Car Show Bldg. (added view)

Hi mga sir and maam, share kolang itong gawa ko. Pa C & C nalang mga ka cgp.. Thanks in advance!
Work flow : 3dmax 2009 & vray + ps



added view

heres my comment and concern sir

-plant box looks like wood and
-curve chamfer sa plant box
-ramp and railing sa heading to vestibule
-saan po papasok ang car para i display and show more cars
-emphasize entrance pa siguro sir

nice render

looks nice naman sir, if you can give us another view sana, parang too small lang ng building sana may closeup look din ... you may add some sort of a canopy above the main door din sir, baka mabasa kasi kapag umulan,

zromel wrote:heres my comment and concern sir

-plant box looks like wood and
-curve chamfer sa plant box
-ramp and railing sa heading to vestibule
-saan po papasok ang car para i display and show more cars
-emphasize entrance pa siguro sir

nice render

sa plant box bro ayusin ko nalang texture nya, sa likod yung pasukan ng sasakyan bro, 16mx59m yung bldg. w/ mezzanine, thanks sa pag daan..

ArchFEWs2 wrote:looks nice naman sir, if you can give us another view sana, parang too small lang ng building sana may closeup look din ... you may add some sort of a canopy above the main door din sir, baka mabasa kasi kapag umulan,

yung unang design nyan sir merong porch w/ canopy, dito kasi sa saudi itatayu yan hindi sila masyadong worried sa ulan kaya pinatangal ng boss ko, thank you sir

closer view pa sana sir, mabawasan pa sana yung reflection para kita yung loob.. hintay ko update nyo sir

kibikibu wrote:

ArchFEWs2 wrote:looks nice naman sir, if you can give us another view sana, parang too small lang ng building sana may closeup look din ... you may add some sort of a canopy above the main door din sir, baka mabasa kasi kapag umulan,

yung unang design nyan sir merong porch w/ canopy, dito kasi sa saudi itatayu yan hindi sila masyadong worried sa ulan kaya pinatangal ng boss ko, thank you sir

ah kaya pala, noted sir

mEejan wrote:closer view pa sana sir, mabawasan pa sana yung reflection para kita yung loob.. hintay ko update nyo sir

ok sir, update ko sabay ng revision ni boss,, thanks..

oi..layo na ng mga banat's mo bro! nawala lang ako sandali humataw ka na! request fo more view pa nga,weheheh..Good luck bro!Godbless us all!

brodger wrote:oi..layo na ng mga banat's mo bro! nawala lang ako sandali humataw ka na! request fo more view pa nga,weheheh..Good luck bro!Godbless us all!

sir musta, ngaun nga lang ako naka pag post ulit my 3rd post hehe, try ko sir gumawa pa ng ibang view pag me pina bago na si boss para isang edit nalang hehe,, thanks sa pag daan sir..

almost everything looks fine to me ..looks so simple but still elegant i undersdand di ka masyadong makapagdecide sa design becouse of the boss around... just comments put something more sa interior, i only see 2 cars..... maybe.... add people ...yung building sa likod ba nito ganun talaga meron dun?????..for me nakakadestruct ng attention.. that background building looks too ugly for advertisement of showroom put something more simple...

arch_mirasol wrote:almost everything looks fine to me ..looks so simple but still elegant i undersdand di ka masyadong makapagdecide sa design becouse of the boss around... just comments put something more sa interior, i only see 2 cars..... maybe.... add people ...yung building sa likod ba nito ganun talaga meron dun?????..for me nakakadestruct ng attention.. that background building looks too ugly for advertisement of showroom put something more simple...

thank you sir sa comment, yung sa bldg sa likod ala lang yun.. palitan ko nalang sir instead na sa likod gawa ako model na katabi nalang, as you notice sir yung car dalawang klase lang ... ala pa kasi kong ibang car.. hanap pako hehe..

add kolang sir itong isang view thanks..

classic+modern? nice render though

bench wrote:classic+modern? nice render though

sir saan ka sa saudi? aim ko sa design sir is modern, mukha ba sir nag mix.. thanks sir sa pag daan

Ayos yung update dre yung design pangmainit na lugar talaga..hehehee, kunti nalang dre makukuha mo na medyo saturated pa PS nalang kaya na ito. keep it up

comgrapart wrote:Ayos yung update dre yung design pangmainit na lugar talaga..hehehee, kunti nalang dre makukuha mo na medyo saturated pa PS nalang kaya na ito. keep it up

thank you bro.. sana maka dali nako ng ayos hehe...

ayos tol, ilang press na lng nga f9 makakabisado mo din ito.

canopy plants lang siguro..or try putting some palm trees sa environment para mag mukang nasa saudi,, bro then,,try to neutralized your sun's intensity,,,nawawala kasi yung dating ng materials.then lower your saturation..yun lang para sakin,,,keep on posting bro

kibikibu wrote:

bench wrote:classic+modern? nice render though

sir saan ka sa saudi? aim ko sa design sir is modern, mukha ba sir nag mix.. thanks sir sa pag daan

it's a treand in saudi na mapaghalo ang classical and modern,,,

maganada ang view nato master, comment ko lang:
better map sa floortile at better foliage pa sana para lalo gumanda ang whole composition.

pedio84 wrote:ayos tol, ilang press na lng nga f9 makakabisado mo din ito.

master pedz salamat sa pag daan, yan ang kailangan sir damihan ang pag press sa f9,, hehe

canopy plants lang siguro..or try putting some palm trees sa environment para mag mukang nasa saudi,, bro then,,try to neutralized your sun's intensity,,,nawawala kasi yung dating ng materials.then lower your saturation..yun lang para sakin,,,keep on posting bro

master muggz musta? try ko suggest ke boss yang canopy kasi nung unang design nyan meron canopy pinatanggal nya, , ok bro babaan kopa intensity ng sun, saka medyo nasobrahan sa overlay sa ps, thanks sa comment bro..

Muggz wrote:

kibikibu wrote:

bench wrote:classic+modern? nice render though

sir saan ka sa saudi? aim ko sa design sir is modern, mukha ba sir nag mix.. thanks sir sa pag daan

it's a treand in saudi na mapaghalo ang classical and modern,,,

yup bro parang ganun na nga,

qnald wrote:maganada ang view nato master, comment ko lang:
better map sa floortile at better foliage pa sana para lalo gumanda ang whole composition.

sir thanks sa pag comment,thanks sir nagustuhan mo yung view, ok sir pag pina revise ni sir yan hanap ako ng ok na map, foliage sir try ko din palitan,,

nice.