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Post by framebuffer Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:37 am

Pa post lang uli mga cg's brother and master's
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Post by jhero Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:52 am

hmmm look nice for me. lighting is ok medyo marami lang dark eh! imho lang
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Post by kurdaps! Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:57 am

Nice render. Few pointers:

1. Scene is too dark however the background is broad daylight, you can lighten it by post-process.

2. I would stretch more/farther the camera to have a clear angle. The view seems cut otherwise find a good spot to have a full view of the room. here, the furniture arrangement is confusing.

3. Chandelier is too low or just the angle of the camera.

4. Accents on the tables are all the same, add some flowers or photo frames maybe.

5. Carpet texture is stretched.

6. Add curtain, this is important.

Show us some updates. Wink
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Post by framebuffer Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:04 am

thanks and all your comments are noted sir
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