One Storey-American inspired house(with UPDATES)

Happy New Year to All! i want to share my last work for this year!My design and render.C and C's are always welcome!SKetchupPro8-V-ray 1.48.89-CS5


Update with the sun upfront


View 1 (update without fence,moved the sun a bit higher)


View 2 (updated without fence)

View 3 (update sa loob papasok ng porch)


View 4 ( with fence raw image )

View 5 ( raw model )

Hello Sir comment ko lang
-2nd image something wrong of your roof materials
-Frankly speaking sir i like the lighting and the materials but the scene or your main subject the house na tabunan sa fence mo. most of the attention will go the fence. sayang may water features ka sa loob and the design ng house hindi ko na appreciate natabunan sa fence. -masyadong malaki yung rectangular tube sa fence.
-try to make same scene na walang fence.

Try mo kaya Sir i-render without the fence, naka-blocked siya sa design the house.

Nice rendering by the way. at happy new year din.

lowellflores wrote:Hello Sir comment ko lang
-2nd image something wrong of your roof materials
-Frankly speaking sir i like the lighting and the materials but the scene or your main subject the house na tabunan sa fence mo. most of the attention will go the fence. sayang may water features ka sa loob and the design ng house hindi ko na appreciate natabunan sa fence. -masyadong malaki yung rectangular tube sa fence.
-try to make same scene na walang fence.

yung gutter yata yung nakita niyo sir kasi akala ko may something wrong din sa scene.hehehe
thanks sir nagustuhan niyo.hehehe,noted po lahat ng comment and i will update this asap kasi magbabagong taon na!

kurdaps! wrote:Try mo kaya Sir i-render without the fence, naka-blocked siya sa design the house.

Nice rendering by the way. at happy new year din.

gawin ko sir salamat po

Looks very good... Try it with the sun upfront...

cloud20 wrote:Looks very good... Try it with the sun upfront...

thank you sir.Ok po sir update ko na rin to na nasa may bandang harap ang sun

just added some updated images.@sir cloud pahabol ko na lang po next time yung suggestion mo,baka bukas po nakapost na.salamat po ulit

Malapit na. Keep at it.

logikpixel wrote:Malapit na. Keep at it.

Thanks sir!

flowing water and the birds love it . very nice render bro chen

zromel wrote:flowing water and the birds love it . very nice render bro chen

thanks bro! woah!new avatar!

mas american ang dating pag walang fence

yaug_03 wrote:mas american ang dating pag walang fence

thanks sir sa pagdaan!

Nice work, randomize mo yung ibang shrub to make it more realistic, scale and rotate.

1st image looks great...keep it up bro!

nice chen..gumagaling lalo..keep posting!!!

ARIST wrote:Nice work, randomize mo yung ibang shrub to make it more realistic, scale and rotate.

vonlorena wrote:1st image looks great...keep it up bro!

lei23 wrote:nice chen..gumagaling lalo..keep posting!!!

@ sir Arist!noted po sir!thanks for dropping by
@ sir vonlorena! Thank you po sir!
@ kuya Menel! Salamat kuya!keep Posting ka rin dito wala ka ng new post!hehehe.busy sa thesis!
Godbless po sainyo!