muna b4 dalhin mo sa max ...pihitin mo pa kunti settings mo sa mental ray ... pero ok na nga ito ehh ...mahuhuli din yan...post more..

agree with all the comments so far...

are you using A&D Materials? Make sure you're using those when rendering with mr. The A&D Material has a lot of really neat features that lets you adjust your reflections, add rounded corners, and ambient occlussion. It's optimized for mr.

If you have any questions about it, pm me.

Good job!

gumamit po ba kayu ng mr glow ? ayus n effect and contrast of maps

para po ma improve nman and interesting ung design .try not a symetrical design w/c gives more features of forms.

un muna po sana mas gumaling po kayu

ok n skin to..improve entourage nlang bro..keep it up

sir cad model po ba i2?..set mo po s cad ung isolines,facetres, at dispsilh..para pag import s 3dsmax mas defined ang pagkacurved nya... nice rendering sir...post more sir...

3dpjumong2007 wrote:sa mental ray din ako nagtagal b4 ako nag vray.. cam adjustments and mababa interpolation mo bro kaya segmented ,kung galing sa cad taasan mo ang arc and circle smoothness muna b4 dalhin mo sa max ...pihitin mo pa kunti settings mo sa mental ray ... pero ok na nga ito ehh ...mahuhuli din yan...post more..

thanks sir jumong., na-solve ko na ung issue concerning segmented arcs.,

taasan nga lang ung settings sa cadd tpos mag-add ng smooth modifier sa max..

AJ Cortez wrote:agree with all the comments so far...

are you using A&D Materials? Make sure you're using those when rendering with mr. The A&D Material has a lot of really neat features that lets you adjust your reflections, add rounded corners, and ambient occlussion. It's optimized for mr.

If you have any questions about it, pm me.

Good job!

yup2., all of the materials used are A&D., been experimenting on ProMat lately., (",) may built-in AO rin., haha..

thanks sir., sure do., try ko mag-pm sometime., (",)

Jay2x wrote:gumamit po ba kayu ng mr glow ? ayus n effect and contrast of maps

para po ma improve nman and interesting ung design .try not a symetrical design w/c gives more features of forms.

un muna po sana mas gumaling po kayu

thanks sir., ung glow effect sa pshop ko lang ginawa.,

3d model and render lang po skn., hehe..

ung prof ko po ung nag-design., conceptual design for client's approval.,

raven wrote:sir cad model po ba i2?..set mo po s cad ung isolines,facetres, at dispsilh..para pag import s 3dsmax mas defined ang pagkacurved nya... nice rendering sir...post more sir...

thanks sir.,

gnun nga po, adjust lang sa isolines pra mas maging defined ung arcs.,

binasa ko rin ung manual sa microcadd,. naalala ko na., hehe.. (",)

thanks po ulit..

nice work in mray render sir,,, medyo halata lng ung mga segments sa window mgset poh kayo ng preset file link manager sir maayos po yan,,, keep it up sir,,,