apartment

pa post ulit mga master.. practice lng po.. pacomment na lang mga sir for improvement. thanks[img] [/img]

-parang naka focus lang ang camera mo sa sasakyan at bike
-try mo e view na kita naman lahat ang building mo.

Kung sa rendering lang na gusto mo ipakita ang kotse at bike ok ito. Pero kung architectural visualization ang gusto mong gawin, this is a failure.

1. Alin sa mga objects ang highlighted, kailangan mo ng focus or focal point. kotse ba? or bike ba? or yung background na bahay?
2. Pwedeng ihambing itong render sa isang bading, kung baga confused pa sya sa kasarian nya.
3. In doing a render, dapat clear ang intentions mo, dun kasi ang success ng communication. I suggest you don't post something like this sa 3d gallery but sa work in progress or practice dapat.
4. Be clear in what you want, or you will forever confuse your audience. I hope you get it or kahit points from my comment.

thanks sa pagdaan mga master.. yun rendering lng nya po ang gusto kong ipkita sa mga master

noted po yan sir bokks

I'll have to agree with Bokkin's view ( except for the bading stuff which sounded a bit homophobic)...
But looking at the image, much of the apartment itself is bathed in light and the rest (bike, car) cast in shadows which brings the focus to the subject itself. Kinda? Anyhooooo that's a bit tricky to pull off all the time so might as well go with proper composition next time.

Good work...
You pass (for me) this time...

Tama jun, ayusin mo muna ito, you can update or edit the title as well kung practice render lang.

for me mas magiging ok to if may depth of field..
either yung malayo yung gusto mo e focus then blur ng konti ang bike at car, or vice versa..
Godbless

--comments, nasabi na..sundin mo nalang..
---add ko lang, ipantay mo nalang yung height ng window mo sa door..

Agree with all the comments.

ayos nmn ng design lakay...kaso dapat hindi apartment ang title nito... happy new year

sensya na po mga master.. thanks sa pagdaan

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sir jun happy new year po. for me sana kita po yung design ng buong appartment po. other view nlang sir jun.
over all approve po
godbless po
more power cgp