OFFICIAL TAMBAYAN

Hello mga ka-CGP... post ko lang po tong praktis ko sa vray... hopefully magustuhan nyo...
WF: 3ds max 2009+Vray+PS



C&C always welcome....

is this a WIP?

you have a good concept. execution needs to be more thoughtful.

- lighting everywhere. no traces of shadow. looks to me this tambayan. i want to see this with dramatic lighting, with contrast, shadows etc.

- needs to consider in using bumps, dirt... super linis ang silya and bricks. perhaps some molds especially between the floor and wall.

- you need to remodel the hollow blocks, bench, columns, they have really some sharp edges.

- if you are using spray paint. hindi sya ganun ka opaque. parang nag spray ka sa 2d picture. If you are using Photoshop, play on blending modes para magblend yung graffitti letters sa wall surface.

nevertheless the concept is there and it has the potential to become really a good one. so i encourage you to keep on learning and try to use my crits as positive feedback.

nomeradona wrote:is this a WIP?

you have a good concept. execution needs to be more thoughtful.

- lighting everywhere. no traces of shadow. looks to me this tambayan. i want to see this with dramatic lighting, with contrast, shadows etc.

- needs to consider in using bumps, dirt... super linis ang silya and bricks. perhaps some molds especially between the floor and wall.

- you need to remodel the hollow blocks, bench, columns, they have really some sharp edges.

- if you are using spray paint. hindi sya ganun ka opaque. parang nag spray ka sa 2d picture. If you are using Photoshop, play on blending modes para magblend yung graffitti letters sa wall surface.

nevertheless the concept is there and it has the potential to become really a good one. so i encourage you to keep on learning and try to use my crits as positive feedback.

that was a good crits sir... thanks for dropping by... may i, what WIP stand for?

cheers...

WIP---Work In Progress...nice concept sir...keep sharing po...

Mr_Sketchy wrote:WIP---Work In Progress...nice concept sir...keep sharing po...

thanks bro for dropping by... now i knew it...

cheers...